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Review of Roses  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello ~QPdoll,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

Did you just create this image for this Raid? From the caption on it, it sure does read like you have. If you did, I think that is great. And if you didn't, it's still pretty great. At least I think that it is because of what the image displays. I love roses. Especially, the red ones with a hint of white on them. You have done a great job with this image. Do you have any more like it? If you do, I would be very interested in taking a look at some of them too. That's how good I think that this one is.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Flying Dragon  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Maryann-thx Poulynoe,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

I love animated images. Especially, the ones here on WDC. It's probably because I still haven't figured out how to do them myself yet. I also like it because it's about a dragon. and I like dragons a lot. True, I don't do a lot of writing about dragons because that's Fantasy and I specialize in Science Fiction. But I have written a few stories about them.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Red Roses  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Maryann-thx Poulynoe,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

Another animated image. This one is about red roses. And I love roses. Especially, when they are red because that is my favorite color. But I also like animation. So, which one do I like the most? That's a hard question for me to answer because I like them both so much. If I did have to choose, it would probably be the color red because I have loved it a whole lot longer than I have animation.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hello Fivesixer,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

I'm not a big fan of Pink Floyd. But I do like a lot of their music, though. I also know what I like. And I like this image a whole lot. What I liked the most about it is the two guys. One looks a lot like Starsky from the TV series Starsky and Hutch. and the other one looks like he's on fire.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Carly - Happy New Year!,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

I agree with your caption. This is a very beautiful image. What I like the most about it is the image itself. Not only is it shaped in the shape of a heart, but that heart is made of flowers. I think that you have done a great job with this image. Do you have any more like it? If you do, I sure would be interested in looking at them too. This one is that great.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Pink Ghostie  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Dragon- CNY OPEN!,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

I really, really love this image. What I like the most about it is its animation. You made it look like a real ghost because of it. I also liked the caption for it. Especially the caption within the image itself. I'm not a big fan of pink. But after looking at this image about a million times, I'm starting to like it more and more. I also like that it looks like a Pac-Man or Ms. Pac-Man ghost. I'm a big fan of both of these video games.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Mother's Day  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello PurplePrincess,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

What can I say about this image except that I liked it a whole, whole lot? the best part about this image is the theme/title of it. I'm a big fan of mothers. And what they do for their kid(s). I also liked the image itself. It's very colorful and pretty. Do you have any other images like this one? I hope that you do. If so, I would be very interested in taking a look at them too if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello LegendaryMasK❤,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

I like this image a lot. In fact, I like it so much that I can't take my eyes off of it to do this review. That's how much I like it. I don't understand why I can't stop looking at it because I don't know. After all, it's just a little bit of red with a lot of black that forms into a mask. But I can't.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Travel Pictures  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Sum1,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

I love these photos. They make me want to do some traveling of my own. True, I can't afford to do that right now. But if I could I would like to go to every place that you have gone to. That way I could take a picture and see how close of a match they would be. I'm not a professional like you are. But I think that mine would be very close to most of them.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Prosperous Snow,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

I'm not sure what to say about this photo except that I liked it. I liked it a lot. What I liked the most about it is the description that you gave for the people in it. You didn't list all the people in it. But it reads like you mentioned the main ones. I also noticed that you have 14 other photos. Do you have any more like this one? If you do, I would like the chance to look at them too.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Jeannie,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

There are two things that I liked the best about this Sig. One is how you got it from Brook. The second one is the message that it contained within it. I can't decide which thing I like the best. So, I decided it was a tie. But if I had to choose, it would have to be the second one because I agree with the message.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Any Time C-Notes  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Maryann-thx Anon,

This review is brought to you by the February Review Raid. These are only my opinions.

