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#4385103

Review of Secret Diaper Girl

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hello Z dog,

This review is brought to you by The Welcome Newbies Raid. These are only my opinions.

Overall Impression: I selected this Short Story to review for two reasons. One was because you are a Newbie. And I wanted to welcome you to the WDC. The other reason was that I liked the Title and Title Description.

The Story Itself: This was a very weird Short Story. But I like weird very much. At first, I thought it was a fetish Short Story. and I thought that this isn't right for a girl of twelve. But once I started reading it I realized I was wrong about that.

Your Characters: In the Title Description you mentioned who the main character is in this Short Story. But you didn't in the story itself. I would have done it in the story itself too. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Any Last Thoughts: Personally, I would have separated this one long paragraph into two or more smaller paragraphs. But that's just the way I like to write my Short Stories.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with the WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4385101

Review of In God's Great Hands

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hello PWheeler,

This review is brought to you by The Welcome Newbies Raid. These are only my opinions.

Overall Impression: One of the reasons why I read this poem for review is because you are a Newbie. And I wanted to welcome you to WDC. But the main reason was that I was curious what a Rondeau poem was.

The Poem Itself: Other than it rhymed throughout most of it, I'm still not sure what Rondeau means. I did notice that at the end of each group of lines it didn't rhyme with the lines above it. Is that what Rondeau is?

How It Make Me Feel: Happy. That's how I felt about this poem. I am very happy that I got to read it.

Any Last Thoughts: I'm not a very Religious type of guy. Don't get me wrong. I do believe in God. I just don't like to read it. Most of them are just too preachy. But this one wasn't. That's why I liked it so much.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4385099

Review of Living a Life Without You

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

Hello DyingLove98,

This review is brought to you by The Welcome Newbies Raid. These are only my opinions.

Overall Impression: What can I say about this poem other than I read it, and am reviewing it because you are a Newbie. And I wanted to welcome you to the WDC. But that's not the only reason why I'm reviewing it. I am also doing it because I thought that I thought that I would like it. And I did.

The Poem Itself: It read to me like a list of things that you couldn't live a life without you. Is that what you wanted to accomplish with this poem?

How It Make Me Feel: I felt sorry for this individual. They had a long list of things that they couldn't live without.

Any Last Thoughts: I think that you might have made one big mistake within this poem. You used the 'f' word. But you rated it as 'E' for everyone. I think it should be eighteen plus at the very least. You might want to check into that.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4385098

Review of dear me

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Rated: ASR

| (3.5)

Hello lenny,

This review is brought to you by The Welcome Newbies Raid. These are only my opinions.

Overall Impression: I selected this contest entry for two reasons. First, because I wanted to welcome you to WDC. The second reason is that of the Dear Me contest that is being run this month.

The Letter Itself: I'm a little bit confused by this letter to yourself. Not the letter itself because I think that you did a very good job with it. I liked it a whole lot. What I'm concerned about is that you talked about what you were going to do with personal life this year. There's nothing wrong with that. But you didn't even mention what your goals are this year when it comes to your writing. And I think that's what this Contest is all about.

Any Last Thoughts: True, I don't think there is anything wrong with you writing about yourself. But I think the main focus of this contest is about writing and writing-related activities like reviewing and contest entries. You might want to check into that before the end of the month deadline. Then again, I might be wrong about all of this. Maybe you should send an email to Jeff with a question about this. I think Jeff is the one you email if you have a question about this contest. He's the one you email for most contest it looks like.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this letter with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great letters like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4385097

Review of A Child Unloved

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hello Heather,

This review is brought to you by The Welcome Newbie Raid. These are only my opinions.

Overall Impression: It's true that I only selected this poem because you are a Newbie and I wanted to welcome you to WDC. But I am very glad that I did. If I hadn't I wouldn't have gotten the chance to read this fantastic poem.

The Poem Itself: I'm not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I'm not very good at it myself. But I do like to read it. And I am very happy that I selected this poem.

How It Make Me Feel: I feel sorry for this individual. Mostly because it's a child. But nobody should feel like that.

Any Last Thoughts: This poem was very well written. Do you have any more just as good or better? If so I would be interested in reading some of them too if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4385095

Review of Haikus of a Flightless Mammal

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello Slytha,

This review is brought to you by The Welcome Newbie Raid. These are only my opinions.

Overall Impression: First, I wanted to welcome you to WDC. And I have to admit that is the main reason I am reviewing this poem. But I'm glad that I did.

