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Hello Captain April Mudslinger,

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Overall Impression: Very interesting, but a bit confusing at the same time. Don't get me wrong. I liked your Poetry very much. At least your latest five poems I did. It was just confusing to me. Not the words themselves, but how it was written.

The Poem Itself: What I liked best was that you centered them. Is that the normal way with this type of Poetry?

How It Makes Me Feel: Confused, that's the way that I feel. I liked what I read.
I'm just a little confused by them.


Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I noticed that you didn't capitalize some starting words, including the first ones, and you forgot some periods too. Is that normal for this kind of a poem.

Any Last Thoughts: Can you tell me more about this type of Poetry? I have heard about it before. But I don't know anything about it.


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Hello Maryann,

This review is brought to you by the Power Reviewers Blog/Book/Collection Raid. These are only my opinions.


Overall Impression: I only read your first two poems. But I think that they were fantastic.

The Poem Itself: What I liked the best about was that you explained what type of poem that you have written. I also liked the poems themselves.

How It Make Me Feel: When I read these poems it made me feel happy that I got the chance to read them. And that I would like to read more of them if I could.

Any Last Thoughts: I admire anyone who can write a poem like these. I've tried a couple of poems myself. But they were more of the traditional kind, minus the rhyming. I could never write a poem like these. That's why I admire anyone who can.


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Review of Loss  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Winchester Jones,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.


Overall Impression: Wow, this story was super fantastic. In fact, it was so great that I would give it more than a Perfect Rating if I could.

The Story Itself: Of Course, I feel sorry for the parents. With their eyes closed eyes, hoping it was their little girl, it's hard when you loss someone to death. It's even harder when that someone is a child. But I also feel sorry for the diver. It can't be an easy thing to do when you already know what the outcome is probably going to be. The only difference is your hoping it's not another dead body, especially their little girl.

Your Characters: One thing I would have done differently in this story was to give your main character, diver, a name. I know that's hard to do because of Word Count limitations. but I would have found a way to do it, even if I was reaching my limit. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: At the end of your eighth paragraph it reads like you might have made a grammar error by repeating yourself. It not an exact repeat. But it's close enough to be consider one. And it's not really needed either. In fact, I don't think that it should be there. You might want to look into that.

Any Last Thoughts: Other than the possible grammar error in the eighth paragraph, I think you did a fantastic job with this story. Normally, I would have given you a four or a four plus rating because of it. But this story was so great it deserve a Perfect Rating. I don't base my reviews on grammar because I have problems with that myself. No, I base it only where I like the story or not. And if it keeps me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. You definitely did that with this story. That's why I gave you the Perfect Rating.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello joefc,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your thirteenth year with us.


Overall Impression: I like this story very much. What I liked the most about it was how it ended. Most writers would have let it die all alone because they think it's more dramatic that way. But you didn't. And I like that a whole lot.

The Story Itself: I'm not sure if it was this account or my secondary account. But I wrote a story similar to this one about a dandelion. Only I didn't end it happily. At least I don't think that I did. If I remember right I ended it dramatically. Also what's different from the two stories is that dandelion wasn't a loner.

Your Characters: I gave my dandelion a name in my story. And I probably would have with this one too if I had written it. In fact, I know that I would have. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I'm not sure about spacing between paragraphs. But I think that you are supposed to. And I'm almost sure that you are supposed to do it between the title and the beginning of your story. Other wise everyone who reads it will think that it's the beginning of your story instead of the title. At least that's the it reads to me.

Any Last Thoughts: True, I specialize in Science Fiction. But I'm a big fan of Fantasy too. Do you have any other stories as good, or better, than this one? If you do, and I can, I'd like to read some of them too when I get the time to do it.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello dobie mom,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression: Wow, this story was fantastic. It kept me in suspense from the beginning to the end of it. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop until I finished it.

The Story Itself: At first, I thought that I wouldn't like this story as much as I did because I thought it was going to be a simple story about a lumberjack. Boy, was I wrong about that that.

Your Characters: Probably the only thing differently I would have done is given your main character a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: In your first paragraph you wrote a thought. But you wrote it as dialogue. Shouldn't it have been in Italics instead of quotation marks?

Any Last Thoughts: You didn't Bold the three words for this contest. Aren't you supposed to do that with the Daily Flash Fiction contest?


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Review of On the Wrong Side  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello javachille,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fifth year with us.


Overall Impression: This story was fantastic. I loved every word of it. The only reason why I'm not giving it a Perfect Rating is because of your line spacing between paragraphs. You didn't have any.

The Story Itself: What I liked the best about this story was that it was set during World War Two. Only you didn't actually write that in the story. But the swastika was a dead giveaway. No pun intended. I really loved how it ended too.