Very colorful. A lot of landscapes. And a lot of flowers. I like that a whole lot. You have done a great job with these C-Notes. At least I think that you have. Especially, since they relate to this Raid. It's a good thing that I don't have to pick just one of them to review. Because I don't think that I do that. They are all that good. What I like the best was the cost of them. It's not too high. But it's not too low either. I hope that you have sold a lot of them. And that you keep on doing it.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Stolen Birthday  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Charity Marie - I am Back!,

This review is brought to you by the Member-to-Member Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

I didn't like this short story. Because I loved it. It was one of the best stories, if not the best, that I have read in a long time. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Story Itself:

What I liked the most about this story is how it ended. I love a good twist at the end.

Location, Location, Location:
You didn't go into a lot of detail with this short story. But you did a little. I understand why you didn't do it, though. It's because of your Word Limitations. Right?

Your Characters:

Of course, Elizabeth is the main character in this short story. But her mother is also a big part of it too. I liked that you gave Elizabeth a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. But I would have given the mother a name too. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

The dialogue in this short story reads natural. At least it does to me.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I read. if there was any, I didn't read them.

Any Last Thoughts:

I noticed that you have several other short stories in your portfolio. A lot of Poetry too. If they are as good, or better, than this one, I would like the chance to read some of them too, if I can.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of The Time Machine  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello Mary Ann MCPhedran,

This review is brought to you by the Member-to-Member Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

I chose this short story to read and review because of its title. Because I thought that it would be Science Fiction. As a fellow Science Fiction writer, I was sure that I would like it. But when I saw your text color choice, I was starting to change my mind about that. Don't get me wrong. I still like this short story a lot. It was just hard for me to read because of the color choice. Is there a reason why you chose this color?

The Story Itself:

I'm not sure. But I think that this short story is set in the future. At least that's the way it reads to me. Am I right about that?

Location, Location, Location:
Not sure where this short story is taking place. There were hints as to where it's at. Things like an auction, house, and garage. But other than that I'm not sure where it is.

Your Characters:

Johnny's name is mention in this short story. But the main character in it isn't. I liked that you gave Johnny a name. But I would have given the main character a name too. I know that can be hard to do with a story like this one. It can be done, though. Something like having Johnny say her name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

The dialogue in this short story looks good. At least it does to me.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

I noticed several grammar errors. Things like missing periods, an 's' at the end of a word that shouldn't be there, and a space between a word. If you re-read this short story again, I think you will read these errors too.

Any Last Thoughts:

I'm curious about something. Why didn't you categorize it as Science Fiction? Is there a reason why you didn't do that?


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello TATSUYAKEMI,

This review is brought to you by the Member-to-Member Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

This short story was a little bit confusing to me. Don't get me wrong. This might read like I didn't like it. But I did. I liked it a lot. I just didn't understand some of it.

The Story Itself:

I know that this short story is about a guitar. And the person who plays it on the beach. But other than that, I'm not sure what it is about. It just seemed to ramble on to me. Like the main character in it just thought whatever was on his mind.

Location, Location, Location:
You did a very good job describing the settings for this short story. At least I think that you did. A lot of writers are too vague about doing it. And then there are some like me who tend to go overboard on it. But I think that you did it just right. In between too vague and too much.

Your Characters:

Whoever is telling this short story is the main character in it. But who that person is I don't know. I'm not even sure if they are male or female. But if I read it correctly then they are male. A name may have solved that confusion. Unless it's a name that can be either gender. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

The only dialogue in this short story is the singing that you are doing. Some writers, if not most of them, don't think that lyrics are dialogue. But I do. It's just a different kind of dialogue.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

One possible error that I think that I noticed is the word reazon. I don't think that it's a word. Unless it's a foreign spelling of it. Grammarly doesn't think that it's a word either.

Any Last Thoughts:

What was this short story about? Other than it being about a guitar being played on a beach.


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Hello Ezekiel Stephens,

This review is brought to you by the Member-to-Member Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

This was a very interesting short story. Don't get me wrong. It may read like I didn't like it. But I did. In fact, I like it very much.

The Story Itself:

Why do I find this short story so interesting? Because of what it's about.

