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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem. It is written with much thought and concern. The many crisis around the world are appalling. Hunger and disease are a concern. The world needs to think of a solution. The ISIS are a threat and we need to think about them. The poet's desire for end of the violence and peace to come about is praiseworthy. The tribal war in Sudan is of concern. The killing's in Iran and the suicide bombing's in Pakistan are also of concern. The war in Gaza is another cause of concern. These events make the poet negative. The poetry introduces us to the concerns the world is dealing with.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a nice story. It is well planned and written with finesse. Nathan Marcus as the protagonist makes us think of the senate and the senate elders. The secretary general moves into the room. The elders take their seat. The story is a good setting of how things turn out in a senate. Kumar Hassan tries to make a name for himself. Nathan Marcus announces his plan to the senate. He has his own set of scientists and engineers. Will he make a mark is to be seen?. The story shows how a senate operates. How a vote in favor of a aid plan goes about.

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Review of The Resting Place  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This is a nice story. It is written with intelligence and wit. It shows the contradiction of two people-one in love and the other aloof. Revenge is perhaps the only way to get even. The castle is chosen as the meeting place. They had sat beside each other class after class, but she never recognized him. The story shocks us and surprises us. It makes us think how we can be taken over by others. The girl is compared to a princess. Her final asking for mercy is not compensated and she is put to death.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem. It is written with much thought and imagination. Our gravity center, does it exist?. Is the weight we carry make us have gravity?. How is faith related to it?. Does being in the clouds make us lose gravity?. Or is it the way of thinking, high and above, make us think about faith. Is faith and perspective ignited from being high and above things?. This is to wonder. Faith can raise us from nothing to having a better perspective. Our gravity center is perhaps within us. It makes us attract others, be attracted and repel others.

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Review of The Aftermath  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a nice story about Kara and David. Kara as a vampire and David as her lover make an interesting story. Do vampires exist?. The story make us wonder. Vampires as a threat to humans can be thought about. Are there groups of vampires moving around?. Kara as the protagonist makes us wonder the same. David's death is tragic, but it could not be avoided. Kara tries in vain to save him, but loses him. The wooden stake pierced in his heart makes his death gory. Kara gets back at the vampire hunter's. Her eventual burying of David's body in the sea waters, makes it a homage.

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Review of Drift  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem. It captures the mind of a seizure affected person. There is a touch of melancholy to it. The stomach whirls as a seizure comes in. It can make one writhe and shake. A seizure can be disastrous, if no one's around. It can make a person incapable to handle it. It's stopping makes one calm down. The medic bags of people who seem like strangers don't seem to help. The poetry brings to light the effects of seizure. The helplessness it brings and how we think about it. The poetry is like a personal experience shared with others.

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Review of My Ex-Dog Blue  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem. It talks about the personal things we have in our lives like our family, pets and other things close to us. Blue as the character of the poem is both amusing and endearing. We would all love to have a dog like blue. Dogs attract us and are friendly to their keepers. They are a source of joy and offer companionship. The trick the poet plays on blue makes us smile as the dog disappears with the duck. The missing signs make us think of how the poet tries to trace him back. The poetry is a nice showcase of our loved ones, our desires to play tricks on them and the loss we might incur.

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Review of 25 Male Facts  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a nice collection of facts. It shows the author's interest in great men and their achievements. It will inspire and inform readers. It makes us think about their personalities and their contribution to society. The collection of this facts has been done with finesse. John Wilkes Booth was the murderer of Abraham Lincoln and his name is a bit of a surprise. The other four men are popular and people know them. John Wilkes Booth was a confederate sympathizer and his name makes us think whether the author is one.

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Review of Goodbye Time  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. It gives us an idea of how we have a displeasure of the world around us. The poet's girlfriend is all tied up with things around them. They are looking for a way out. She is on the verge of giving up and he is watching her. How she is going without a fight amuses him. The poet wished her well when she had a fight. But now she is even giving up on that. A 'Hello' was when you inquired what was wrong. But, now it is too bad and he wants to wish her a goodbye. She is amused and asks 'What the heck!'. The poetry shows how relations can fall off if we do not communicate well or think alike.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem. It is intelligent and delivered with good humor. The poet is known to deliver good poetry. This is one of them. Our experiences at office jobs and the mistakes we make can make people laugh. We perhaps have to be careful about how we handle our job. The poetry makes us think about how we must be cautious about making blunders. People love news and they love to laugh at others. We have to perhaps reanalyze ourselves and understand why we make mistakes. At the same time, we have to be wary of the world around us.

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Review of Monster  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem. It is dark in its narration. We think about the possible monsters hiding within us. The monster within the poet is vicious and cruel. It is to think if it is evil. It can be a dilemma whether this monster can be curtailed or it will run amok. How much damage it can inflict?. What can be the extent of the damage?. Can it be homicide or even worse?. The monster within us is the result of the people and circumstances we are around with. The poetry makes us think, how we must unwind to be human again.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. Love is celebrated and rejoiced. They are lovers and they are glad about each other. Love's occurrence is mentioned in the poetry. Love is present amid a ample living. Life is cosy and love is also present. Passion ignites their hearts and they are in rapture. Love is timeless. The affection present in love makes it go on and on. It is perhaps this quality that makes it timeless. God is the inspiring factor that makes us think in very right terms. Goodness in the heart is perhaps because of him. He is divine and he imparts us the power of love. The poetry is very inspiring and should be applauded.