Your Characters: The one thing that I would have done differently was given the father and son a name. I can understand why you didn't with the American because you probably didn't know it. But I think the father and son should have had one. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I'm not sure. But I think that you made a grammar error by not separating your paragraphs by a space. You might want to look into that.

Any Last Thoughts: I also really loved how it ended with the son defying his father and helping his the American to get help with his wounds. Of course, in real life the Nazi father would have killed them both. Even if it meant shooting them in the back. The American for being the enemy. And the son for being a "No son of mine" traitor.


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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Doc Craig (AKA C.J. Schnase),

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression: This was a wonderful story. I liked it very, very much.

The Story Itself: It was a simple story about a couple of guys having a little fun with their girl friends while vacationing in Germany. What I liked best about this story was the ending. It would have been nice to know how old the young girls were. I think it would have made the ending a little better. But if they were real young that's probably why you didn't.

Your Characters: You gave Larry a name. But you didn't give yourself one. I can understand why you didn't the girl friends, the young girls, or the father. Even though I probably would have given them all names too. But I would definitely have given you one. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Any Last Thoughts: The one thing I would have done differently with this story is that I would have split this one paragraph into several. Especially the parts with dialogue. I believe they should have a paragraph of there own.


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Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Separation  
Review by PureSciFi
Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Jamuna,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: This was a very interesting read. don't get me wrong. I like it a whole lot. And it wasn't a boring read. But it wasn't very exciting either.

The Story Itself: It read to me like this female was rambling and raving about the man that left her for another female. Did I misread this story?

Your Characters: One thing that I would have done differently was give your main character a name. It reads like you did at the end for the cheating husband. But you didn't her. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: This read that it was one continuous thought. But it wasn't treated like one with Italics. Some would say that thoughts aren't dialogue. But I disagree. Whether it's spoken verbally or from within it's still dialogue.

Any Last Thoughts: I feel sorry for this female. But you can't live in the past forever. She needs to move on with her life. He's not coming back. And even if he does someday, she can't live in the past for the rest of her life hoping, and praying, for his return. It will destroy her. At least that's what I think.


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Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Review of Lost Love  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello modernwritings,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixth year with us.


Overall Impression: I liked this story very much. What I liked the best about it was that you told a whole story in only a few words. I can't do that. And I admire anyone who can. Great job.

The Story Itself: At first I thought that this was a story about a lost love aka divorce. but from the title, I should have known it was far worse than that.

Your Characters: The only thing I would have tried to do on top of what you did was give the couple names. I know that can be hard to do in a story as short as this one. But It can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Any Last Thoughts: I think you did a very good job with this story. Do you have any more as good, or better, than this one? If so I sure would like to read them too when I get the time, if I can do it.


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Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Dr Taher writes again!,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fifteenth year with us.


Overall Impression: What can I say about this wonderful blog? Other than it's great. I think you have done a great job with it. At least the three blog entries that I have read so far.

Your Blog Introduction: I liked your Blog Introduction very much. Not as much as the entries themselves, but I still like it.

The Blog Itself: Only read the last three blog entries. But if the others are as good, or better than these I definitely want to read more of them. As for the entries themselves, the first two was about upgrading to a Premium account. I can relate to that because I did the same thing last year. In fact, I am about to renew mine too. The third entry I read was about a Mailing List that I don't know anything about. A little bit more info on it would have been nice. It might get me, and others, to join it, if it still exists.

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the best about these blog entries is that they were very short. And I like that a whole lot. A lot of Bloggers, if not most of them, either have very long blogs, I'm a good example of that, or a mixture of short and long ones. But yours are just right. Not too long and not too short.


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Thank you for sharing this blog with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great blogs like this one.

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Review of Complex Numbers  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Robert Waltz,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your thirteenth year with us.


Overall Impression: I liked this blog very much. At first, I didn't think that I would because of your Blog Introduction. But I'm very happy that I went ahead and read it anyway. I think you did a fantastic job with these blog entries.

Your Blog Introduction: This Blog Introduction is like nothing I have read before. Don't get me wrong. I liked it a whole lot. And I like Math too. But not advanced Math like this one is.

The Blog Itself: After I read your Blog Introduction, I thought to myself, 'Oh, no. These blog entries are about advanced Math.' Boy was I wrong about that. At least your last three entries wasn't about Math.

Any Last Thoughts: Your Blog Title is also a little misleading. Especially after reading your Blog Introduction. You might want to reconsider that title. I think that it should reflect the blog entries themselves. at least that's what I think.


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Thank you for sharing this blog with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great blogs like this one.

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Hello Kenzie,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixteen year with us.


