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Poems Short stories Items under three thousand words I love reading books however I enjoy them if they get me hooked up. Hence I can't promise book reviews. I will politely decline if I can't review multiple chapters
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Review of The Brain  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
REVIEW OF:
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REVIEWED BY: SHARA


*BALLOON4* THE PLOT

The poem talks about sex and the insatiable hunger for it.

*BALLOON4* RHYME SCHEME AND METRE

No adherence to paricular rhyme scheme or metre.

*BALLOON4* THE POEM

The poem has used appropriate personification and metaphors where needed. It presents the hunger and thirst of sex in the form of a scene that a reader can visualize.
The poem has been written in the third person perspective where the third person is omniscient.

*BALLOON4* WHAT I LIKED

The poem adheres to its description. It says it will present the animal within a woman and it surely does. The methaphorical words used also create some impact.

*BALLOON4* WHAT I DISLIKED

I think that the description needs some justice. The poem describes the hunger on both sides and hence the passion within it should not be titled to belong to just a woman.
The last line justifies this.

*BALLOON4* OVERALL IMPRESSION

The poem is good and works out to describe the theme well.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Let me see if I can write a good review... If this newbie challenge allows to practise them too *Wink*

{color:red}REVIEW OF NEWBIE CHALLENGE
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*Flower5*THE IDEA
The *Idea* of Newbie Challenge is simply great. This place serves as a platform for the newbies to showcase their articles and get rewarded accordingly. It helps the newbies to interact with the senior members too as it offers reviews by preferred authors and as the challenge is also open to oldbies, there are chances of these guys hitting the new articles submitted.

*Flower5*THE AWARDS
GPs and much more. It also offers a review by Annalynne for the first twenty entries of each contest. Great! *Thumbsup*

*Flower5*WHAT NEWBIES GET TO LEARN

The newbies can learn the bitem format and also how to use colors, emoticons, italicezed text, etc. In short good tips on formatting are provided with well illustrated examples. Also the newbies can practise it as many times as they want to... This is something unique that other challenges do not offer. *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star* to this system.

*Flower5*WHAT I LIKED

I liked the idea of a newbie challenge being hosted independently. Most of the newbies are people who just write for their heart. But honest reviews by more experienced writers help them to elevate their work. And This is a statement from personal experience. My *Heart* really watches for the beautiful *Reading*(reviews) you guys do...

*Flower5*WHAT I DISLIKED

I have to be kidding if I seriously put in anything in this section.
If I would have found any imperfection.. The five star rating would not have been given.

*Flower5*SOME SUGGESTIONS

This challenge only accepts short stories and poems. I feel that writers writing on all sorts should be encouraged and so if substantially more contests are added within this same contests as subcontests, they would definitely help the newbies a lot.

*Flower5*THE SUM UP

This place should be checked by every newbie and should be included in the newsletters so that all the newbies could come around.
In very short words
THIS PLACE IS GREAT


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Review of Thru The Scope  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well really the story is worth more than the time I took to read it..
In short it so nicely explains the state of mind of the sniper..
But that is duty as we would put it.. Harsh and yet it is his duty...
Nice work
Keep Writing
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 My Collection OF Poems  (13+)
A REFLECTION of the Small Poetess in me.. My collection from STD. IX
#1047790 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20
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Review of All I Really Want  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I believe that one of the earlier reviews that someone submitted was very true.. Obnoxious it might sound but your poem cud actually inspire one to become either suicidal or homicidal...
So many queries
All unanswered..
Hey the poem is beautiful and truely sometimes we need to think so..
Keep writing
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 My Collection OF Poems  (13+)
A REFLECTION of the Small Poetess in me.. My collection from STD. IX
#1047790 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20
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Review of Rapture  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Snow1*Open your eyes
Where's the glitter in the night?

A nice question.. And so very close to reality.. We all live for illusions not realising life in itself is the biggest illusion..

The words have been very nicely related to bring about the agony and the quest for search of bliss continues..

Keep Writing
gud work

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 My Collection OF Poems  (13+)
A REFLECTION of the Small Poetess in me.. My collection from STD. IX
#1047790 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20
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Review of A Dream  
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is a sweet poem and the work has been done well. "Beauty in completeness".. Nice thought..
I think that you have done gud justice to the poem and the work is well done..
In short sweet words you have very well described the beauty of your dream..

Keep writing..

