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Review by Mariella Stift
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hmm, very interesting. Based on the picture you included, I'm guessing you based this poem off of it. The imagery was very interesting. With regards to that the only thing I'd want is for you to go even further with it. The flow of the poem was good, which isn't always easy when writing a free form piece. Although it could be improved by making sure you only repeat words with intentional repetition. The last stanza I loved. It changed the entire interpretation with the last line and reframed the poem. When I went back and read it again I looked at it in that context and gained even more. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. 9/10
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Review of The Handmade Card  
Review by Mariella Stift
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was awesome. It captured the finesse of all art work, in my opinion. You have this idea in your mind, often times it even changes by the end, and you draw and erase, and erase some more, as you try to bring this idea to life. Then of course, after spending hours on this beautiful piece of art, it's underappreciated and tossed aside, quite literally in your piece. Maybe you get upset and question why you even try, or maybe you smile at the irony and do it again because, "It's friggin fun." That was so fun to read! It made my day before it even started. (It's 5 o clock where I am.) Anyway, I really enjoyed this, and I just want to say you've got some talent man/women/whoever.

- Mariella Stift
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Review of Gina  
Review by Mariella Stift
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really well written, but it's hard for me to understand what exactly the concept is. You definitely had me hooked and I'd love to read more, but the details are a little fuzzy. I can't tell if Gina is some sort of witch or creature, or if she's just a slinky girl from work that uses guys to get promotions some how. I'd love to read more of your writing though, in fact I think I'm going to check it out after I finish writing this. If you feel like it, I'd love it if you'd take a look at my work, "Orbis," if you have a free minute. Overall, this is definitely a piece of great literary work, it was very pleasant to read even if the concept had me a little confused.

-Mariella Stift
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Review by Mariella Stift
Rated: GC | (5.0)
Damn. That was so intensely amazing I have no words. All my writer-y skills are gone, that was just “wow.” There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but your story was so substantive that when reading my mind rolled right over them. I definitely want to know more. Just once again, wow.
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Review of Crisis Averted  
Review by Mariella Stift
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey there, I found this really interesting, and surprisingly realistic. I think you did a really good job with the wording it seemed to flow very nicely. At the beginning in the first and second paragraph there were a few places where I thought first time readers, including myself, could get a little confused, but overall I had a clear view of what was going on. I think you did a really good job on this challenge and was wondering if you'd maybe take a look at my work, I only have one piece out right now. I'd really value your opinion. If not it's completely fine, I just read your work and saw a really competent author. Good job, keep up the awesome writing.
-Mariella
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