Overall Impression: I'm sorry to hear about your health problems. But it doesn't look like it has affected your writing too much. Not if your Short Stories, Poetry, etc. are as good as your last three blog entries.

Your Blog Introduction: I think you did a great job with your blog introduction. You told me a lot about yourself without really telling us too much.

The Blog Itself: Only reviewed your last three entries. But I could have done more since they were so short. And I like that a whole lot. I just don't have the time to do anymore of them right now. Your latest one started out about Dictionary.com. Which I use all the time too. Especially for my big problem with Tenses. But then you went into who is attending church. is there a reason for that? I know what you mean about getting unrequested catalogues. I've gotten a lot of them myself. I'm not sure why you wrote the third blog entry. Don't get me wrong. I liked it a whole lot. Just didn't understand why your wrote it.

Any Last Thoughts: If your other blog entries are a good, or better, than these three are, I would like to read more of them. If I can.


If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this blog with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great blogs like this one.

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Hello Jo_Caroline_,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourth year with us.


Overall Impression: What I liked the best about this poem is that it rhyme. I know that isn't an easy thing to do. At least it's not for me. Especially, the way that you did it. With the first and third line of each section. It's usually the lines next to each other. But sometimes it's the second and fourth lines.

The Poem Itself: Remembering about an ex can be hard to do. And if it ended badly, like in a divorce, it can be even worse. A little bit more detail about that would have been nice.

How It Makes Me Feel: Love is a very powerful feeling that we all have every so often. And when it's your first love it's even stronger. I know you didn't mention anything about it being the first love. But from what I read, it read like it was. Am I right about that?

Any Last Thoughts: It looks like you didn't rhyme the last section. Did I miss a rhyme here?


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Review of Color of Whole  
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Hello Jhon B'Wraith,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fourteenth year with us.


Overall Impression: This poem was very confusing to me. Don't get me wrong. I liked it a whole lot. At least what I understood of it I did. But I just didn't understand it.

The Poem Itself: What was this poem about. From the Title Description, it's about a painter. And there were several pieces of the poem that had to do with painting.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm not sure how this poem made me feel. I know it made me feel confused. But I'm not sure if that's all it made me feel.

Any Last Thoughts: Maybe this poem is just too sophisticated to me. That would explain why I couldn't understand what it was about.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Review of Coffee Shop  
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Hello Shubham ,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your third year with us.


Overall Impression: There are three things that I liked most of all about this poem. One, that it was in Italics like your individual was thinking to themself. The second one is that this was also a story. I like that a lot. And last but definitely not least, it rhymed. The old-fashion way, with the two lines together.

The Poem Itself: I take it that this boy was a teenager. Maybe even waiting for his first date. Since he was drinking coffee, he might be a little bit older than that. But the first date scenario is still the same.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm happy that everyone else at the coffee shop was laughing and smiling. I just wish the boy was too.

Any Last Thoughts: This was a sad poem. And I understand why you wrote it this way. But I think I would have made it a happy one with the girl coming in. Probably as he was leaving.


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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Hello turtlegreen,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression: Don't get me wrong. This may read like I didn't like your poem. But that's not true. I liked it a whole lot.

The Poem Itself: If I read this poem correctly, your mother took her own life. Is that true or just a part of the poem.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm sorry about you losing your mother. Unfortunately, I know how you feel about that. I feel the same way about mine. True, it's been almost twenty years since mine died. But I still think about her every day.

Any Last Thoughts: Personally, I don't believe in suicide. And I don't write them. But that's just the way that I feel. It might be an ending for you. But it's just the beginning for those around you. That's true with this poem.


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Hello Kayla Sullivan,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.


Overall Impression: True, I had trouble understanding what this poem was about. But don't me wrong. I liked this poem a lot. At least what I could understand I did.

The Poem Itself: What was this poem about. I know that you mentioned in your Title Description what is was about. But I didn't read that in your poem. Did I miss something.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm not sure how I felt about this poem. But if I had to choose at least feeling it would be disappointment.

Any Last Thoughts: Maybe this poem is just too sophisticated for me. That's why I don't understand it.


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Hello Ree Lannes,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: I didn't really read the 'fear' in this story like you mentioned in your Title Description. But there definitely was a storm. Don't get me wrong. I loved this poem very much.

The Poem Itself: What I liked the best about this poem was the rhyming. But there were some parts of it where it didn't look like it did rhyme with any of the words around it. Did I miss something here?

How It Make Me Feel: I'm here at work. And there is a storm out there. It's not as bad as the one in your poem, yet. But I still sort of know how the individual in this poem feels. I don't like storms either. Especially if I'm at work or at home watching TV, movies, or on my Laptop.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looks like you might have made at least one mistake in grammar. Shouldn't it be 'is over' instead of 'isover.'

