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Review of LeFou  
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello ridinghhood-p.boutilier

I'm sending this review in connection with "I Write: Enter the Second Decade" .

*Penv* Overall
I enjoyed reading this piece, particularly because I'm not too familiar with the specifics of tarot decks, so it was fun to learn about some of the different cards and their imagery. I didn't even realize that there was a such thing as Children's Tarot! This item was clearly laid out, concise, and provided a lot of information with an entertaining, friendly approach. All in all, it was a quick, enjoyable read and I learned a little something in the process. *Smile*

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Review of Old Saws  
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Richard ~ Shenanigans INC.

I'm sending this review in connection with "I Write: Enter the Second Decade" .

*Penv* Overall
I really enjoyed this piece. I thought the double-rhymed lines made it flow really well, the use of red text to highlight the three "old saws" was a great way to make them stand out, and your ending was both thought-provoking and entertaining. It was concise and engaging.

I'm not familiar with the "EXPRESS IT IN EIGHT"  activity, but this seems like it was a fun prompt and you had a great take on it. Looking forward to crossing paths with you again for I Write in the future!

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In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hello Richard ~ Shenanigans INC.

I'm sending this review in connection with "I Write: Enter the Second Decade" .

I don't have a lot of experience with Andre the Blog Monkey's Banana Bar, but I do from time to time enjoy these fun prompts where you include other members of the Writing.com community in your stories. *Smile*

I thought you did a great job with the detail and description in this piece; the imagery about your muse's tuxedo in particular was vivid and memorable (as Really Green tuxedoes should be!), and you did a nice job of working the other characters into the story.

On a personal level, I would have loved a little more context about the event (both the event in the story, and the nature of the prompt) to know whether this was an ongoing story, a standalone, etc. It seems like perhaps there was a little more to it for people who follow along with the activity, so it would have been great to know whether this was part of a larger world created for the activity, or a one-off.

Very enjoyable, though. It was a really fun read. *Bigsmile*

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Review of Heavy Fog  
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello 💙 Carly

I'm sending this review in connection with "I Write: Enter the Second Decade" .

I really liked your take on the prompt and absolutely loved the glimpse into your process as you started with something and steadily honed it, narrowing it down to the requisite number of words to meet the challenge. I do something similar with syllables for structured poetry, so it's nice to know that I'm not alone in that! *Bigsmile*

Overall, very nice poem and good take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Chris24

Thank you for taking the time to enter the August 2021 round of the "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Great take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

This was a wonderful story. You managed to pack so much narrative and atmosphere into a comparatively short story; I'm really impressed. Very few short stories are able to both tell a comprehensive, satisfying story while also hinting at a larger world, and you managed to do both easily.

         *Penw* Characters.

All three characters (Thomas, Abby, and Hatu) were well-developed and interesting.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue was realistic and moved the story forward at a brisk pace.

         *Penw* Technical.

Just one typo that I could find: Another growl and shriek in the distance and Thomas brought his rifle up, scanning for any threat he could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

This was an outstanding story. I really enjoyed every moment of reading it. *Smile*

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Review of Holograms  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Kotaro

Thank you for taking the time to enter the August 2021 round of the "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Interesting use of the prompt!

         *Penw* Story.

One suggestion I have for the story is to make it more focused on The Gettysburg Address. The story started with Gonzo looking for a wide variety of things, being impressed by the collection of many other books, and leaving with a whole host of new things that he had traded for. That, collectively, makes it difficult to appreciate how Gonzo got scammed, because he does have some things he wanted. In order for the ending to be more impactful, I think Gonzo either needs to come in search of that specific document, or find that to be the only thing worth acquiring, so that it's all the more devastating when the reader realizes that he's been duped in the end. Although there's also the larger question of whether he's actually been duped at all, because Gonzo isn't necessarily looking for original manuscripts, but human knowledge. In that respect, the copy would be just as valuable to him as the original. *Wink*

         *Penw* Characters.

I liked the character of Gonzo quite a bit. I found the constantly changing holograms to be a little confusing and off-putting compared to having a single image of a hologram that develops naturally as a character.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue was effective and moved the story forward.

         *Penw* Technical.

