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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello J.L. O'Dell(The Reaper),

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Overall Impression:

This was one of the best short stories that I have read in a long time. If not the best. I loved it. Great Job.

The Story Itself:

What I liked the most about this short story is what it was about. I love stories like this one.

Location, Location, Location:

I'm not exactly sure where this short story takes place. I know that it's an office. And if I read it right it's an executive office. But other than that I don't know. A little more detail would have been nice. But I understand why you didn't do it because of your Word Limitations.

Your Characters:

There are a lot of main characters in this short story. Starting with the executive chair and ending with the lamp. Most would say that the janitor is the main character because he's the only human in it. But I disagree. To me, it doesn't matter who they are or how old they are. It's who is in the story the most. The only thing that I would have done differently was to give them all a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

I think that you did a very good job with the dialogue with this short story. It read natural to me.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I read. If there are any, I didn't read them.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other as good or better than this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them, if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Hello Charity Marie - I am Back!,

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Overall Impression:

I didn't like this short story. Because I loved it. It was one of the best stories, if not the best, that I have read in a long time. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Story Itself:

What I liked the most about this story is how it ended. I love a good twist at the end.

Location, Location, Location:

You didn't go into a lot of detail with this short story. But you did a little. I understand why you didn't do it, though. It's because of your Word Limitations. Right?

Your Characters:

Of course, Elizabeth is the main character in this short story. But her mother is also a big part of it too. I liked that you gave Elizabeth a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. But I would have given the mother a name too. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

The dialogue in this short story reads natural. At least it does to me.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I read. if there was any, I didn't read them.

Any Last Thoughts:

I noticed that you have several other short stories in your portfolio. A lot of Poetry too. If they are as good, or better, than this one, I would like the chance to read some of them too, if I can.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of A Lovely Grey Day  
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Hello Sadorose,

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Overall Impression:

This was a very good poem. At least I think that it was.

The Poem Itself:

What I liked the best about this poem is that it had a theme to it, a lovely cool day. Some poems make me wonder want they are about because it reads like rambling thoughts. But this one didn't.

How It Made Me Feel:

It made me smile. That's how I feel about this poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

I'm not sure. But you might have a missing word in this poem. Shouldn't it be 'in the air' instead of 'in air.' You might want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts:

I noticed that you have several other poems in your portfolio. If I could, I would like the chance to read some of them too. Because if they are anything like this one, I'm sure I would like them too.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

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Review of A Visitor  
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Hello Lovina,

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Overall Impression:

I really liked this Short Story very much. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good. At least I think that it was.

The Story Itself:

This story was a little hard to read because it's only one large paragraph. Personally, I would have split it up into several paragraphs. I think that it's easier to read if it split up like that.

Location, Location, Location:

The setting for this short story is a female's bedroom. Not sure what her age is. So, I'm not sure if she's an adult or younger. From what I have read she reads like she's an adult, though. A little more detail about this setting may have answered that unasked question.

Your Characters:

Of course, Bonnie is the main character in this short story. In fact, she was the only one in it. True, whoever she saw was also in it. But we don't know for sure who or what they are. I liked that you gave Bonnie a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

There was no dialogue in this short story. So, I'm not going to comment on that. But there was a lot of thinking, though. Most reviewers don't think that thinking is dialogue. I do. It's just internal instead of vocal.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

I don't think that there is anything in the rules that says that you shouldn't be writing a short story in only one paragraph. I'm not too good at grammar. So, I could be wrong about this. You might want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts:

I'm curious about something. Whether this female was an adult or younger, why didn't they start screaming for help when they first started seeing someone else in their room?

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of The Time Machine  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello Mary Ann MCPhedran,

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Overall Impression:

I chose this short story to read and review because of its title. Because I thought that it would be Science Fiction. As a fellow Science Fiction writer, I was sure that I would like it. But when I saw your text color choice, I was starting to change my mind about that. Don't get me wrong. I still like this short story a lot. It was just hard for me to read because of the color choice. Is there a reason why you chose this color?

The Story Itself:

I'm not sure. But I think that this short story is set in the future. At least that's the way it reads to me. Am I right about that?

Location, Location, Location:

Not sure where this short story is taking place. There were hints as to where it's at. Things like an auction, house, and garage. But other than that I'm not sure where it is.