Any Last Thoughts: Most of us feel the same way as the individual does in this poem. And I think you did a fantastic job in bringing that to our attention.


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Hello Lavinia,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: I think that you did a great job with this poem. The only reason I'm not giving it a Five Star rating is that of the way it was written.

The Poem Itself: What I liked that best about this poem is that it rhymed. But not only did it rhyme, you did it the hard way with the first and third lines rhyming instead of the two line together method or all four but every other line method. None is easy to do. But I think it's even harder to do it this way.

How It Make Me Feel: This poem made me feel sad too.

Any Last Thoughts: The one thing that I would have done differently if I had written it was broken, no pun intended, up that first group of lines. It looks like you sort of did that anyway into four lines each. But you didn't do it physically.


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Hello BettyB,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your thirteenth year with us.


Overall Impression: I think that this was a fantastic poem. It was a sad one because of the subject matter. But it was also a great one.

The Poem Itself: They always say that when one twin feels something the other one feels it too. I'm glad that isn't always true after all. If it were, then the twin brother would be dead too. Right?

How It Make Me Feel: Sadness. That's how I feel. I'm not sad because of the loss. But because of the life that had to go on without her.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I noticed that you made a few errors in grammar in this poem. The first one was no period after gain. And the second one was the capitalization of 'remember.' I'm not sure about the third one. But shouldn't 'everyday' be two words.

Any Last Thoughts: The only reason I didn't give this a Five Star rating is because of the possible grammar errors. If I am wrong about them, please let me know.


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Hello rl,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eleventh year with us.


Overall Impression: This was a very interesting poem. Not because I didn't like it. In fact, it's just the opposite of them. I liked it very much. It's because I didn't understand it.

The Poem Itself: At first, I thought that this was going to be about the Ocean Siren's that lure sailor to their deaths. Then I started reading it. And I realized it was an ambulance.

How It Make Me Feel: Very happy. I am really happy that I got the chance to read this poem. That's how I feel about it.


Any Last Thoughts: this poem was a little weird. But I like weird. Do you have any more poems like it? If you do, I would like to read some of them too if I can.


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Hello Maria Mize,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.


Overall Impression: I don't know if you achieved your goals with this poem or not because I don't know anything about styles. All I know is what I like. And I liked this poem very much.

The Poem Itself: First Section was about silence and why we should enforce it. And the second one was about not keeping silent. Both were really talking about the same thing, silence. Am I right about that?

How It Make Me Feel: The one thing that I wouldn't have done with this poem is written it in blue. Don't get me wrong. I love blue. It's my second favorite color. But I still don't think it should have been used in this poem. It makes it hard to read it. At least that's how I feel.

Any Last Thoughts: I think that you did a very good job with this poem. Do you have any more as good, or better, than this one? If you do I sure would like to read some of them too when I get the chance, if I can.


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Hello Babbles,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventh year with us.


Overall Impression: This poem was fantastic. Once I started reading it I wanted to read on to find out what was going to happen next.

The Poem Itself: I disagree with the Title Description. It might be for most. But it's definitely not for everyone.

How It Make Me Feel: Happy. That's how I feel about this poem. Very happy that I got the change to read it.

Any Last Thoughts: The one thing that I would have done differently if I was writing this poem was to separate it into four line Sections. I just think that it's easier to read if it's split up into Sections.


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Hello Summer Wind is Healing,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixth year with us.


Overall Impression: Don't get me wrong. I liked this poem a whole lot. But I didn't understand what it meant.

The Poem Itself: What was this poem about? I know in your Title Introduction that it about what happens before a suicide takes place. And there was that one line at the end that indicated that. But most of it didn't.

How It Make Me Feel: I feel sorry for this individual. No matter how bad life is, suicide is now the answer. It may be the end for you. But it's only the beginning for those around you. At least that's how I feel.

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the best about this poem is that you Centered it. I think that a poem is easier to read when it's Centered.


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Hello LaMourDuCiel,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.


Overall Impression: This poem was a little bit confusing to me. Don't get me wrong. I liked this poem a whole lot. At least I did what I could understand of it.

The Poem Itself: It's not the poem itself that I'm confused about. I understand the words. But not how it was written. Maybe it's because of the Space between Sections. There wasn't any. Most Poetry writers split their poems into two, three, usually four, five, or six lines per Section. But this one had none. I think it would have been a lot easier to read if it had been placed in Sections. Maybe it wouldn't have been so confusing to me then.

How It Make Me Feel: I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. True, I feel confused about it. But is that the only feelings I have about it?

Any Last Thoughts: At times it looked liked it rhyme. But most of the time it didn't. Did I miss some of it?


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Thank you for sharing this Poetry with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great poems like this one.

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