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Review of A Love Poem  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. It is nice to read and readers will like it. The joy of love and the partnership it creates can make us feel happy and content. It can make us a new person. We can feel the warmth in the poetry. It reflects the joy in the poet's mind. God hovers above a loving couple. He makes them joyous and happy. Perhaps, it is his wish to make them happy. There is promise in the relationship. The bond they share can go on forever. They desire to share company for eternity. This very enchanting as it shows how we cherish others in our lives.

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Review of Prairie Chicken  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is good poetry. It is very life like. The hunt for a priest for a Latin mass comes to a naught. Father Keane is chosen for the mass. The Eagle laying an egg in a Prairie chicken's nest can be a rare occurrence. The sermon makes some people smile. The Eagle being raised as a Prairie Chicken can confuse it of its identity. It will perhaps go along with the chickens. But, if it tries it can soar high in the skies like Eagles do. God is present and his name is taken. The poetry makes us think about the choices we have to make to go on.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

This is a good poem. It is straight in it's meaning and intent. It shows how Aldric as a warrior takes care of his lady love Gwendolyn. Gwendolyn puts her faith in him. He rests her in the nunnery. It shows the bravery and the trust of warrior's. How they are composed and true. He cannot stay back with her hence he moves own. The world around him is not safe. He still goes on into the unknown. The poetry is very inspiring. It makes us think about how tough times force us to sacrifice our true desires and wishes. Aldric would have accepted Gwendolyn in better times.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice self introspection. Asking yourself who you are and waiting for an answer is very much like how we want to know ourselves. Looking for the self in oneself has been a quest with mankind since time began. The question is a query. The beginning of time when men asked themselves who they were was when this query sprang up. We might ask ourselves this question also when we don't get our self worth. We also ask this question when we are lost in a crowd of people who talk a different language. This is a way of self asserting ourselves. To find our true identity.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story. It is written with a true setting in mind. It reminds of two people going for a date. The date is between two different people. One is a bear and the other is a cat. It is perhaps symbolic of how different people with different nature's come together due to circumstances. They have their drinks and dessert. Freddy Fazbear takes Bonnie the cat in his TOYOTA car. The two get along well. They are happy in each other's company. The date has a happy ending. The story makes us think about perfect date's like perfect partner's.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. It talks about fallen love and how union was not coming about. The problems they faced were many but nothing was coming about. He sought God's mercy and it came about. It can fill us with wonder how things change with the almighty's mercy. They think love is the divine dream and they have been blessed. The nickels and the dimes also give joy. Jesus Christ is lord and savior. He brings smiles to all. It is this faith that has paid back in true terms. A joyful union of hearts. The poetry is a tribute to both love as to the lord.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem. It is written with much thought and imagination. Beauty is the ideal of the cherished heart. It can shock you and sweep you off your feet. It can make you think why it is the way it is. The poet is taken by his opposite's beauty. He is impressed by her charm and humor. He cherishes their union and is rejoiced by it. They are happy in each other's company. They enjoy their togetherness. The poetry makes us think how fulfilling, a happy union of hearts is. The company of the two is to be rejoiced.

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Review of Finder's Keepers  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This poem is nice to read. A love poem has its own characteristics. It is sanguine and inspiring. It eulogizes the beauty of love that is within us. Love is a connection. It is a romance of two hearts. The two are enamored by the other. The false promises and the let downs can color many a love affair. But, eventually one chooses the other. This is the connection of two hearts. The misgivings and the differences are perhaps never resolved. Love solves the problems. Love is hence the beginner of the connection between two people.

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Review of Cats  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good piece about trying to draw cats. Cats can make us feel friendly and comfortable. We own cats as pets. Drawing Captain Claws is a challenge. The drawing scares the author. It spills tea on the drawing. The scare it gives reminds the author of lions. Cats are similar to lions and their reactions can be very much alike. The written piece combines the author's abilities at drawing with her writing skills. Drawing animals can be quite an experience and drawing cats can be even more tedious.

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Review of Emptiness  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about emptiness we feel within ourselves. This emptiness is the empty or sullen feeling we have inside of us when we are either distraught or sorrowful about things. There is an empty space or vacuum inside. This vacuum cannot be filled. The black space within us is also placed inside this emptiness. This is the void inside each one of us. This is perhaps the disappointments and the dejection's we face. Nothingness is this same emptiness. This emptiness is indescribable. The poetry is enlightening and makes us aware of the inner feelings inside us.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about a traffic fatality. The fatality is terrible and it takes a toll of the child. The child escapes unhurt but the man gives up his ghost. Rich people driving through poor neighborhoods do not have control over their vehicles. Children playing on the street have very little knowledge about them. This causes the fatality. It is a paradox though that the rich man is targeted and bludgeoned to death by a mob. Mob violence can get out of hand and can result in grave mishappenings.

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Review of Modern living  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. It shows how our lives are modern and different from olden times. Gucci, Prada, video games, Big Macs and Grand Cafe Lattes make life fast and exciting. It makes us wonder how our future lives will be. Modern living is cool and easy. Can sorrows be over sized or celebrity gained. The little people are to be known. Who they are should be defined. The poetry has taken a very obvious topic and contemplated about it. There is a touch of genius to it, though the fast words-me, me, me and s*** could have been done without.

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Review of Table of the Dead  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem. It is written with good thought and intention. Why the table is called the table of the dead has to be thought about?. The fourteenth place is empty and is not occupied by anyone. The place is eventually occupied by the poet. It is set to ward off a curse. The poetry makes us think about death and the eventual end it brings about. The diners perhaps are with dead souls. The danger associated with the fourteenth place should be understood. That danger is overridden. The poet is lucky to have gotten over the superstition.

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