Your Characters:

Johnny's name is mention in this short story. But the main character in it isn't. I liked that you gave Johnny a name. But I would have given the main character a name too. I know that can be hard to do with a story like this one. It can be done, though. Something like having Johnny say her name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

The dialogue in this short story looks good. At least it does to me.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

I noticed several grammar errors. Things like missing periods, an 's' at the end of a word that shouldn't be there, and a space between a word. If you re-read this short story again, I think you will read these errors too.

Any Last Thoughts:

I'm curious about something. Why didn't you categorize it as Science Fiction? Is there a reason why you didn't do that?


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello TATSUYAKEMI,

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Overall Impression:

This short story was a little bit confusing to me. Don't get me wrong. This might read like I didn't like it. But I did. I liked it a lot. I just didn't understand some of it.

The Story Itself:

I know that this short story is about a guitar. And the person who plays it on the beach. But other than that, I'm not sure what it is about. It just seemed to ramble on to me. Like the main character in it just thought whatever was on his mind.

Location, Location, Location:

You did a very good job describing the settings for this short story. At least I think that you did. A lot of writers are too vague about doing it. And then there are some like me who tend to go overboard on it. But I think that you did it just right. In between too vague and too much.

Your Characters:

Whoever is telling this short story is the main character in it. But who that person is I don't know. I'm not even sure if they are male or female. But if I read it correctly then they are male. A name may have solved that confusion. Unless it's a name that can be either gender. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

The only dialogue in this short story is the singing that you are doing. Some writers, if not most of them, don't think that lyrics are dialogue. But I do. It's just a different kind of dialogue.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

One possible error that I think that I noticed is the word reazon. I don't think that it's a word. Unless it's a foreign spelling of it. Grammarly doesn't think that it's a word either.

Any Last Thoughts:

What was this short story about? Other than it being about a guitar being played on a beach.


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Hello Ezekiel Stephens,

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Overall Impression:

This was a very interesting short story. Don't get me wrong. It may read like I didn't like it. But I did. In fact, I like it very much.

The Story Itself:

Why do I find this short story so interesting? Because of what it's about.

Location, Location, Location:

I'm not sure where this short story takes place. I know that it's sometime in our future. and that it's probably here on Earth. But that's all that I know about it.

Your Characters:

Of course, Calibri is the main character in this story. In fact, he's the only one. And I liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

There is only one line of dialogue in this story. And I don't think that it is dialogue. It reads more like an old saying than dialogue.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

The only thing that might be an error in this story is the one line of dialogue. I think that it should be in single quotation marks instead of doubles. My grammar isn't very good. So, I may be wrong about this. You might want to check on it, though.

Any Last Thoughts:

One of the main reasons why I chose this short story to read and review is because it's science fiction. So, I figured that I would like it even before I read it. But I was wrong. I loved it. I'm so happy that I got the chance to read it.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Escape.  
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Hello addie.cass,

This review is brought to you by the Member-to-Member Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

This is one of the best short stories that I have read in a long time. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that great.

The Story Itself:

Why did I like this story so much? It's because of what it's about. the only thing I don't understand about it is that it starts off with him being an assassin. In fact, the first paragraph makes him read like one. But he's not.

Location, Location, Location:

I know that this is a house. But I'm not sure where it's at. What it looks like? Things like that. It reads old or rundown. Am I right about that?

Your Characters:

One this I would have done differently is given these individuals a name. Especially, since I'm not sure who the main character is. Are they male or female? It reads like you are a female. But I'm not sure. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

There is no dialogue in this story. So, I'm not going to comment on that. But there was a lot of thinking going on. Most writers don't think that thinking is dialogue. But I think that it is. It's just internal instead of verbal.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could read. That doesn't mean that there aren't any. It just means that if there are I didn't notice them.

Any Last Thoughts:

Did you win this contest with this entry? If you didn't, you should have.


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Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Self-respect  
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Hello somik,

This review is brought to you by the Member-to-Member Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

This is a very interesting read. Don't get me wrong. It might read like I didn't like it. But I did. I like it very much. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Story Itself:

What I liked the best about this short story is what Mary is doing for a poor boy about her age. No ages are given. But it reads like they are very young. Personally, I would have specified their age. There isn't anything wrong with not giving them ages. That's just the way I write my stories. Especially, when it comes to children, preteens, and teens.

Location, Location, Location:

I'm not exactly sure where this short story takes place. But it reads like it's a candy story of some kind that Mary stops by daily on her way home from school.

