|Wow! What a timely written Essay "Empowering women rebuilding the society" is! This is a very thoughtful Essay from a very promising writer Ritu shaw. This is written about women empowerment. What does the women empowerment mean? This is nothing but the improvement of women in every possible social sector. So, socio-economic is the prime factor. But, the political involvement, women protection legal aids come automatically as a chain system.
These are written stepwise. Overall, it is a great attempt. It proves that she is ready to serve her social as well as moral duties being a writer.
Now, I am counting Spelling and Grammatical Mistakes. There is not a single spelling mistake found. In spite of that, there are twenty-six errors in a single Essay! I can not believe it. It starts from the title and continues until the last sentence has written! The corrected form is given below:-
Empowering women rebuilding society
Women empowerment refers to increasing and improving the social, economical, political and legal strength of the women to ensure equal rights and make them confident enough to claim rights. India as a nation revered in a feminine form 'the Bharat Mata', the first citizen of the nation is female, many government posts are reserved for women and many educated women poured their knowledge into national and international sectors but unfortunately, these are accompanied by news about dowry killing, rape, female infanticide etc. To eradicate these evil thoughts, Right of Equality should be ensured. Since education begins at home, the upliftment of women would be accompanied by the development of empowerment of women, society, family and in turns that would lead to the holistic development of the nation.
Female infanticide i.e killing of the girl child, female foeticide i.e killing of the girl child at the prenatal stage are horrifiedly common in many rural areas, despite the prohibition of sex selection act in 1774. In case they survive, they are discriminated in every stage of their life. At youth, females face the problem of early childhood marriage and childbirth. They do not care perfectly during pregnancy leading to cases of maternal mortality. They are subjected to harassment for domestic violence even at their workplace, public place. Even they are considered as a burden because of dowry during the marriage. They are neglected in nutrition, education and other aspects of well being.
Government has been implementing many laws and act to stop the violence like the prohibition of child marriage act 2006, prevention of sexual harassment of women at workplace 2013, dowry prohibition act 1961 etc. Moreover, the government has passed order providing safety to women and reducing crime against women by Juvenile justice bill 2015. Loans are provided for setting independent business, hundred days work at panchayat level are started, free medical benefits to every women and child are given by panchayat and block level stage of government.
It is essential to dispel the ghost of past and place women on a footing with men in order to pave the way for their empowerment.
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