No technical errors that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

This was a fun story with a lot of potential. It was an interesting take on the prompt, and a very entertaining read. Nice job!

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Review of The Birth Of ...  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS!

Thank you for taking the time to enter the August 2021 round of the "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Unique take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

The three different segments of the story were individually effective but didn't really gel together into one cohesive story.

         *Penw* Characters.

Natasha was an interesting character, but I didn't really get a sense of who she was as a person beyond the person that was chosen for this responsibility. I would have loved to know more about who she is as a person beyond the great responsibility she's being tasked with.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue was effective and moved the story forward.

         *Penw* Technical.

No technical errors that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

The story was well-written (as your stories so often are), but it felt a little disconnected for me. I had a hard time connecting with the protagonist and was hoping for a little more of a cohesive narrative.

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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
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Hello PureSciFi

Thank you for taking the time to enter the August 2021 round of the "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Unique take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

There was a rich, thorough story that managed to cram a lot of narrative into just a couple thousand words. I'm impressed with the level of detail and worldbuilding you were able to fit into this story.

         *Penw* Characters.

It felt like there were more characters involved in the story than were strictly necessary. While it did create a sense of a larger world, it also made the story harder to get into at first, as the reader tried to make sense of who was who.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue was a little overwrought. There were a lot of paragraphs of dialogue where only a sentence or two would have sufficed, which made the story's pace drag a little bit while the dialogue was going on.

         *Penw* Technical.

No issues.

         *Penw* Overall.

Overall, I like the size and scope of this story. I like the ambition. I think there's some definite room for improvement, but you're off to a good start.

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk | "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy" 


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Review of Outcast  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Beholden

Thank you for taking the time to enter the August 2021 round of the "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Great take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

The story was compelling and well-told. I would have liked a little more detail on the nature of the creature that convinced them to not even bother trying to retake the tent so that the reader understands why risking freezing to death was a preferable option to the alternative, but it was otherwise an excellent story.

         *Penw* Characters.

Both Bergen and the protagonist were engaging, interesting characters.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue worked well in the story.

         *Penw* Technical.

None that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

This was an entertaining story and a good take on the prompt. Nice work!

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Review of Cecilie  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Thank you for taking the time to enter the August 2021 round of the "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Good take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

Good use of detail and description. The story worked well, and packed a lot into comparatively few words.

         *Penw* Characters.

Cecile was an engaging character that kept my interest.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

Not applicable.

         *Penw* Technical.

No spelling or technical errors that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

I enjoyed reading this entry and thought it was a good take on the prompt.

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Rated: E | (2.5)
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Hello Anna Marie Carlson

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2021 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

I had a hard time seeing how the prompt was integrated into the story. While the prompt doesn't necessarily have to be heavily featured, I always look for the threads of connection and I had a difficult time finding them in this story.

         *Penw* Story.

The narrative felt a little scattered, jumping from event to event often with very rough transitions. This is especially prominent when Sheena shows up for the first time at the wedding with very little introduction and a backstory dropped into the reader's lap at that very moment, and again toward the end where Sheena shows up at the house in a tense moment and the very next paragraph glosses over that conflict and starts with, "Here is a wrap-up to the story." As with the character note below, I would recommend taking the time to set up later payoffs in the story so the reader has a sense of satisfaction with the narrative playing out rather than being surprised by rough transitions and information that wasn't known until the very moment it's needed.

         *Penw* Characters.

Like the story, a lot of the characters feel a little rough around the edges. Sheena isn't really established at all, except when she pops up at the wedding and her entire detailed backstory is provided at that point, and we don't really get a sense of what Donathan thinks about this complicated love triangle beyond his surface level thoughts that he obviously loves Sweetie and Sheena is the odd one out. I'd try to work a little more characterization into the piece so that the readers have some context and details about each character to form a mental image around.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The early dialogue in the story where Donathan approaches Sweetie and all at once asks her to dance, introduces himself, tells her he knows who she is, compliments her physical appearance, details how he planned to approach her that evening, and then asks her out all in a single bit of dialogue feels a little disjointed and unnatural. Take the time to play out the conversation between these two characters a little. Give us some back and forth, sparks of interest, time for the relationship to develop rather than a one-sided flurry of information.