Your Characters:

Of course, Mary is the main character in this short story. But the boy is a big part of it too. Is there a reason why you didn't give him a name? I liked that you gave Mary a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

It looks like you may have made a punctuation error when it comes to the dialogue in this short story. I think that you should put either a comma or a period at the end of it depending on if the speaker is saying it or reacting to it. I'm not very good at grammar. So, I may be wrong about this. You might want to check into that.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

The only thing that might be a problem with this short story is how it is written. I think that these individual paragraphs should be separated by a space or that they should be indented a little to show that they are separate paragraphs.

Any Last Thoughts:

Was this part of a contest? Because of its length, it reads like it may have been.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

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Hello m.m. morris,

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Overall Impression:

What I liked the most about this poem is the dialogue within it. True, it was only the one time. But I like that it was there. Most poetry writers don't do that.

The Poem Itself:

The main reason why I chose this poem is that it was the first one in this folder. But I also chose it because of the title. And I'm very glad that I read this one.

How It Make Me Feel:

After reading this poem, I felt happy that I had the chance to read it. I liked it that much.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No capitalization anywhere in this poem? I think that's a grammar error. but I'm not sure. You may want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts:

I noticed that there are fifteen other poems in this collection. If they are as good as this one, or better, I would like to read some of them too if I could.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Hello DMT - PASSED,

These are just my opinions. You are the only one who can decide whether you agree with me or not.


Overall Impression:

It's hard to review a Chapter in a novel unless you start at the beginning. But that doesn't mean that it can't be done within the novel like this one. I'm very glad that I got the chance to review this one. I liked it very much. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. it was that good.


The Chapter Itself:

I'm not a big fan when it comes to werewolf or vampire stories. But I liked the way that you presented it in writing. Especially, the part where Jake is both a werewolf and a vampire. At least that's the way it reads in your Title Description.


Location, Location, Location:

You wrote about several locations in this Chapter. But you didn't go into too much detail about them. That's probably because you have done so in previous Chapters or future ones. That's the good part about novels. You can describe locations either all at once or over Chapters. What little you have done here looks good to me.


Your Characters:

Of course, Jake and The General are your main characters. but you have introduced several others in this Chapter too. Personally, I would have given The General a name too. But that's just the way that I like to write my stories. I liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

I didn't read anything wrong with how your characters spoke. and the sentence structure looked good to me. It read like that's the way they are supposed to speak. I also liked that thinking parts. Most reviewers don't think that thinking is speaking. But I'm not one of them.


Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

It looks like you may have had some problems with apostrophes and some missing commas. I also noticed that you capitalized 'General' once in this part of the Chapter. But the other times you didn't. I'm not sure, but I think that he should be capitalized all the time. Then again, I might be wrong about all this. I have a lot of trouble with grammar. You might want to check into that.


Any Last Thoughts:

What I liked the best about this Chapter is that it's not too long. But it's not short either. some novelist can have a problem with either making them too short or too long. Personally, I make my Chapters ten or fifteen pages in length depending on the type of novel it is. That's about two or three pages per part. Overall, I think that you have done a great job with this chapter so far. If your other Chapters are as good, or better than this one you have a bestseller. At least I think that you will.



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Hello 1,

This review is brought to you by the SuperPower Request for Review. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

This is one of the best stories that I have read in a long time. I liked it very, very much. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Story Itself:

It reads like you are telling this story instead of showing it. But I may be wrong about that. I'm very bad about telling and not showing.

Location, Location, Location:

I'm not exactly sure where this story takes place. That's kind of scarce. A little bit more detail about where Nadia and Rudolph are would have been nice.

Your Characters:

There are only two characters in this Short Story: Nadia and Rudolph. I liked that you gave your them names. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

The dialogue in this story read real to me. It read like what people would say.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I noticed. If there was any, I didn't read them.

Any Last Thoughts:

I think that you did a great job with this story. Do you have any more as good or better than this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them. This story was that great.


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Hello Rima~New Job,

This review is brought to you by the SuperPower Request for Review. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

I love Science Fiction. That's the main reason why I chose this Short Story to read. And I'm very glad that I did. I liked it very much.

The Story Itself:

It's a little bit too technical for me. I don't write technical because it can be hard for some people to read. Especially, if they don't understand it.

Location, Location, Location:

You did a very good job of describing your locations. At least I think that you did.

Your Characters:

One of the things that I liked the most about this story is that you gave your characters a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

Overall, I think that you did a great job with your dialogue. My only concern is with some of the words I didn't understand or think are misspelled.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

ship'd and trees're aren't words. At least I don't think that they are. Grammarly doesn't think they are. I also noticed a few missing commas. Brachytrachelopan isn't a word either according to dictionary.com. But it looks like it is with Grammarly. So, it might be. You might want to check into that too.

