You did a great job with this poem. I've tried a Ghazal before and they're not easy to do well, but I thought the imagery and the structure in this piece was excellent. It was a quick, evocative read.

No specific suggestions for improvement.

Overall, I really enjoyed this poem. Well done!

I thought you did a great job with the prompt. The poem was clear, fully explored the prompt, was well-structured, and engaging to read. Nice work!

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Overall, this was an entertaining read that flowed really nicely. Well done!

I like the twist at the end of this story. It was a perfect structure of a flash fiction tale, with a concise setup and payoff and a good use of what I assume from the bolded text was the prompt for the story.

No specific suggestions for improvement.

Overall, this was an entertaining read. Nice work!

I really liked the structure and the imagery in this piece. The language was elegant and sophisticated, and you did a great job of making the content accessible to the reader.

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Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!

The premise of two witches answering the door for trick or treaters on Halloween was a great idea. I thought both Carvelle and Marvelle were interesting characters and their duel was fun to follow along with.

The ending felt just the slightest bit abrupt, without a lot of detail or information about how the duel was resolved. It would have been great to have some additional context for what happened.

Overall, this was an enjoyable story. Nice work!

The structure and imagery of this poem were excellent. I thought you did a good job writing a piece that was engaging, and interesting. Well done!

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Overall, I thought you did a good job with this poem. It was a quick, compelling read.

I like the fact that you attempted so many different types of imagery to compare clouds to. The wide variety of visuals essentially ensures that any reader will understand the reference in at least one case.

Some of those references didn't quite connect for me. I'm not entirely sure how to visualize a cloud "moving like a dinosaur" (other than both being large), but I got lost again at the word "fiery." Similarly, a cloud "standing tall and stomping its rain [like Bigfoot]" was just a little too far afield of my experience to really connect the dots.

Overall, I enjoyed the brevity and the details in this piece. Good effort!

I thought you did a great job with this poem. The image adds a lot of nuance and additional impact but even without it, the poem was well-structured, evocative, and easy to read. Well done!

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Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. Nice work!

I really enjoyed this poem. 24 syllables is not a lot of space to compose a compelling poem, but you did a great job and made it seem easy. Well done!

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Overall, this piece was short, to the point, and effective. Nice work!

I enjoyed this story, particularly the premise. I thought it was clever to have two people share the same imaginary friend (or maybe not so imaginary? ), and the fact that they ended up married for decades was an endearing detail.

The transition from the main scene (an eight-year-old Jason interacting with Carbo) to the epilogue (Carbo moving on to Celia, Celia and Jason meeting and getting married and spending 45 years married) seemed to be really abrupt and there wasn't much detail in that last part which spanned decades. It would have been great to have spent a little more time exploring the aftermath of Carbo leaving Jason for Celia.

Overall, I think you're off to a good start with this piece. The premise was excellent and there's a lot of potential here. Well done!

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a good job with the imagery and the structure of the piece, which created an easy, flowing read. It was an emotional, effective poem. Nice job!

Some of the lines were very short and broken at odd places; if you were to revisit this piece, it might be worth playing around with the line structure to see if it can be optimized a bit.

Overall, this was a great read. Nice work!

I enjoyed the unique point of view of this story. I don't think I've ever read something told from the perspective of a dinosaur before, so the novelty level of this item was high and the entertainment value carried through the entire piece. Nice work!

For me, there was a little too much "telling," where the Tyrannosaurus is just explaining what happened passively to the reader. I would have loved to have seen a little more dynamic storytelling from the dinosaur's perspective.

Overall, I enjoyed this story and thought it was a fun read. Well done!

I enjoyed reading this piece. The relationship between the narrator and their writing interface was well depicted and engaging. I definitely felt the narrator's plight as they consider embarking on a writing effort.

No specific suggestions for improvement.

Overall, this was an entertaining read. Well done!

The imagery in this poem was excellent. With the benefit of the image to go along with the description, it painted a vibrant, clear picture of what you were describing. Nice work!

I don't have any specific suggestions for improvement.

Overall, this piece was an enjoyable read. Well done!

I thought you did a great job with this poem. The Villanelle form was an effective one, and I like the fact that you doubled it up to create more context and structure. Well done!

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Overall, I really enjoyed reading this. Nice work!

I thought you did a really good job with this poem. The rhyme scheme was easy to follow, and the imagery was excellent. Nice work!

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Overall, I really enjoyed the read and thought you did a very good job. Well done!

I really liked the message of this poem. Each stanza was well-written and evocative, leading to a thought-provoking piece. Well done!

It felt like some of the line breaks made the read a bit rough; I'm curious as to the intentionality of putting the breaks where they were. I found myself wondering if the piece would flow a little better if the lines were condensed to break at natural punctuation points. For example:

Don't worry about tomorrow,
for it has not yet arrived.

Don't worry about yesterday,
for it is but a past memory.

Worry only about "The Moment,"
because that's where real time exists.

Overall, I very much enjoyed the read. Nice work!