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Review of HASANA  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"HASANA" is a very nice little Flash Fiction especially for the children which are written by ms.criter. The central character of this Fantasy story is none other than Hasana, a sweet girl. Actually, this is a story about finding happiness.
Though, we, all are searching for happiness. We target so big to achieve happiness. If we try to listen to our heart properly, we shall be able to find and embrace the happiness within our reach very easily. Even, the smallest bliss may be the source of huge happiness.
Very wonderful writing effort. Keep writing.




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Review of 2020  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"2020" is a very dramatically written assignment within 250 words by the writer Penny Withers. The style is really nice which is full of suspense. If it is an introduction of a story, I must say that the effort is brilliant but this is not an introduction of a story or novel. But, here, even after a lot of drama, the writer does not spend a single word about the year 2020, at least directly. But, the writer says something symbolically. Here, ' the darkness of the night' indicates our helplessness.
We should try wholeheartedly to find a way to overcome this unwanted situation. undoubtedly, it is a really tough task but impossible. The writer is very much optimistic. He is searching the knob of light and the whole room is enlightened again-- it indicates his optimism.
So, the writing effort ends with a glimpse of positivity. Well done. Keep writing.


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Review of A Purple Heart  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"A Purple Heart" is a very appropriately written poem by the poet Nick. Generally, mothers are purple hearted persons. So, the poet writes this poem for her own mother only but eventually, general poem for almost every mothers. Therefore, in my view, it is a tribute to every mother.
We find our mother full of kindness, affection and joyful which teach us to be kind, joyful but within humbleness. A purple hearted mother teaches us everything by setting her own example in front of us. Well written. Keep writing.


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Review of forever falling  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
"forever falling" is a bit different kind of poems which is written by the poet vapid. This is a kind of poem where Free-verse is nicely piled with the rhyme. This combination tells us about what the poet feels when h was falling, the end is nigh, so I decided to write this while he cries. This dark and emotional chapter of his own life is explained here with perfection. This will be impossible to express properly id he does not have any real-life experience about this.
Fantastic poetic performance. Keep writing.


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Review of I miss you  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"I miss you" is a lovely little letter which written to his love by the writer Natty. This is nothing but his feeling creative listening to music so made this love letter. The writer hopes that she will enjoy the letter.
If we look carefully the entire letter, What will we see? The deepest love from both sides. Though the writer uses the simplest of the words but never compromises with the writing artistry which gives awesome readability.
Undoubtedly, this is a wonderful writing effort, we can not deny this truth. Keep writing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
"The old age problem" is another thoughtful piece of writing work from the writer Payel Dasgupta. Actually, it is a great assignment work. The writer deals with old-age psychology, here. Not only that, with the problems, she shows the way solutions, too. Therefore, the writing effort becomes compact and meaningful.
I mesmerize for the depth of the root. Actually, she is going to the root of the problems. This is undoubtedly a difficult task but not an impossible one. Overall, it is a fantastic performance. Keep writing.





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Review of She is Safe  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"She is Safe" is nice but a bit lengthy poem which is written by the poet Penny Withers. This poem has fifty-six lines which are divided into fourteen equal stanzas. Every stanza follows a, a, b, b rhythm pattern. So, we can understand it is a very rhythmic poem. In the end, the brother is able to rescue his sister, in spite of a lot of difficulties and criminal activities against them which is complementary to the rhythm.
In spite of structure, we can tell it as a complete story, more precisely a Flash Fiction. It fulfils all characteristics of an ideal Flash Fiction. So, we can conclude that it is a multi-dimensional Flash Fiction.
Brilliant effort. Keep writing.



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Rated: E | (5.0)
"The Selfish Sunflower" is elegantly written Fiction by the writer Lusho. Here, the Sunflower is a symbolic character. We can understand this very easily. Actually, the maximum of us are we aware of our own selfishness. So, we are overshadowed by our expectation. We may be infatuated by those so-called selfish sunflowers but nature does not.
This is simply a brilliant writing effort. Keep writing.