         *Penw* Technical.

No technical errors that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

Overall, I liked the characters themselves, and the idea behind this story. I think there's a lot of room for improvement in the execution, but there's the potential to make this a really compelling story of a love triangle between the three primary characters.

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk | "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy" 


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Review of Ghosts of Summer  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Graham Muad'dib

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2021 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

This was a very unique take on the prompt. I like the fact that the idyllic summer quote inspired a fantasy rather than reality. Nice job!

         *Penw* Story.

The story was well presented and well-told. It moved along briskly and included just enough details to create a vivid image in the reader's mind while still moving the narrative along at a quick pace.

         *Penw* Characters.

I like the fact that the only well-defined characters were the images/memories of the narrator's family and that everyone in the real world (e.g., the paramedics) were sort of indistinct. It really worked well given the nature of the story being told.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue was minimal but really worked for this story.

         *Penw* Technical.

I'm at the hospice, watching my mother [breathe] through tubes.

         *Penw* Overall.

This was a really unique take on the prompt, which helped it stand out. Nice job!

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Review of Sommeren  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2021 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Good take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

The description in the story was absolutely stunning. In just a few short words, you really painted a vibrant picture of the setting and made it's beauty easy and clear to imagine.

         *Penw* Characters.

Sussan's relationship with her husband and her boss is unclear. She clearly dislikes her husband... but why? She and her boss clearly have some deeper connection than she does with her husband... but why? All three characters and their relationship to one another is compelling, but we're missing some key information about why they find themselves connected in this specific way.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue was effective and moved the story along nicely.

         *Penw* Technical.

No technical issues.

         *Penw* Overall.

This was a really enjoyable story, thanks in large part to the absolutely stunning descriptions of the setting. It made for a memorable read!

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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS!

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2021 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Good use of the prompt, incorporating it as a song lyric.

         *Penw* Story.

The story felt a little too melodramatic and predictable for my tastes. Everything worked out perfectly in the end, and while the narrator's choices seemed to shock and appall her family, there were never any real consequences or risk that things wouldn't work out in the end. I was hoping for a little more sustained, engaging conflict to make the resolution to the story more satisfying.

         *Penw* Characters.

The narrator and most of the family are fine characters, if a little cliched. They work for this kind of story, but I was hoping for a little something to make them stand out. The brother character was fantastic and what really made this story stand out. You could feel his protective concern for his sister, and the way he was used to anticipating when she has a misstep (sometimes literally!).

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue was effective and kept the story moving along at the right times.

         *Penw* Technical.

No technical errors that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

This was a solid story with the brother as a standout character. I think it's missing that little something to give it a fresh, unique spin outside of what's expected in these kinds of stories, but overall it was an effective story well-told.

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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
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Hello PureSciFiPlus

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2021 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Interesting take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

There were several points where the story made jarring, inconsistent jumps. From Mitch and Tina on the beach jumping immediately to Tina screaming at her parents, and again when the doctors repeatedly saying "We don't know what's wrong with Tina" going right into Victoria saying Tina is going to be okay a few paragraphs later because "Now we know what is wrong with her."

         *Penw* Characters.

Jackson and Victoria were interesting, well-developed characters. Tina felt a little like a plot device more than a fully-realized character, but all three of them were compelling and enjoyable to read about.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue felt a little on the nose and expository. Each character says exactly and fully what they're thinking in any given moment, and provides a lot of backstory that feels written more for the benefit of the reader, or for drawing out the narrative, than something a person would naturally say in that situation.`

         *Penw* Technical.

No technical errors that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

I found the characters compelling, and the premise interesting, but execution-wise I think there's some work to be done to refine the dialogue and smooth out the progression of the narrative. This is definitely a good start, though!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello LightinMind

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2021 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest" . Enclosed please find the following review, for your consideration.

         *Penw* Premise.

Good take on the prompt.

         *Penw* Story.

The worldbuilding is excellent. The location you picked, especially once the story got to the mountains, felt vibrant and alive. The narrative of these two characters finding one another was compelling.

         *Penw* Characters.

Camila and Francisco were both unique, compelling characters.