Any Last Thoughts:

I noticed that you wrote this story for a contest. Did you win this contest? If not, you should have. It's that good.


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Hello Editing is BLUE,

This review is brought to you by the SuperPower Request for Review. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

At first, I didn't think that I would like this Short Story because I'm not a big fan of History. But I know what I like. And I liked this story very much. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Story Itself:

True, I have written a few Military stories. But I'm not a very big fan of it. If I would write a story about the Military that isn't Science Fiction, it probably would be about World War Two or the Civil War. I admire anyone who can write a story like this one.

Location, Location, Location:

I'm not sure where this story takes place. I know it's about Germany and World War Two. But not where the main part of it took place. A little bit more detail about that would have been nice.

Your Characters:

Did I miss something? It looks like you only gave Harry and Tom a name. I would have given the main character one too. I know that's hard when your main character is your POV. But it can be done. I probably would have had Harry calling him by name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.


How They Spoke:

It's hard to write a story when different languages are spoken. How do you write them? That can be very hard to do. I think that you did a great job with this Short Story.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No problems that I read. Except for one paragraph that might be one. The one about tears. It read as incomplete to me. You might want to look into that.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other stories as good or better than this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them too.


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Hello seducerofwordspoet,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourteenth year with us.


Overall Impression:

This is a very weird poem. One that I don't think I have ever read before. Is this the kind of Poetry that I'm not familiar with?

The Poem Itself:

Don't get me wrong. This might read like I don't like this poem. But I do. I like this poem a whole lot.

How It Make Me Feel:

A little bit confused. Not because of what is written, but how it is written.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could find. If there are any, I didn't see them.

Any Last Thoughts:

What I liked the most about this poem is that it's centered. That's also what I liked the least about it too. Usually centering a poem makes it a lot easier to read. At least it is for me. But with this one, it isn't because it's so different.


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Hello jpmurphy,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventh year with us.


Overall Impression:

This poem is a little different than any other poem I have read. Most poems are broken up into four to six lines per group. Some are one big group. But I've never seen one with one or two really long ones. Is this a type of poem that I don't know about?

The Poem Itself:

What I like the best about this poem is that it rhymes. I admire anyone who can rhyme their poems. Probably because I can't do it myself.

How It Make Me Feel:

It makes me feel very happy. Happy I have gotten the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could read. I think you have done a great job with this poem.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other poems as good, or better, like this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them too.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Hello christo,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression:

I'm a little bit confused about this poem. It might be a Relationship one. But where is the Biographical and the Romance/Love within it? There doesn't seem to be any for this poem. At least I didn't see any. Did I miss them?

The Poem Itself:

What I liked the most about this poem is that it's centered. I think that it makes it easier to read if it's centered.

How It Make Me Feel:

This poem confused me. I was expecting some Romance/Love within it. But I didn't read any of that. that's why I'm so confused about it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

I don't think that it's a grammar error etc. But it is with WDC. Did you know that within the title for this poem is ?

Any Last Thoughts:

Don't get me wrong. This review may read like I don't like it. I liked it a whole lot.


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Heart and Mind Raid


Hello kotenok,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your thirteenth year with us.


Overall Impression:

This is a very good poem. At least I think that it is. The only reason why I'm not giving it a higher Rating is that it looks like you have made a couple of mistakes.

The Poem Itself:

I'm a little bit confused about this poem. In some group of lines the lines rhyme. But in a few, they don't. Did I miss something here or is this a poem style that I'm not familiar with? I admire anyone who can rhyme their poems. Probably because I can't do it myself.

How It Made Me Feel:

Very, Very happy. That's how I feel about this poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

It looks like you have a couple of missing A's in this poem. Shouldn't it be 'You showed me a world I never knew' and 'You’re always a centre of attention'

Any Last Thoughts:

February is the month for Romance/Love. Poetry is too. That's one of the reasons why I selected this poem to read. It's not the only one, though. I also am reading it because this is your anniversary month too.


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Hello Little Phoenix,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression:

I think that you have done a great job with this poem. The only reason why I didn't give a perfect rating is that it looks like you may have made a couple of errors.

The Poem Itself:

Rhyming. That's one of the things I liked the most about this poem. I admire anyone who can do that. Probably because I can't.