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Review of The strange man  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
"The strange man" is a nicely written story which is nothing but a piece of advice is given by the story writer Nick. Here, the teller is a boy who runs into a strange man while trying to make money. That inexperience boy of sixteen years old is telling the story to us.
Most importantly, the writer maintains the suspense until the story comes to an end. What will be the next sentence? we are not able to judge it properly. This characteristic gives awesome readability.
A nice promising beginning. Keep writing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Jose Hyland introduction" is a nice, little but a very important article to us where the writer Jose James gives us some information about his own career. Actually, Jose started fitness coaching in 2008. On that moment, he was working on his Bachelors of Science in Exercise Science at Manhattan College. After graduating with his degree in 2011, He started to build his career. Jose gained work experience in the field with companies including Blink Fitness, Crunch Fitness, Astro Fitness, Axis, and Bronx House. He gained special populations, Olympic lifting, weight loss programs and as a boxing coach. Even, he was getting the taste as an amateur boxer, with a record of 6 wins and only 1 loss. He knows both English and Spanish. He wants to send a very important message. This is none other than keeping your body fitness.
Though the article is tiny in size, it stuffed with rich and interesting pieces of information.
This is a very nice beginning, indeed. We hope you will keep your performance level always up.


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Review of Eighteen  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Eighteen" is a very nice little poem which is written by the poet C Michael M. The poet is questioning whether a boy becomes a man or his childhood died in front of adulthood. We know that a child is a symbol of Holiness whereas an adult person is full of lust and greediness. So, we often want to return to the sacred childhood life but it is a really impossible task. Actually, those holinesses cannot die, it remains inside our mind and heart but the circumstances do permit to uncovered those holinesses. So, it remains hidden.
This is a beautifully written poem. Keep writing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
"The psychological effect on children" is a nice little assignment which is created by the writer Payel Dasgupta. Though it is very pathetic, it is able to touch our heart. How this recent Pandemic harms on the psychology of the children especially on the poor children, these are described here with a lot of efficiencies, one by one.
This is totally based on logic and true information. There is no scope to tell anything imaginary. The writer not only searches the root of the problem but show the way of solution, this is the speciality which attracts me, indeed. We are also hopeful normalcy returns soon like the writer.
Wonderful writing style. Write on.



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Review of ONE HAND  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
"ONE HAND" is a very rarely written story. We often see in science-fiction stories, we go even in the future which is far far away from the present. But, this story is a completely different scenario. It is pre-historic era. Yes, it is 300000 BC. The plot is Jebel Irhoud, Morocco. This is the story of a very very extraordinary woman who lived in the prehistoric times. Actually, an extraordinary person only can show the way to a prosperous future. This lady belonged to this particular category.
The writer Avalon Cole Hive is beautifully handling this difficult story with a smoothness. Due to this efficiency, the story gets awesome readability. We should appreciate his skill. Keep writing.


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Review of Alone  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Alone" is that kind of poem which discloses how we are in this Worldwide spread Pandemic of 2020. The description of the entire situation is very lively but also very pathetic in the real sense. How close we are to the mood of nature was again exposed. The shadow of these frustrations is reflected in this particular poem. But, most importantly, the poet Deb shows the glimpse of his positive mind in this poem. So, he tries to live with positive consciousness within a negative circumstance as much as possible. But, the frustration cannot be hidden absolutely.
The nice picturization of these sad situations. Hope, it will be alright soon.
Most importantly, there is not a single grammatical or spelling error. Brilliant work.
Go ahead. Keep writing.


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Review of Hands  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
"Hands" is a perfect morbid poem which is written about a pair of hand. How scary the scenario is! This is very nicely described by the poet Kit which is written in a Gothic style. The poet has created the entire environment very suspicious. The flow of the poem is also smooth. So, it generates enormous readability.
Nice start. Keep writing.