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 My Collection OF Poems  (13+)
A REFLECTION of the Small Poetess in me.. My collection from STD. IX
#1047790 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20
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Review of Restricted  
Rated: E | (3.0)
hey if this is a poem on you, I would like to ask you if you have completely done justice to yourself...
*Snow1* "But it can not be"..
This line sounds a bit negative..
A positive atti definitely sounds gud..
*Snow1* Night sky's fiery glow

a gud one..

I guess this poem can get a better expansion..One that actually wud acquaint us with the kindda person you are..

I'll await the expansion

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 My Collection OF Poems  (13+)
A REFLECTION of the Small Poetess in me.. My collection from STD. IX
#1047790 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
It was a beautiful poem.. A belief well portrayed in few words...
A compact expression of your thoughts, I feel you have done justice to your belief and presented it well.
*Star*"Will convict one voice vying for perfection. "
I liked this line very much.. This end definitely makes an impact on the reader

Keep going..
luv Soniya

 My Collection OF Poems  (13+)
A REFLECTION of the Small Poetess in me.. My collection from STD. IX
#1047790 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20

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Review of Grieving Solitary  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Grief and all solitary.. Sometimes I too feel the same but nevertheless life pushes me on.. At some point or the other, every person feels lonely and looks around as to where he really is standing.. The places of visit keep changing but always teaching you something..
And tears..
They make us realise that somewhere in this materialistic world, an ounce of humanity still dwells in us..
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Review of Beloved  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Fantasy.. All ALive.. "Ignite an eternal flame".. a nice phrase and I think that it is this flame that keeps us moving.. We love , we live in hope of love and someday we find our love or we fall in love with something that we haad for a long time but never knew was worth the love of our life..
Slowly moving through the description of Ur love.. A fantasy and yet so well manifested that it seems to be alive in front of our eyes..
Gr8 work
Keep Coming with more..
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There is some point in hosting this poll.. Well I believe that women are mentally stronger than males.. and a Personal journal or Diary is a great way of expressing all what you wish to say but put forth in front of anyone or just want it to be personal.. It definitely gives you relief..
Keep Coming up with more such polls...
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Review of Starship Sentry  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A gud story. The fiction of your imagination has been potrayed well.. At first I thought the sentry is human.. but then it was the other way round.. The complex structure of dimensions has been made lucid and put forth.. Following the lines of dimensions placed forth ages back.. I found the story to be a gud one.. WEll lets see if someday even we cud traverse the dimensions.. And make friends in all the nine dimensions.. :)
 PERPETUAL LOVE..  (13+)
The title itself suggests the theme..
#1046511 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20

"One Night Stand..." 
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The reviewing section I like the most..
Actually I have joined this site just two days back and on the very first day of my login i gained just two GPS but with reviewing i gained around 100 Gps in a day.. and I believe that a link associated with a gud reviewing would definitely encourage the writer to check your items..
Reviewing is indeed the best way to get noticed and also a very good platform for interaction with your mates..
 PERPETUAL LOVE..  (13+)
The title itself suggests the theme..
#1046511 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20

"One Night Stand..." 
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Review of Maturity  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
well your words embody pain and agony and they so very well manifest the life that you may be leading at your age of 57.. I especially liked the Idea of the new hell of GOD.. I really did like the concept.. If only we could actually find some such place and get relief.. We all ponder various places in search of happiness but find it to be ephemeral not realising that we have bliss encapsulated somewhere within us.. But like fools we search and die and reach hell .. Never knowing a beautiful hell exists somewhere...!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I was really at a loss of understanding all these merit badges and links and stuff.. But thanks to your article I shall now be able to navigate the site with increased comprehension.. The link part was especially something that I cud not fit into this small brain of mine but now after reading this article I guess I would do better.. Let me try from here
 One Night Stand...  (13+)
This is a poem that was written to unleash the devil in me. Read through to find more
#1046505 by Shara-vacationing till Feb 20
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Reviews work very well as an analyst.. The analysis done by a sincere reviewer reflects his mindset. The suggestions offered by him, the rectifications pointed out can help a writer to just perform better.. But the question arises aas to are all the readers qualified reviewers.. Mabbe not.. There exist many with a deep insight and many who just have a look at the superfluos stuff but yet opinions do count and hence a review of every topic you read should be submitted so that the stuff just keeps getting better...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well i really dont think that just above this review box there was any need for mentioning that the reviews should be honest, encouraging and respectful... The write up actually guides one very well through the system of rating and even I feel that as a reviewer it is important that you rate any item impartially and see to it that whatever you wish to say is conveyed well.. It only helps one to improve his/her talent and encourages them to work on coz now they know that people are reading their stuff.. It was a good item
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