The Poem Itself: I don't know too much about Haikus. But I do know what I like. And I liked this poem very, very much. I also liked the way you arranged those three paragraphs.

How It Make Me Feel: Great. I think that it's great I got the opportunity to read this poem.

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the most about this poem is the colorizing of it. Is there a reason why you colorized those words?

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4385094

Review of Presence in the Clouds

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello Charlotte Gray,

This review is brought to you by The Welcome Newbie Raid. These are only my opinions.

Overall Impression: Maybe the main reason that I selected this Fiction story to review is that you are a Newbie that I wanted to welcome to WDC. But I'm glad that I did it.

The Story Itself: Personally, I would have separated this one paragraph into two or three paragraphs. I think that makes it easier to read if you do it that way.

Your Characters: The one thing I would have done differently with this story is given this individual a name. But maybe you did. You did mention Peter Pan. Is that who is the main character in this story? Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looks like you made a Spelling error with this story. Shouldn't it be 'them' instead of 'hem.'

Any Last Thoughts: I think that you did a very good job with this story. In fact, I liked it so much I can't wait to read more of your writing if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4377198

Review of Items With Award Ribbons

Review by PureSciFi

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hello Angel_Eyes,

This review is brought to you by the Happy Wishes Power Raid. These are only my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that is up to you.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year.

Overall Impression? There was six Folders to chose from. I chose this one because the Items in it were award winners.

What kind of Folders are these? There's a little bit of everything in these six Folders. I like that a whole lot.

Are they well organized? These Folders are well organized. At least they look like they are to me.

How many are there? I'm not sure how many Items are in the other five Folders.
But there are six of them in this one. And all of them are different. I like that a lot.

Did I like them? I think that I just answered this question. Yes, I do like them.

What did I like the best about them? Already answered this question too. I like that they are all different. That's what I like the most.

Any Last Thoughts? There is only one Item in your Portfolio that hasn't been put into one of the Folders. I'm a little bit curious about that. Is there a reason why it's not in one of them?

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4377196

Review of WDC Welcome Center

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hello ~ Pat ~

This review is brought to you by the Happy Wishes Power Raid. These are only my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that is up to you.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year.

Overall Impression? I chose this Folder to review because I like to welcome newbies too. True, I haven't been able to do it too much so far. But I have helped with I can.

What kind of Folders are these? You have a little of everything within these Folders. But most of them are related to helping others. I like that very, very much.

Are they well organized? If I counted them right there are nine Folders. And most of them are well organized.

How many are there? There are six articles in this Folder. The other one is a list of links for Good Writing.

Did I like them? Yes, I liked them a lot. True, I don't think that I have read any of them yet. But I have read some like them from others.

What did I like the best about them? I am always willing to help others if I can.
But I couldn't do it like you have done it. That's what I liked the most about this Folder.

Any Last Thoughts? If I could have rated this review I would have given you a four plus. I liked them that much.

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4377194

Review of Dedicated to all Military

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello Girl with a Heartbeat,

This review is brought to you by the Happy Wishes Power Raid. These are only my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that is up to you.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year.

Overall Impression? I had a little problem deciding which Folder I was going to review. At least I did until I saw this one. Then I knew this was the one. And I'm glad that I did too. I liked it very, very much.

What kind of Folders are these? These Folders represent a little bit of everything that WDC has to offer. Maybe not all of it. But most of it. I like that a whole lot.

Are they well organized? True, there are two Short Stories and a poem that haven't been put into a Folder. But the others are Folders. And they are well organized. At least I think that they are. They are all grouped together. And I consider that organized.

How many are there? There are only five poems in this Folder. But I like Poetry.
I'm just not very good at it myself.

Did I like them? I like what I have seen so far. But so far I haven't read any of them, yet.

What did I like the best about them? It's about the Military. That's what I like to most about it.

Any Last Thoughts? I'm not a big fan of Poetry. But I do like to read it though.

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4376941

Review of The Home of Fang

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Rated: ASR

| (3.5)

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Hello R. Michael Wood,

This review is brought to you by the Happy Wishes Power Raid. These are only my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that is up to you.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year.

Overall Impression? There is only one Folder to chose from. So, I didn't have much chose which one to choose. But I'm I glad that I did anyway. I like it a whole lot.

What kind of Folder is this? This is a Folder that hold the first three Chapters for a Novel. At least I think that it is. The Title Description say that it is. But the individual Chapter Descriptions reads more like individual Short Stories. Which is it or is it both?