Location, Location, Location:
I'm not sure where this short story takes place. I know that it's sometime in our future. and that it's probably here on Earth. But that's all that I know about it.

Your Characters:

Of course, Calibri is the main character in this story. In fact, he's the only one. And I liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

There is only one line of dialogue in this story. And I don't think that it is dialogue. It reads more like an old saying than dialogue.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

The only thing that might be an error in this story is the one line of dialogue. I think that it should be in single quotation marks instead of doubles. My grammar isn't very good. So, I may be wrong about this. You might want to check on it, though.

Any Last Thoughts:

One of the main reasons why I chose this short story to read and review is because it's science fiction. So, I figured that I would like it even before I read it. But I was wrong. I loved it. I'm so happy that I got the chance to read it.

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Hello addie.cass,

This review is brought to you by the Member-to-Member Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

This is one of the best short stories that I have read in a long time. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that great.

The Story Itself:

Why did I like this story so much? It's because of what it's about. the only thing I don't understand about it is that it starts off with him being an assassin. In fact, the first paragraph makes him read like one. But he's not.

Location, Location, Location:
I know that this is a house. But I'm not sure where it's at. What it looks like? Things like that. It reads old or rundown. Am I right about that?

Your Characters:

One this I would have done differently is given these individuals a name. Especially, since I'm not sure who the main character is. Are they male or female? It reads like you are a female. But I'm not sure. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

There is no dialogue in this story. So, I'm not going to comment on that. But there was a lot of thinking going on. Most writers don't think that thinking is dialogue. But I think that it is. It's just internal instead of verbal.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could read. That doesn't mean that there aren't any. It just means that if there are I didn't notice them.

Any Last Thoughts:

Did you win this contest with this entry? If you didn't, you should have.


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Hello 1,

This review is brought to you by the SuperPower Request for Review. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

This is one of the best stories that I have read in a long time. I liked it very, very much. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Story Itself:

It reads like you are telling this story instead of showing it. But I may be wrong about that. I'm very bad about telling and not showing.

Location, Location, Location:
I'm not exactly sure where this story takes place. That's kind of scarce. A little bit more detail about where Nadia and Rudolph are would have been nice.

Your Characters:

There are only two characters in this Short Story: Nadia and Rudolph. I liked that you gave your them names. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

The dialogue in this story read real to me. It read like what people would say.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I noticed. If there was any, I didn't read them.

Any Last Thoughts:

I think that you did a great job with this story. Do you have any more as good or better than this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them. This story was that great.


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Hello Rima~New Job,

This review is brought to you by the SuperPower Request for Review. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression:

I love Science Fiction. That's the main reason why I chose this Short Story to read. And I'm very glad that I did. I liked it very much.

The Story Itself:

It's a little bit too technical for me. I don't write technical because it can be hard for some people to read. Especially, if they don't understand it.

Location, Location, Location:
You did a very good job of describing your locations. At least I think that you did.

Your Characters:

One of the things that I liked the most about this story is that you gave your characters a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke:

Overall, I think that you did a great job with your dialogue. My only concern is with some of the words I didn't understand or think are misspelled.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

ship'd and trees're aren't words. At least I don't think that they are. Grammarly doesn't think they are. I also noticed a few missing commas. Brachytrachelopan isn't a word either according to dictionary.com. But it looks like it is with Grammarly. So, it might be. You might want to check into that too.

Any Last Thoughts:

I noticed that you wrote this story for a contest. Did you win this contest? If not, you should have. It's that good.


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Review of Live this  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Heart and Mind Raid


Hello jpmurphy,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventh year with us.


Overall Impression:

This poem is a little different than any other poem I have read. Most poems are broken up into four to six lines per group. Some are one big group. But I've never seen one with one or two really long ones. Is this a type of poem that I don't know about?

The Poem Itself:

What I like the best about this poem is that it rhymes. I admire anyone who can rhyme their poems. Probably because I can't do it myself.

