Oh My God! How beautifully worded this work is. You have captured my heart completely. I feel I'm there for the first time myself, again. Absolutely amazing! I can smell, see, hear and taste it all again. You have quite literally taken my feelings and quoted them in this blessed piece of poetry. I am thankful I read this.
What a powerful and emotional piece. There is so much longing and desire here. Pain and trauma ooze from the heart of this writer. One cannot deny that he suffers the torment of this interaction. Personal relationships are a vice on the heart and while beautiful for awhile, horrible things happen to the participant when it goes bad. I'm sorry for your loss.
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