Is it well organized? If I'm talking about the Portfolio, then there is no organization because there is only one Folder. But it I'm talking about this individual Folder then the answer is yes. It is well organized.

How many are there? There is only one Folder so far. And three Chapters from a Novel within it.

Did I like them? True, I haven't read any of these Chapter yet. But from the title and the Description I'm sure that it's a novel that I would like to read. I'm just not sure when I will get the time to do it.

What did I like the best about them? The genre is what I liked the most about it.
I'm a big fan of fantasy.

Any Last Thoughts? You have a lot of individual Items in your Portfolio. A lot of them Short Stories. Have you ever thought about creating a Folder for them too. It's just a thought. I'm not very good at creating Folders either.

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4376940

Review of Awardicon Items

Review by PureSciFi

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hello Prosperous Snow (Neva),

This review is brought to you by the Happy Wishes Power Raid. These are only my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that is up to you.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year.

Overall Impression? I had a hard time choosing which Folder I was going to review because there are so many of them. But I decided on this one because it's an Awardicon Folder. And I like that every, very much.

What kind of Folders are these? Just like this Folder, there are a lot of Folders in this Portfolio. And there are a lot of different types of Items in them. I like that a whole lot.

Are they well organized? Almost all of your Items in your Portfolio are Folders.
There is only one that isn't. I think that you have done a great job in organizing it.

How many are there? There are a lot of Items in this Folder. And almost all the types, if not all of them, have been represented within it too. I like that a whole lot too. In fact, there are so many of them I'm glad I'm not choosing one of them to review. That's because I would go crazier than I already am in deciding which one to review.

Did I like them? True, I haven't read any of these Items yet. But I definitely want to. I'm just not sure which one I want to read first. Like the Folders, it's going to be a hard chose to make.

What did I like the best about them? There is a little bit of everything in this Folder. That's what I like the most about it. True, some of the Items within I might not like to read. But there is still plenty of what I do like that I do.

Any Last Thoughts? This isn't just a review because you are a fellow Raider. It's also because this is your birth month. Happy Birthday.

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4376938

Review of Contest Entry's

Review by PureSciFi

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello back reviewing to upgrade,

This review is brought to you by the Happy Wishes Power Raid. These are only my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that is up to you.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year.

Overall Impression? Wow, do you have a lot of Folders to chose from. In fact,
you have so many of them I couldn't decide what I wanted to review. So, I decide on one that relates to my type of writing.

What kind of Folders are these? You have a little bit of everything when it comes to Folders in your Portfolio. And I liked that a very, very much. Whether it comes to my writing or reviewing, I love a challenge.

Are they well organized? This is the best organized Portfolio that I have seen so far. There is only one Item that hasn't been put into a Folder yet.

How many are there? There are only four Item in this Folder so far. And all four of them are different types. I like that a whole lot.

Did I like them? True, I haven't actually read any of these Items yet. But I can relate to them because I have written a lot of them for various contests. In fact, most of my writing have been contest related.

What did I like the best about them? That's an easy question to answer. I liked the number of Folders that you had to choose from.

Any Last Thoughts? This review isn't just because you are a fellow Raider. It's also because this is your birth month. Happy birthday.

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4376935

Review of Poems from the street.

Review by PureSciFi

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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Hello Moarzjasac,

Congratulations on surviving another year with us. This is your seventh year with us.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year. These are just my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that’s up to you.

Overall Impression? There is only one Folder. So, I didn't have too much of a chose if I was going to review it or not. But it doesn't really matter anyway, because I thought that this was a great Folder. I liked it very much.

What kind of Folder is this? This is a Poetry Folder. I'm not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I'm not too good at it myself. But I do like to read it.

Is it well organized? It looks well organized to me. I didn't see anything in it that wasn't Poetry.

How many are there? There are only six Items in this Folder so far. Unless you count the Item Introduction. That looks like it's a poem too.

Did I like it? Yes, I liked it a whole lot. True, I haven't read any of the six poems within it yet. But I definitely want to if I can.

What did I like the best about them? Don't get me wrong. I liked all of it a whole lot. But what I liked the most about this Folder is the Item Introduction.

Any Last Thoughts? Have you thought about creating Folders for your other Items.
I noticed there are a lot that could be put into individual Folders to better organize your Portfolio. It's just a thought. I'm not very good at organizing either.

