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Review of Fighting Death  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Images don't have to be pictures; This is one of them.


Hello Genipher,

I am reviewing this script for The Monthly Script Writing Contest. These are just my opinions. You are the only one who can decide whether you agree with me or not.


Overall Impression: Another great script. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Story Itself: You are very good at doing one scene acts. They are a little too long most of the time for my upcoming new contest, but with a little bit of fine-tuning, they could be. Of course, it all depends on the daily prompt.

Was It Formatted Correctly?: Of course, it was formatted correctly. It wasn't according to WDC, but it was as a script.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: Is tsks a word? It is according to Grammarly, but it's not when it comes to Microsoft Words. You might want to check that out.

Any Last Thoughts: Too bad there was only two entries this month. That means there is no winner this month. If there was, there was a very good chance you would have won it,.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Script with me. I hope to be reading more of them real soon. Keep on writing great Scripts like this one.

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Review of Someone like Me  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Images don't have to be pictures; This is one of them.


Hello paileykristine,

I am reviewing this script for The Monthly Script Writing Contest. These are just my opinions. You are the only one who can decide whether you agree with me or not.


Overall Impression: When I first looking at this script I knew admittedly it wasn't formatted correctly. That doesn't mean you couldn't still win this contest, but it does hurt your chances of doing it a whole lot. Once I started reading it I realized it was a Stage Play instead of a script.

The Story Itself: This story has promise. I liked it very much. If it had been formatted correctly this Stage Play turned into a script probably would have won this contest this month. That's if there was a winner. It's that good.

Was It Formatted Correctly?: No, unfortunately, this wasn't formatted correctly. It might have been for a Stage Play, but it wasn't for a script.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I always copy these scripts to Word to check there Page Count. When I did it with this one it came up with at least one double word and a couple of aprostrophy mistakes.

Any Last Thoughts: This read like a Stage Play instead of a script. Is that what it is? If so, it wouldn't have been too hard to convert it into a script format. You just need to look at my examples. Did you do that yet?


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Script with me. I hope to be reading more of them real soon. Keep on writing great Scripts like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A super power image


Hello Prosperous Snow (Neva),

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: I think that you did a great job with this poem. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Poem Itself: What I liked the most about this poem is how you started each section after the first one with the end of the last one. I like that a whole lot.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. What I mean is that I can't think of just one feeling I feel about this poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: There might be one error in grammar that you might want to check into. I'm taking about capitalization. Shouldn't the first word of each line be capitalized?

Any Last Thoughts: Do you have any more poems as good or better than this one? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them when I have the time to do it.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of Spring  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A super power image


Hello Mena,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: What else can I say except that I liked this poem very, very much. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. It's that great.

The Poem Itself: Of course, it's about Spring, but it's more than that. It how it was written. I like that a whole lot.

How It Make Me Feel: It was kind of a sad poem without it being sad. after all, there was a lot of rain involved in it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: The first two sentences start with the same word next to each other. Shouldn't there be a comma after the first one? You might want to look into that.

Any Last Thoughts: This is one of the best poems written so far that I have read. I think that you did a great job with this poem.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of A spring day  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A super power image


Hello maliapens,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: The first thing that I noticed even before I started reading it was that it looked like one big paragraph with single sentences. I don't think that there is anything wrong with this way of writing a poem, but I think that it's easier to read if it is broken up into sections.

The Poem Itself: This isn't just a poem about Spring. It's also about the outdoors.

How It Make Me Feel: I liked the way it poem made me feel. It made me feel happy that I got the chance to read it.

Any Last Thoughts: The one thing that I would have done differently is broken up these individual lines into sections. I would have made them four or five lines each.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A super power image


Hello Sharmelle's Expressions,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: I liked this poem very much. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Poem Itself: What I liked the most about this poem is that it's centered. I like that a whole lot.

How It Make Me Feel: This poem made me feel happy. I'm happy that I choice this one to review.