How It Made Me Feel:

What I liked the most about this poem is how it made me feel about it. I feel happy that I have gotten the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

It looks like you may have made a couple of mistakes when it comes to this poem. But I might be wrong about that. One error is repetition. When it comes to short stories, novels, etc. repetition is a no-no. I'm not sure if it is with Poetry or not. The other error I think you made is with the brackets around the word 'still.' I don't think that you're supposed to do that in a poem.

Any Last Thoughts:

Don't get me wrong. This might read like I didn't like this poem. But I did. I liked it very, very much.


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Hello A.C, Aurora,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourteenth year with us.


Overall Impression:

Wow. What more can I say about this poem? This is one of the best poems, if not the best one, I have read in a long time. I liked it very, very much.

The Poem Itself:

What I liked the best about it is how you wrote a poem based on Sleeping Beauty. You could have just based it on that and made it slightly different. But you didn't. I like that a whole lot.

How It Made Me Feel:

This poem made me feel very happy. Happy that I have gotten a chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I can find. I think you have done a great job with this poem.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other poems like this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them. Especially, if they are as good or better than this one.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Heart and Mind Raid


Hello GWC,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression:

This is a very interesting poem. Don't get me wrong. I liked it very much. it was just the way that it was written that I find so interesting.

The Poem Itself:

I think that you have done a great job with this poem. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. That's how good it is.

How It Made Me Feel:

Very happy. That's how I feel about this poem. Happy that I have gotten the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could find. Unless it's the punctuation at the end of your lines. There isn't any. You capitalized the first word. but there isn't any punctuation at the end of them.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other poems as good, or better, than this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Hello Billy the Kid,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression:

I don't think that I have ever seen a poem like this written before. Is this the kind of poem that I don't know about? Don't get me wrong? This might read like I don't like this poem. but I do. I liked it a whole lot.

The Poem Itself:

Most poems are only a few words per line. But this one has a few hundred. a lot of writers indent the first lines of their Short Story paragraphs. I'm one of them. But this poem is just the opposite. It's indented after the first line. That's why I liked this poem so much. It's different than any other poem I have read before.

How It Made Me Feel:

This poem made me feel sad. Sad because he's not going to get what he wants, her.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could find. The only thing that might be one is how it was written. I don't think that it is. But you might want to look into that.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other poems like this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them too.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Hello Michael Mulcahy,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your ninth year with us.


Overall Impression:

What can I say about this poem except for that I liked it. I didn't understand what it had to do with Romance/Love, though. did I miss the meaning of this poem?

The Poem Itself:

I am not a big fan of Poetry because I'm not very good at it myself. But I know what I like to read. And I liked this poem a whole lot. I think that you have done a very good job with it.

How It Made Me Feel:

It makes me feel happy. Happy that I have gotten the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

I'm not sure, but it may be an error that you didn't capitalize most of your lines. then again, you didn't end them with punctuation either. So, I may be wrong about the capitalization. You may want to look into that.

Any Last Thoughts:

February is the month for Romance/Love. What says that better than Poetry. that's one of the reasons why I selected this poem to read and review. Another reason why is because this is your anniversary month with us too.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Hello esaul,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourteenth year with us.


Overall Impression:

If I read this poem right, it's broken up into four sentence paragraphs. Yet you write it as a one sentence per line paragraph. Is this the kind of Poetry that I don't know about?

The Poem Itself:

The title description doesn't match the poem. Don't get me wrong. I liked this poem a whole lot. I just don't understand what the title description has to do with the poem. It doesn't look like it does to me.

How It Make Me Feel:

This poem made me feel good. I'm so happy that I got the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I can read. Unless it's because it's one long one paragraph. I don't think that it is. But it might be. You may want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts:

February is the month for Romance/Love. That's one of the reasons why I'm reviewing this poem. I'm also doing it because this is your anniversary month.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Heart and Mind Raid


Hello -B-,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression:

You have done a very good job with this poem. At least I think that you have.

The Poem Itself:

At first, I didn't understand the title and title description had in common. I thought it might be about Puppy Love or First Love. But then I started reading it. Now I understand it is about a bird.

How It Made Me Feel:

I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. Not because I don't feel anything about it. It's just the opposite. I can't decide how I feel the most about it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

It looks like you misspelled 'is' in 'Let is sit in your nest.' Shouldn't it be 'it' instead?

Any Last Thoughts:

What I liked the most about this poem is how the title and title description reflected what the poem was about. but it leads the reading into believing it's about young love. That's why I liked this poem very much.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

                                                                               PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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