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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about philosophical pursuits and how they seem gibberish. Diet and exercise keeps one healthy and fit. Philosophical musings can keep the mind healthy and alive. They can open the gates of wisdom and make us aware of ourselves. They can make us connect with the universe around us. The poetry shows how philosophy works on one side and how time controls us on the other side. Time is the factorial that connects us to reality. Time is our savior and it keeps us sane. Philosophy can entangle us, but the time we have on hand can untangle us.

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Review of Autumnal Spirits  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem about autumnal spirits. The dance of the pixies on mountain streams makes autumnal spirits soar. The woodland nymphs enjoy the rhythm of the river. They are compared to ballerinas. The poetry is nice to read. Readers will like the Dorsimbra form. The poetry is an ode to the autumn season and how everything changes into a new form. Are Pixies fairy like creatures who delight us?. Autumn is celebrated in the poem. It makes us feel ecstatic about it. The poetry makes our spirits soar.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a good poem written with thought and imagination. The cowboy rides on his roan horse. He comes to town in search of his wife and child's killers. The poetry is very graphic describing in detail how the revenge is carried out. The three killers are cold blooded and they have no mercy. The cowboy's entering the town is very dramatic and it makes the people to be taken by surprise. They wonder about him. His killing of the three killers makes us think how the wild wild west works. It makes us feel good about the cowboy and his brave and daring effort. The poetry is exact in its meaning.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about a man and his dog. Rusty is his trusted dog. He takes him around with him. The lion they see might be an escaped pet or a circus lion in town. It would be startling to see a fierce creature in the middle of town. Dogs bark at fierce animals let loose in towns or cities. The dream about the entire sequence can make us feel shocked. The lion delivers a blow to his gut. Rusty is not very enthusiastic about the lion. He disowns his master. The poetry brings forth the fierceness of wild creatures and how we encounter them.

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Review of Poem due Jan 11th  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

This is a nice poem about the Tor Down Glastonbury way. It is written in much detail and with a lot of thought. Gywn Ap Nudd guards the Tor. The druids came to climb the Tor. Massive oaks gave direction. Magog and Gog are the names of the two oak trees. Magic is in the air. The poetry brings forth the importance and relevance of historical places. It is one of its kind. The Tor is guarded and it is done with righteous intention. The people who guard it have a sense of belonging to it. The poetry is longer than usual and is good to read.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about a Chinese tallow tree. The branches keep falling off the tree. The poetry is nice to read. It shows how the tree reacts in summer and in spring. The yard art of nature is on display with the trapped branch for all to see. The poetry shows the contrast between summer and spring. It shows how it provides for nesting space in summer for birds and squirrels, while providing for new leaves in springtime. The springtime's thunderstorm fail to dislodge it. It is a lucky branch.

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Review of Tinkering away  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about Tinkering. Much thought has to be applied when thinking to write. We all struggle some days to get over our mental writing block. Nothing seems to come about. We make attempts and attempts but after several attempts we are able to write something intelligent. The poem has to be appreciated as it has been written with a lot of effort. The sun in the window grazes the poet's face. The poet thinks about the future and the new world that will come about. Adventures are also on his cards.

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Review of Bunking The Truth  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice piece about the US Intelligence agencies and their debunking of the truth. UFO's are close to the public imagination and we look forward for contact with extraterrestrial life. A nine foot alien photographed in the cargo bay can produce a lot of excitement and information about alien life in space. UFO's have been around for too long, but enough information about them is still not available. The cover up by the intelligence agencies by labeling them as a hoax is sad. The article is well written. It brings out a reality that we are facing about the lack of information of UFO's and extraterrestrial life.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

The poem is inspiring. It talks about love and heart break. The chemistry between two lovers is the attraction between them. The poetry has flow and rhythm. The games that minds of lovers play and how it turns to nothing is there to see. We have to blame ourselves for the games we play in love. It has to be seen why we are left faceless and restrained. It is perhaps because of the embarrassment we face of losing out with our lovers. Disdain is what comes to us. Being left stained and miserable is usually the lot of lovers. The poetry makes us think about the folly of love and how it can be an eye opener or bring about downfall.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice piece about everything we think about ourselves and our lives. It is a Christmas message. Our spiritual needs, our financial resources, our parents, friends and relatives are matters in our lives. Our destinies are under our control. We make, reject, choose, select and collect. These are all the things we think about and treasure. Our thoughts and wishes shape our lives and the attitudes we have. We should not think we are the victims of our circumstances. our destinies are under our control.

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Review of MUCH MORE  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This piece is nicely written and makes us think about all things life is made up of. How it can amaze us, surprise us, shock us and make us think about god. God is the ultimate reality that exists. We find him after we experience everything big and small. The discussion about the afterlife is also something we can think about. God is the creator and we meet our creator. We can develop our bodies in gyms and have supplements. In the end, we carry our souls to god and everything else becomes useless. The money we earned, the cars we drive, the houses we have- all become of no need.