         *Penw* Dialogue.

The dialogue felt a little flat for me. Especially the conversation with the young sisters at the mountain home about what Francisco looks like, when Francisco is describing himself it Camila is consoling him, the back and forth feels a little forced and expository, as did the part at the lake where Francisco is telling her his backstory.

         *Penw* Technical.

No technical errors that I could find.

         *Penw* Overall.

I enjoyed this story. I thought it was a good take on the prompt, and the characters were compelling enough to keep the reader's interest throughout.

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Review of Belfast Time  
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello ♥Hooves♥

I'm sending this review in connection with "I Write in 2020" .

         *Penv* Premise.

I really enjoyed your take on the prompt, and think you fulfilled all of the requirements for this round of the contest.

         *Penv* Imagery.

I like the fact that your poem focused on the genre of death without being too obvious about it. You do a great job of referring to the concept of death with imagery which makes this piece really stand out.

         *Penv* Structure.

Thanks to this piece, I learned a new form! *Delight* I had no idea what a Coronach poem was before reading this item, and it was a pleasure to research the form and see how you applied it to your particular piece. I could find no issues with the form.

         *Penv* Technical.

No technical errors that I could find.

         *Penv* Overall.

I thought you did a really great job with this poem. It's well written, impeccably structured, and flows really well from line to line. The imagery was excellent and it's an all-around solid take on the prompt. Well done!

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Review of Come Out and Play  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello tj ~ endeavors to persevere!

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

This was a really sweet poem, and I definitely connected with the underlying inspiration drawn from reconnecting with childhood friends via social media. Overall, the poem was well-structured, with great imagery and word selection, and it read very quickly and smoothly. I particularly liked the way the first stanza came around for a refrain at the very end. Nice job!

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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Voxxylady

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

I really enjoyed reading this piece. I think it's unfortunate that many genres get lumped into the same category. Romance and erotica are two entirely different genres, with different tropes and reader expectations, just as science fiction and fantasy are entirely different, albeit often being lumped together on bookstore shelves. I'm a fan of much more specific, targeted genres so that people know exactly what they're getting in each book. My wife is the same way; she loves romance, but not so much the erotica stuff... and sometimes she has no idea which book she's getting until she's already reading it! Anyway, great job on this piece; it was very well thought-out and inspiring!

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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
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Hello wdwilcox

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

As far as "holiday foods you hope you won't have to eat," I think whale candy is probably way up there, especially as described! Overall, I found this poem amusing and well-structured. It was a fun read and there were some great, memorable rhymes in many of the stanzas. As requested, I'm rating it at one star.

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Kenzie

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

I enjoyed this item as a whole, and think there's a very powerful and important message in putting God before all else when it comes to one's praises, cheers, excitement level, etc. I have to admit that based on the title and the intro I was thinking it would be a little more focused on your experiences with sports, but that said I thought this piece was well-written and engaging.

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Soh ~ Luminousa

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

Nice job on this poem. I appreciated the way you articulated your own personal point of view on poverty and the life of the poor, and did so eloquently and clearly. Your word choice and the structure of your poem was excellent, making for an effortless read full of good imagery and concise thoughts. All in all, I think this is a very successful piece. Well done!

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Espero

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

I really enjoyed this piece. I can definitely identify with the feelings of the cost of progress sometimes being quite high, and always needing to be aware of not just what progress can bring, but what it can cost as well. Your piece was well-written, with excellent structure and word choice. You did a great job with the imagery of the piece. Well done!

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk


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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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Hello PureSciFi

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

I'll confess that I'm not terribly familiar with Doctor Who in the first place, but I enjoyed this item. I think it was informative, imaginative, and kept my interest throughout. I'm not sure what the specific prompt was that encouraged this item in the April Raid, but it sounds like you did a good job with it.

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello ♥Hooves♥

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.

I can't believe that after all these years of crossing paths, I've never reviewed this actual intro item with all of the personal details. I love the summary of your activities on the site, as well as the background info that lets visitors get to know you a little better. You also provide a good sample of all the activities you've been involved with and enjoy on the site. It's a great one-stop-shop to get to know more about you and the site as a whole. Keep up the great work!

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Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk


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