Any Last Thoughts: The one thing I would have done differently if I had written this poem is to not start each sectioon with the same few words. I don't start my sections, paragraphs, or sentences with the same word. There needs to be at least two other words before I us a word again, but that's just the way that I like to write.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of memorial day 2  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A super power image


Hello Fyn-,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: This is a very beautiful festival. I liked it very much.

The Image Itself: What I liked the most about this image are the people within it. Not only is there a parade going on, but there are those watching it.

How This Image Make Me Feel: I like parades. It makes me smile every time I look at it.

Any Last Thoughts: Is this your home town? The Title and Title Description says that it's a Memorial Day Celebration, but it doesn't say where it's at.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of THINGS  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A super power image


Hello RICH,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: This is a very interesting image. It's also very weird too, but I like weird.

The Image Itself: Don't get me wrong. I liked this image very much. In fact, I wonder where you got it?

How This Image Make Me Feel: At first it freaked me out a little, but the more I looked at it the better it looked to me. I'm still a little bit weirded out by it, but not as much now.

Any Last Thoughts: There is nothing wrong with the Title for this image, but I would have given it a different name. Something like, "The Ugly Ostrich."


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of Mayan Pyramid  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A super power image


Hello Espero,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: This is a great image. I liked it very, very much. I'm not sure if it's Spring or not. but it sure is an outdoor image.

The Image Itself: Where did you get this image? Did you take this image or find it on the internet?/c}

How This Image Make Me Feel: Curious. That's how I feel about it. I'm curious about what is shooting out of that pyramid and how it's doing it.

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the best about this image is what it is doing. I'm still not sure what is shooting out of it and where it's headed beside Space, though.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
A super power image


Hello Shaara,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: This isn't really your typical image. Yet it still is an image. It's not just a picture of something, it's a drawing of something. An image, yet not an image.

The Image Itself: After seeing this image I realize I could have posted some of my illustrated images from a six-month challenge I did a couple of years ago. I just didn't do it because I didn't think they would be considered images. Not because they were Science Fiction related, but because they were drawn and colorized.

How This Image Make Me Feel: Don't get me wrong. I liked this image a whole lot. I'm just not sure how I feel about it.

Any Last Thoughts: I think that you did a great job colorizing this image. It's not an easy thing to do, especially on a computer. That's why I liked it as much as I did.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A super power image


Hello Joey's digging the dirt,

This review is brought to you by the May Review Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: This is one of the best images about Spring or the Outdoors I have seen in a long time. I liked it very, very much. Great job.

The Image Itself: What I liked the best about this image is that it was taken from a short distance so it can take in as much of it as it did. Not only did you get the gardening part of it, but the people involved with it.

How This Image Make Me Feel: It made me feel like eating. I know you can't see what kind of food that it was, but you can see that it's food of some kind.

Any Last Thoughts: Are there any other images of this garden? If so, I would be very interested in taking a look at them too.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

                                       PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You can see a lot more of the script in this image. Only it's not much more.


Hello Genipher,

I am reviewing this script for The Monthly Script Writing Contest. These are just my opinions. You are the only one who can decide whether you agree with me or not.


Overall Impression: This is a great start to a much longer script. Whether it's a tv episode or series, or a movie. If it's a movie all you need to do is take out all the extra FADE INs and FADE OUTs.

The Story Itself: The only thing that might raise some questions with other Reviewers is that you mention what Ailis and Vihann were up to in the TEASER. Only it wasn't mentioned elsewhere. I'm sure it will come out later on in this script, but it hasn't yet.

Was It Formatted Correctly?: It looks formatted pretty good to me. The only thing I would have done differently is not created a different ACT for each scene. Especially ACT TWO that was only a few lines long. It would have been better if they were combined into only one ACT. At least that's what I think.

Any Last Thoughts: Is the beginning of a longer script? The way that it suddenly ended it reads like it is one. If it's not it should be. I'm going to be doing a six-month scriptwriting challenge in a couple of months. You might want to consider expanding this one then.
Then again, you might want to do another one too.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Script with me. I hope to be reading more of them real soon. Keep on writing great Scripts like this one.

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Review of Forever Lost  
Review by PureSciFi
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hello liza83,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourteenth year with us.