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Rated: E | (5.0)
From the name, we can easily understand that this draft must be an emotional one. Truly, the writer tells us a very sad story through this "the lose of a loved one" which is able to touch our own heart.
In this tiny story, the teller tells that she lost her boyfriend recently, in the of July due to a massive heart attack. Obviously, this is the cause of her deepest mourn.
Though, her boyfriend often became ill from a long while. He had some other health issues as well. So, he had to medically retire in 2010 from the job he loved. He was a machinist for many years but this ill-health did not be a cause of concern in their relationship. This is the perfect example of TRue relationship.
This is simply a wonderful writing skill. Go ahead.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
"The Abortion Debate: My Story" is undoubtedly a wonderful writing effort by the writer Laura. From her biography, the writer takes inspiration. Actually, her abortion debate is the source of this writing. From her own debatable story, she understands that a change is needed to change education as well as language around this topic. Very sensible writing effort. It teaches us how to tackle the adverse situation about the above-mentioned topic which is collected from her own experiences.
This is really a fantastic writing effort. Keep this performance.



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Rated: E | (5.0)
{b}Wow! What a nice little poetic attempt is made by the poet Jabberwb in her poem "Provisions From Above". This is the time for the season change. The teller is observing the natural beauties through the window. She sees a variety of trees with various coloured woods and leaves. The birds are providing a different dimension in the environment of that particular garden. Her imaginations take her to a completely different world. With everything, she is totally mesmerized.
Another thing should be noted carefully. This is none other than a sweet rhythm sense of the poet. Go ahead. A promising future is waiting for you.



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! What a timely written Essay "Empowering women rebuilding the society" is! This is a very thoughtful Essay from a very promising writer Ritu shaw. This is written about women empowerment. What does the women empowerment mean? This is nothing but the improvement of women in every possible social sector. So, socio-economic is the prime factor. But, the political involvement, women protection legal aids come automatically as a chain system.
These are written stepwise. Overall, it is a great attempt. It proves that she is ready to serve her social as well as moral duties being a writer.
Now, I am counting Spelling and Grammatical Mistakes. There is not a single spelling mistake found. In spite of that, there are twenty-six errors in a single Essay! I can not believe it. It starts from the title and continues until the last sentence has written! The corrected form is given below:-

Empowering women rebuilding society
Women empowerment refers to increasing and improving the social, economical, political and legal strength of the women to ensure equal rights and make them confident enough to claim rights. India as a nation revered in a feminine form 'the Bharat Mata', the first citizen of the nation is female, many government posts are reserved for women and many educated women poured their knowledge into national and international sectors but unfortunately, these are accompanied by news about dowry killing, rape, female infanticide etc. To eradicate these evil thoughts, Right of Equality should be ensured. Since education begins at home, the upliftment of women would be accompanied by the development of empowerment of women, society, family and in turns that would lead to the holistic development of the nation.
Female infanticide i.e killing of the girl child, female foeticide i.e killing of the girl child at the prenatal stage are horrifiedly common in many rural areas, despite the prohibition of sex selection act in 1774. In case they survive, they are discriminated in every stage of their life. At youth, females face the problem of early childhood marriage and childbirth. They do not care perfectly during pregnancy leading to cases of maternal mortality. They are subjected to harassment for domestic violence even at their workplace, public place. Even they are considered as a burden because of dowry during the marriage. They are neglected in nutrition, education and other aspects of well being.
Government has been implementing many laws and act to stop the violence like the prohibition of child marriage act 2006, prevention of sexual harassment of women at workplace 2013, dowry prohibition act 1961 etc. Moreover, the government has passed order providing safety to women and reducing crime against women by Juvenile justice bill 2015. Loans are provided for setting independent business, hundred days work at panchayat level are started, free medical benefits to every women and child are given by panchayat and block level stage of government.
It is essential to dispel the ghost of past and place women on a footing with men in order to pave the way for their empowerment.

Do not be frustrated. Keep writing.


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Review of Who am I?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Who am I?" is a very nice little persona poem. Though this poem is written by our newbie friend and poet Payel Dasgupta, it is one of the best 'persona' poems ever I read. Here, the poet is searching for her real identity, philosophically. Is she just a lady? Or Is she just the wife of a man? what is the case may be, her entity is very much limited within a specific sphere, there is no doubt about it. But, If we consider the third possibility where the poet says that she is a soul. So, being a soul, she is directly related to God. Therefore, her entity cannot be measured by the material sphere which is endless. So, here is a slight hint of the spiritual aspect. We can understand well that the poet Payel Dasgupta is want to know her actual identity.
I am really mesmerized through this poem. Hope, a very promising future is waiting for her. Keep writing.