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4376934

Review of My Graphics Gallery

Review by PureSciFi

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hello Dave,

Congratulations on surviving another year with us. This is your Twelfth year with us.

I have reviewed Short Stories, Poetry, and Blogs. So, I have decided to review Folders this year. These are just my opinions. Whether you agree with them or not, that’s up to you.

Overall Impression? It true, that I only reviewed this Folder because the other two were about Poetry. But I also did it because I like images. And I am very happy that I did choose this one to review because I think that it was great.

What kind of Folders are these? There are only one kind of Items in this Folder.
And that's images aka Clip Art. But you had a lot of them. I like that very, very much.

Are they well organized? Yes and no. They are organized because they are all in this one Folder. But they organized within it, though. At least they aren't alphabetically. I'm not even sure you can do that on WDC.

How many are there? There were about a dozen of them. And they were all different. I like that a whole lot too.

Did I like them? Of course, I liked them all. In fact, I liked them so much I couldn't decide which one to review if I had to choose one. They were all that great.

What did I like the best about them? Your Introduction for this Folder. That's what I liked the best about this Folder.

Any Last Thoughts? I think that you did a fantastic job with this Folder. And if your other two Folders are as good, or better, than this one I would like to read some of those Items too if I can. I'm not a big fan of Poetry because I'm not too good at it. But I do like to read it.

If you're interested in getting even with this review you can review any of my work. You will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing these Folders with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on creating great folders like these.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4372645

Review of Cake.

Review by PureSciFi

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

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Hello Valued Member of Society,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventh year with us.

Overall Impression: Wow, is this poem warped. I can understand why you categorized it as Dark. Even Comedy I can understand because of the end of it. But I don't understand why it's categorized it as Children's instead of Horror/Scary.

The Poem Itself: This was a very scary poem to me. The way that it started it wasn't. But from the second paragraph on it was. And I liked that very, very much. That's why I'm giving it a four plus rating.

How It Make Me Feel: I feel sorry for whoever ate that cake or pie. No matter what someone does, they shouldn't be treated like that.

Any Last Thoughts: What I like the best about this poem is that it is a Scary poem. I'm not a big fan of pure Horror. But I do like scary stories, or in this case poems. And I think that you did a great job with this poem.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4372643

Review of One Eye Open

Review by PureSciFi

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

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Hello lindadoster,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.

Overall Impression: What I liked the most about this poem was that it was centered. I think that it's easier to read if it's centered. At least that's what I think.

The Poem Itself: I'm not exactly sure what this poem is about. It didn't make much sense to me. Don't get me wrong. I liked this poem a whole light. I'm just not sure what it was about.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looks like there is a missing 'an' in the first paragraph. Shouldn't it be 'for an answer,' instead of 'for answer.'

Any Last Thoughts: I think that you did a very good job with this poem. It might not read like that with this review. But I did.

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#4372641

Review of Flight of the Eagle

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Rated: E

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Hello gentle soul,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eighth year with us.

Overall Impression: One of the things I liked to the best about this poem is that it's centered. I think that it makes a poem easier to read if it's centered.

The Poem Itself: This was obviously a poem about a bird. But the way that it was done is something that I have never seen before. I have heard of a palindrome before, but I didn't know what it was until now.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. I liked it very much. But other than that, I'm not sure how I feel about it.

Any Last Thoughts: Do you have any other poems as good or better than this one.
If you do, I would like the chance to read some of them too if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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#4372640

Review of Junkie

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Rated: 13+

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Hello AnnaTechnician Gets Technical,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your ninth year with us.

Overall Impression: I liked this story very, very much. What I liked the most about it was that it kept me in suspense from beginning to end. I had to finish reading it.

The Story Itself: At first, I didn't know what this story was about. But it didn't take me long before I realized it was about a trip to McDonald's.

Your Characters: I'm not sure who the main character is in this Short Story. At first, I thought it was a young girl in the back seat as well as the driver. But by the time I finished it, it read like it was only the driver. A name or names would have helped clarify that. At least I think that it would. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Any Last Thoughts: I think that you did a very good job with this Short Story.
And if you have any more stories as good or better than this one I would definitely like to read some of them too, if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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#4372639

Review of Treasure Every Moment part 1

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Rated: 18+

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Hello LazarusAngel,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.

Overall Impression: It was a sad story. One that I can relate to because I lost my mother almost twenty years ago. And I didn't get the chance to say goodbye either. Only I didn't have an answering machine tape to remember her by.