Overall Impression: You did a great job with this poem. At least I think that you did. I liked it very, very much. It kept me interested in reading it from beginning to end.

The Poem Itself: I'm a little bit confused about this poem, though. Two of your Genres are Teen and Religious. Only I didn't read that in this poem. Did I miss something?

How It Makes Me Feel: I felt very happy when I read this poem. I'm very happy that I got to read this poem.

Any Last Thoughts: Personally, I would have split this one long section into several sections with four to six lines per section. That's the way poems are supposed to be, aren't they?


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

                                       PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hello Autumnkmoo,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: Is this really your first poem ever. I don't believe you. This is way too good to be a first poem.

The Poem Itself: One of the things I like the best about this poem is that it sort of rhymed. At least some of it did, but not all of it. It was randomly rhymed. I like that a whole lot.

How It Make Me Feel: It's romantic. That's the best feeling of them all.

Any Last Thoughts: I think you did a very good job with this poem. you said this was your first, but have you written any more since then? If so, I would be very interested in reading some of them too.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

                                       PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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Review of Staying Numb  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Marcos,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eighth year with us.


Overall Impression: I liked this poem very much. It kept me interested in reading it from the beginning to the end. Good Job.

The Poem Itself: Breaking up is hard to do. It's what happens after the break-up that's important, and that's what you dealt with in this poem. I think you did a very good job with that.

How It Make Me Feel: This is a sad poem. I feel sorry for this individual.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looks like you might have made one grammar, spelling, error with this poem. Shouldn't it be flies instead of fly's.

Any Last Thoughts: You rated this thirteen plus, but you used an adult term in it. I know thirteen-year-olds know this term, even those younger than that, but you might want to reconsider upgrading this rating. Just to be safe with WDC.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

                                       PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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Review of Split  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Gideon Thomas,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: I don't understand this poem. Don't get me wrong, I liked this poem a whole lot.

The Poem Itself: I'm not sure what this poem is about. What is this poem about?
I know that it's supposed to be about abiguity and communication, and both of them are mentioned in this poem, but I still don't understand it.

How It Make Me Feel: Confused. I am a little bit confused about this poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I noticed that you didn't capitalize the letter 'i' in this poem. Shouldn't you be doing that? I think that you should? You might want to look into that just in case I am wrong about that.

Any Last Thoughts: This poem has a lot of potential. It just needs a little bit of fine-tuning. At least that's what I think.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of I am Sham  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Kalai,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.


Overall Impression: True, this poem wasn't very interesting, but I know what I like, and I liked this poem a whole lot. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it.

The Poem Itself: I don't think that you are a failure. Everyone feels like this sometimes in their lives. In fact, some feel this way a lot of times. At least that's what I think.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm sorry about how this individual feels. I feel sorry for them.

Any Last Thoughts: This reads like some sort of Depression. Is that what this poem is about?


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of Silk Tents  
Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello gummyhearts,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourth year with us.


Overall Impression: This read more like a Short Story than a poem. Don't get me wrong. I liked it very much. It just looks more like a Short Story to me because of the way it was written.

The Poem Itself: At first I thought that this poem was about a butterfly instead of a spider because of how it was written, but by the end of it I realized it is about a spider after all.

How It Make Me Feel: I know that I'm supposed to feel something when it comes to poems, but I didn't with this one. It's not because I didn't like it, because I did.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: This probably isn't a grammar issue, but the length of these lines makes me wonder if it is. I have read, and written, some long lines, but not as long as these.

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the most about this poem is that it's the kind of a poem that I would write. Despite the line lengths, It's my kind of poem. That's one of the reasons why I liked it so much.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

                                       PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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Review by PureSciFi
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello angel,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your ninth year with us.


Overall Impression: Don't get me wrong. I liked this poem a whole lot, but I was a little bit confused about it. It reads like you just rambled on about nothing in particular. At least it did to me.

The Poem Itself: I know that this poem was written for your grandmother from the Title Description, but I didn't read that in this poem. Did I miss something?