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Review of My True Love  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. It is lovely and inspiring. It might make us think about our possible lovers. Love makes the world go round. True love is rare and you are lucky if you can find your true love. The poem is good to read. Readers will like the poem. They will enjoy it. The poetry makes us think about love and how it can be sweet. The poetry introduces us to the joys of love. It makes us think about how love transforms us. Love is the most transforming force in the world. To be attracted to someone and to be compensated is perhaps the biggest joy of life.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

The poetry is a request for writing dot com members. It pleads new poets to stop seeing from evil eyes. It also asks them to stop being cowards and to hide behind genuine poets. It says the desire to be a star should be curtailed. Good poetry should come from the poet's minds. It asks to do hard work and put in effort. Day dreaming should stop. The poet requests the new poets to stop seeing through the sincere poets on the website. It also warns them they are being seen through. The poetry is a straight request to make more efforts while writing and to be more sincere in one's efforts.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)

This is a good poem about a girl suffering from cancer. The poem is good to read and makes us think about the challenges cancer poses to us. Cancer surgery is in and people take treatment for the same. The poetry makes us think about the love between the father and the daughter. The orb of light is amazing and adds to the mystic of the story. The story makes us think about the eventualities that life can bring about. The dream she has is never revealed in the poem. The strange glow on her face is due to the orb she encounters in the groove.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story of three ugly sisters and their comparison to Donald Trump. Analyzing Donald Trump becomes a conversation between the grandfather and her granddaughter. Donald Trump and his character is analyzed. The story of the three ugly sisters and their characters are compared to Donald Trump. The story is based in the land of the free. They want to be the boss of the land of the free. Trump's character is described as Arrogance, Pretentious and Mendacity. The story makes us think and analyse president Trump's character.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

The title of this poem is amusing. Astromorphogeny makes us think about the different possibilities it can have. The astral thrones are upon the hill. The knights are to be chided and the rogues to be killed. Heaven calls. The mind has to be jailed and the soul to be freed. The fairies' runes are to be clinged to. All right and wrong have to be abdicated. The siren's song is brought out for all to see. You shall be accused of mental pirouettes. The poetry takes us through the twists and turns of emotions. The ill effects are to be seen at the end.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poetry. It is written with skill and imagination. The poet has lofty goals and the folks sing in a chorus. The help he receives is in a form of a prayer. He has god's grace. A dream of this form has a weighty end. The poet's heart beats with joy. He has been blessed by the almighty and the experience becomes a lesson to enjoy. The poetry makes us think and act in faithful ways. It makes us think about the joys life has in store for us. It also makes us think about the grace of god that surrounds us.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


The story is nice to read. It makes us think about the girl and her prince. She initially does not believe her, but goes on to the ball with him. The witch controls her actions. Her killing and murder of the prince makes us think about her intentions. She is herself baffled by the murder. The clock strikes twelve at the end. The story is shocking and appalling. It makes us wonder why the girl was under the influence of the witch and why the murder occurred. This is especially true when she loved the prince.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. It is written with thought and intelligence. The poetry makes us see things through the laughter. We see life through laughter. Laughter can light up our days. It is a different game to play. The sun breaks through as day breaks. We are also forced to see a setting sun. Eternity is before our eyes. The poetry will make readers analyze life through the eyes of laughter. Laughter will make us think in a different light. Laughter also makes us laugh at life. The poetry is inspiring and makes us think again about all the things that happen to us.

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Review of ArChi- ROSE DAY  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a nice story about two lovers. They are attracted to each other and are in love. The rose day is special and is being celebrated by the two. Roses are a symbol of love and affection. The different colors of the rose add to the excitement in their love life. Each color of the rose signifies a certain meaning and purpose. It is given with this intention and feeling. Aryan and Sanchi are two such characters attracted towards each other. In the end, they dance to the tunes and the light go off.

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Review of Victoria's London  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

The poetry is nice and good. The virtues-good and bad of London are brought out in the poetry. The death of Albert and his mourning by Victoria. The whores of London are also mentioned in the poetry. Jack the ripper was prominent and notorious. This is the dark part of London. The different colors of London are brought out in the poetry. London flashes as a city of both light and dark shades. The poetry adds meaning and purpose to itself. London is referred to as Victoria's London. Hence, it is shown to be belonging to her.

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Review of Hidden Thorns  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

The poetry is good. The poet compares love to a rosebud. The thorns are there for all to see. Disdain can come in, in any relationship. Love is not immune to the weather outside. The poet asks to be beware of the thorns. The thorns are said to be hidden. The poetry is nice and good. It makes us think about our relationships. The poet has made the metaphor of a rose the central piece of the poetry. A rose, its blooming and its eventual perfume can make us feel good. The poetry will make us sensitive to others and their ways of thinking.

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Review of A Helping Hand  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

The story is different. It is written with depth and thought. The shelter and the homeless people are the focus of the protagonist's attention. There are several things on his mind. His engaging his girlfriend into his activities also stands out. His girlfriend eventually hands Joe a check of five million dollars. The story makes us think about the homeless people and the people who are ready to help them out. He witnesses a stabbing, two assaults and a mugging. The church helps out the weak and the homeless.

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Review of Yummy Salad  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This poem is a good recipe for making a salad. It brings out the joy of making and enjoying a salad. Lettuce, tomatoes, orange carrots, and dressing, all go into the salad. The salad is quite tasteful as can be made out from the poem. The poetry is well written and brings out the love of food in us. Salads are eaten after a meal or as a diet food to reduce weight. The topic chosen has to be appreciated. The salad is quite well brought out and will make readers feel good about it. The poetry makes us think again about our food habits.

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Review of Once, I Thought  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. It is inspiring and well written. Being a snob after achieving awards and recognition is quite understandable. The prestige earned was well worth it. His learning of tricks to do his job well is how he does his work now. He keeps too busy with his job with this tricks. His snobbish behavior has changed as a result. The poetry makes us think how we change with times. How new tricks make us change in our jobs. As we get more real our pride vanishes and reality takes over. The poetry is an eye opener how the world works.

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