The Story Itself: This was a very well written Short Story. At least I think that it was. I liked it very much.

Your Characters: One thing I definitely would have done differently was given this character a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I think that you might have made a grammar error in your first paragraph when you used the word 'are.' The rest of it read like it was written in Past Tense. But it's that word Present Tense?

Any Last Thoughts: Noticed that this Short Story is in at least two parts. Is there a reason for this? It's not very long. So, I was wondering why you didn't combine both parts into one.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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#4372638

Review of Colder Than Fever

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Rated: E

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Hello Lauren,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.

Overall Impression: This was a very well written Short Story. At least I think that it was. That's why I'm giving it a three-plus rating.

The Story Itself: At first, I thought that it was a Short Story about a little girl. Especially when you started writing about the soup her mother was going to give her. But then at the end of it, you mentioned that she was the only one who had a key to her apartment.

Location, Location, Location: I think that you did a great job in describing this location. Almost right from the beginning, I thought that it was a shower she was in. But it wasn't until about the end of it that you really wrote that it was a shower that she was in.

Your Characters: The one thing I would have done differently if I was writing this Short Story was that I would have given her a name. But that's just the way I like to write my stories. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the best about this Short Story was how you described where she was at. I liked that a whole lot.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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#4372637

Review of Power

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Dove,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your Tenth year with us.

Overall Impression: I'm a little bit confused about this Short Story. Don't get me wrong. I liked this story a whole lot. But I was a little confused about it.

The Story Itself: What was this Short Story about? I know that it was about power. And how he wanted to get it. But other than that, I'm not sure what it's about. It reads like some random thoughts about power. Only it wasn't written as thoughts.

Your Characters: The one thing I definitely would have done differently is given my main character a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Any Last Thoughts: This review might read like I didn't like this Short Story.
But I did. I think that you did a very good job with it.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4372636

Review of Addicted

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Rated: E

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Hello Leondra,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your Twelfth year with us.

Overall Impression: I think that you did a very good job with this Short Story.
It kept me wanting to read it from the beginning to the end of it.

The Story Itself: What is love if it's not an addiction? It's the one addiction that we all want to have at least once in our lives.

Your Characters: There were two characters in this Short Story. But neither one of them was given a name. I would have given them names. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I'm not sure. But I think that you might have made a mistake in grammar with the brackets in that one paragraph. You might want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts: Do you have anymore Short Stories like this one. If you do, I would like to read some of them too if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4372354

Review of Wonderfully Mine and Yours

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Cat Carroll,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourth year with us.

Overall Impression: I think that you did a very good job with these blog entries.
At least you did with the last four entries.

Your Blog Introduction: The blog introduction was almost an exact copy of your Title Description. And there's nothing wrong with that. In fact, I like it a whole lot. I also liked its length. It's short, but to the point.

The Blog Itself: Normally, I only read one to three blogs depending on their length. But once I started reading these I got carried away about how great they are. And before I knew it, I was reading the fourth one. What I liked the most about these entries is that all four of them was different, but they were also the same. They were about your writing.

Any Last Thoughts: Congratulations on you becoming a published poet. And you becoming a translator/proofreader. As a fellow NaNoWriMo Prepper, I also want to congratulate you on that too.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this blog with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great blogs like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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#4372351

Review of Mus'ing

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Rated: E

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Hello charlie55,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourth year with us.

Overall Impression: This was a very interesting read. Don't get me wrong. True,
this might read like I didn't like it. In fact, I did like it. What I liked the most about it was your introduction. I also liked the second from the last blog entry a lot.

Your Blog Introduction: The introduction for this blog was a little bit long. There's nothing wrong with that. I have seen some just as long. If not a little longer. And I have seen some a lot shorter. Like one or two sentences, and a few that were none. What I am trying to say is that your blog was just right. Not too short and not too long. That's why I am giving this blog a four plus. It's that good of an introduction.

The Blog Itself: I only read your last two entries because your blog introduction read like it was a blog entry instead of an introduction. It also read like an Article, an Essay, an Interview etc. As for the blogs themselves, I liked them both. But I really liked the second one more because it was a Short Story. I only glanced at the third entry, but it looked like a short story too.

Any Last Thoughts: Are most of your entries Short Story? Have you entered any of them into contests? Once again, there is nothing wrong with that. I'm just a little bit curious about it. Have you done any Poetry, or are they all just Short Stories?

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this blog with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great blogs like this one.

PureSciFi aka spacefaction
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