How It Make Me Feel: I'm not sure how I feel about this poem, except that I liked it. I was just a little bit confused by it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: You used the word 'weeping' back-to-back. I read it several times, and I can see that it might be needed twice, but it should have a comma after the first one if it's two of them. Shouldn't it?

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked best about this poem is that it rhymed. Probably because I can't do it myself. I admire anyone who can do it.


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Hello Tim Chiu,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: What I like the most about this poem is that it rhymed.
That's very hard to do. At least I think that it is.

The Poem Itself: I'm a little bit confused about this poem. I know that it's a Romance/Love because of your Genre choice, but it didn't make much sense to me. It reads like you just put whatever you could think of to make the rhyme work.

How It Make Me Feel: A little confused. It's probably just too sophisticated for me. Is that why I'm a little bit confused by it? It doesn't read like it is, but it could be.

Any Last Thoughts: I know that this review reads like I didn't like your poem, but I did. I liked it very much.


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Hello Princess,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventeenth year with us.


Overall Impression: This was a very interesting poem. Don't get me wrong. I liked this poem a whole lot. It was just a little bit too sophisticated for me.

The Poem Itself: I'm a little bit confused about this poem. I know that it's about someone who dies and how the living dealt with it from your Title Description, but I didn't really read that in this poem. Did I miss something?

How It Make Me Feel: Confused. That's how I feel about this poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looks like you might have a missing word in this poem. Shouldn't it be 'a moth' instead of 'moth.'

Any Last Thoughts: I think that this poem has potential for being a great poem.
It just needs a little bit of fine-tuning. At least that's what I think.


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Hello Sienna-Moon,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eighth year with us.


Overall Impression: I liked this poem very much. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it. It was that good.

The Poem Itself: I'm a little confused about this poem. What I am confused about is the Title Description. You mentioned a girl being what the poem is about. Only I didn't read that in this poem. Did I miss something?

How It Make Me Feel: It made me feel happy. Happy that I got the chance to read it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I don't know if this is a grammar error or not, but it might be. You double-spaced your sections.

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the best about this poem is that it was easy to read. Is that why you double-spaced the sections?


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Hello Sillenx,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: What I liked the best about this poem is that it rhymes. At least almost all of it does, but it reads like the last two lines don't rhyme.

The Poem Itself: The Title of this poem is what peeked my interest first, but I'm glad that I read it. You did a great job with this one. I liked it very much.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm a little disappointed. Not because of the poem itself, from the Title. I thought this might be a Horror/Scary poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I did notice a couple of grammar related errors. One is about capitalization. You didn't capitalize any of the 'i's. The second one is a misspelling one too. Shouldn't it be 'knows' instead of 'know' in the second to last line?

Any Last Thoughts: This is one of the best poems I have read in a long time. Do you have any more as good or better than this one? If you do, I would like to read some of them too.


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Hello free.your.mind,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your ninth year with us.


Overall Impression: This is one of the best, if not the best poems I have read in a long time. It's a simple one, but a very, very good one. At least I think that it is.

The Poem Itself: The Title says it all. This is a poem about a beach.

How It Make Me Feel: It made me feel like moving to the beach and living there.
Unfortunately, I can't afford to do that but now I'm going to be dreaming about doing it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I'm not sure if this is a grammar error or not, but it might be part of this type of Poetry. Shouldn't there be periods at the end of each line?

Any Last Thoughts: Do you have any more poems as good or better than this one.
If you do, I would be very interested in reading some of them too. This one was that good.


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Hello Maggie,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your ninth year with us.


Overall Impression: This was a very interesting poem. Don't get me wrong. I liked it very much. It's interesting because of what it's about.

The Poem Itself: I'm not exactly sure who this hatred is being directed at, but from what I read it reads like it's a male who has hatred for a female. It could be the other way around, though. A little bit more detail about that would have been nice.

How It Make Me Feel: I felt sorry for whoever is receiving this hatred. Espcially, if this is a female. It's bad for a male, but it's even worse for a female. The only thing worse than that is if it's directed at a child. At least that's what I think.

Any Last Thoughts: You didn't capitalize 'HATE' in the last section. Did you do that on purpose? Is there a reason why you did it that way?


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