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Review by Muscle_Grow
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I am reading The Fault in Our Stars, by John Green, and this poem reminded me so much about the whole plot in the book. I think that the way that you wrote this poem translates to the reader what the person in said poem , and that the reader can maybe relate to the person in the poem. I also would like to add that, your poem translates to me that you spent some hours at your desk writing some ideas down for poems, and when you were using those ideas, that a loved one was probably the inspiration for this.

Keep up with what you are doing!

Muscle_Grow


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Review of Journey  
Review by Muscle_Grow
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, April has 8 years on WDC!

First of all, congrats on 8 years!

Second of all, i want to be able to say... that your poem was a beautiful one, better than any poem that i have personally put to a piece of paper. The way that you used some rhyming words and some not rhyming words. I think that this poem, is a great one, no need to change anything about it at all. I hope that whatever you are doing in the future, you are doing that thing well and with all your heart!

Keep up the good work!

Muscle_Grow

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Review of Night Vision  
Review by Muscle_Grow
Rated: E | (5.0)
wonderful story. keep up the good work.
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