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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Why we weep when some one pass away" is undoubtedly an awesome writing effort which is written by the writer princess. The writer adopts a very relevant subject, indeed. Actually, after death, we return to our original home to God. So, a knowledgeable person does not any kind of unhappiness in time of death. Being an experienced and proper knowledgeable person, the writer also makes to us to do not weep at all. Eventually, this is the time of as ever kind God calls the teller. So, as a well-wisher of them, the teller requests them not to weep in this very joyful moment. Though this is a wonderful writing effort, this tiny effort cannot be a Short story. It may a Monologue or a Memo.
Another thing that should be mentioned here. It contains twenty-eight Grammertital and spelling Errors! It is starting from Title. 'Someone' should be a single word. It should be corrected immediately. The error-free form is given below. Hope, grammatical errors will be minimized from the very next writing effort.


Please do not weep for me. But I wish you well and I wish you the best in the coming days ahead. But I wish you the sunshine of tomorrow. My life on earth was full. While I was on earth I savoured so much, I savoured good friends family, good times and most of all I savoured the touch of a loved one. Perhaps my time on earth seemed a little brief. Please do not length it now by weeping for me. Please know I will watch over you after God calls me home. God called me so I can Be Free.


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Review of The End  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"The End" is another thought poem which is written by the poet Amber. Actually, the poet searches about the real meaning of our life. Is it living nice? Or is it death? Which one is true in reality? When we lose our every inspiration to achieve another goal. Not only that, even we lose all attractions from our own life, but no more dreams or joys are also left in our life, it is called real death according to the opinion of a poet. I do also agree with it. The poet also adds that nothing is permanent in this material world. But, hope that the end will be better, less sorrowful.
This is an extremely well-written poem. Write on.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
"Do you like Writing.Com?" is really interesting as well as very vital User Poll for our lovely and well-spread community Writing.Com. This Poll is arranged by none other than one of our founder of this nice literary community, our most honourable The StoryMaster. The purpose of the user Poll is nothing but to find out how we feel about Writing.Com. So, very pertinently, he asked those above-mentioned questions and up to the trend of the poll, it is crystal clear that maximum of friends likes this community very much like me.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"What is the meaning of life" is a nice rhythmic poem which is written by the poet Penny Withers. Actually, this poem tells us something about how we live life without knowing its purpose. The poet writes this in a way to show what he thinks of it.
This dialogue-based poem is constructed on the basis of the dialogue between a husband and a wife. It expresses a cordial relationship between them.
In this way, the meaning of life is clear in some extend. Due to both, nice rhythm and a beautiful pace, it gains tremendous readability.
Wonderful writing effort. Keep writing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Undoubtedly, "My childhood teacher" is a fantastic Monologue which is written by our newbie friend Ritu shaw. Yes, this the duty of every teacher to enlighten a student into the way of success. In this Monologue, the above-mentioned teacher just does his duty only, nothing else. But, it is the greatness of the part of the student that she remembers those cordial works of that fortunate teacher.
This writing effort is able to touch our heart due to the efficiency of the writer.
This Monologue contains a smooth pace which gives nice readability.
Though it is written nicely but there a lot of grammatical errors are there. I find twenty of them. So, I give an error-free form below:-

When I was studying class five aged ten years old, my mother took me to a teacher. At first, I was annoyed and frustrated to complete huge homework given by him. But somehow I became habituated to his task and the punishment for not doing homework in time. When I didn't complete my homework, my parents were called and it was so embarrassing to me to hear complaints about me in front of me. I decided by hooks or by cooks I have to finish my homework because I would maintain my self-respect from childhood.
When I didn't write any unknown passage which was given by my school teacher, I took to my private tutor. But he would tell me to write them own self and after that, he would check and rewrite them. In this way, he awakened the ability to express the thoughts of my mind.
Now I am 24 years old. I have been his student until now. In spite of discontinuing my studying to him, I can't forget the honourable teacher. This 14-year relationship between student and teacher is quite difficult to explain by words. I wish to have such a teacher to every people by whom not only be guided but also will awake the ability to fight alone in the actual battlefield.

Nice effort. Keep writing.


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