How It Make Me Feel:

It makes me feel very happy. Happy I have gotten the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could read. I think you have done a great job with this poem.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other poems as good, or better, like this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them too.


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Review of inbetween us  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Heart and Mind Raid


Hello christo,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression:

I'm a little bit confused about this poem. It might be a Relationship one. But where is the Biographical and the Romance/Love within it? There doesn't seem to be any for this poem. At least I didn't see any. Did I miss them?

The Poem Itself:

What I liked the most about this poem is that it's centered. I think that it makes it easier to read if it's centered.

How It Make Me Feel:

This poem confused me. I was expecting some Romance/Love within it. But I didn't read any of that. that's why I'm so confused about it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

I don't think that it's a grammar error etc. But it is with WDC. Did you know that within the title for this poem is ?

Any Last Thoughts:

Don't get me wrong. This review may read like I don't like it. I liked it a whole lot.


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Review of ...Since You  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Heart and Mind Raid


Hello kotenok,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your thirteenth year with us.


Overall Impression:

This is a very good poem. At least I think that it is. The only reason why I'm not giving it a higher Rating is that it looks like you have made a couple of mistakes.

The Poem Itself:

I'm a little bit confused about this poem. In some group of lines the lines rhyme. But in a few, they don't. Did I miss something here or is this a poem style that I'm not familiar with? I admire anyone who can rhyme their poems. Probably because I can't do it myself.

How It Made Me Feel:

Very, Very happy. That's how I feel about this poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

It looks like you have a couple of missing A's in this poem. Shouldn't it be 'You showed me a world I never knew' and 'You’re always a centre of attention'

Any Last Thoughts:

February is the month for Romance/Love. Poetry is too. That's one of the reasons why I selected this poem to read. It's not the only one, though. I also am reading it because this is your anniversary month too.


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Heart and Mind Raid


Hello Little Phoenix,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression:

I think that you have done a great job with this poem. The only reason why I didn't give a perfect rating is that it looks like you may have made a couple of errors.

The Poem Itself:

Rhyming. That's one of the things I liked the most about this poem. I admire anyone who can do that. Probably because I can't.

How It Made Me Feel:

What I liked the most about this poem is how it made me feel about it. I feel happy that I have gotten the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

It looks like you may have made a couple of mistakes when it comes to this poem. But I might be wrong about that. One error is repetition. When it comes to short stories, novels, etc. repetition is a no-no. I'm not sure if it is with Poetry or not. The other error I think you made is with the brackets around the word 'still.' I don't think that you're supposed to do that in a poem.

Any Last Thoughts:

Don't get me wrong. This might read like I didn't like this poem. But I did. I liked it very, very much.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of Sleeping Beauty  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Heart and Mind Raid


Hello A.C, Aurora,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourteenth year with us.


Overall Impression:

Wow. What more can I say about this poem? This is one of the best poems, if not the best one, I have read in a long time. I liked it very, very much.

The Poem Itself:

What I liked the best about it is how you wrote a poem based on Sleeping Beauty. You could have just based it on that and made it slightly different. But you didn't. I like that a whole lot.

How It Made Me Feel:

This poem made me feel very happy. Happy that I have gotten a chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I can find. I think you have done a great job with this poem.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other poems like this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them. Especially, if they are as good or better than this one.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Heart and Mind Raid


Hello GWC,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression:

This is a very interesting poem. Don't get me wrong. I liked it very much. it was just the way that it was written that I find so interesting.

The Poem Itself:

I think that you have done a great job with this poem. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. That's how good it is.

How It Made Me Feel:

Very happy. That's how I feel about this poem. Happy that I have gotten the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words:

No errors that I could find. Unless it's the punctuation at the end of your lines. There isn't any. You capitalized the first word. but there isn't any punctuation at the end of them.

Any Last Thoughts:

Do you have any other poems as good, or better, than this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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