Very descriptive, vivid and moving. Infused with many egyptian terms but not sounding clich'e. Nicely done. Keep Writing. InkWellspring66 @writing.com.
Kimarie
A dark horse carries the message. Starvation percieved through the recoiling of onlookers. Intelligent, dark. and grotesquely eloquent. I usually prefer to be engrossed in comedic or romantic fare and the ocassional venture into the dark side is a timid attempt on my part . There I usually read of death in a user-friendly format . No user-friendly format here. It is first person and desolate and there is no comfort in sight. Although not mentioned , I envision the clay colored masses, rough-hewn graves, and the fragile survivors clinging nearby. Doctors, nurses, journalists self-protecting or now de-sensitized seem callous and cold and almost a plague in themselves. This work left me breathless. I bow to the dark rider that ruled your pen.
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