I get what you're saying about self love. I think some is necessary to move forward in life. If you don't value yourself, it can lead down an unhappy road ahead. Grief takes all kinds of forms, and effects everyone differently.
This was sometimes funny and also insightful. People will disagree on what's considered a classic. Just look at movies. I agree there's some books labeled classics that I don't think alot of people would miss if they were retired.I always worried if I did publish something if it would be a "bad book." But I guess that would vary by individual.How about something inspiring for future generations to look up to. Appreciate the food for thought.
This was very profound. If I didn't read the title I wouldn't be sure what it was about. I never used to have a "phone addiction". But since I was upgraded I may change my stance on that. Technology has its uses. But if we allow ourselves to get sucked in, it can have a negative impact on us overall. I think it helps to cut down when possible or just put the phone down and take a walk. For our own sake and our well being.
This is very true, especially in today's world. I feel sorry for young people that look at people on social media and feel there's some unrealistic expectation to live up to. Alot of it is either staged or misleading. It can't be healthy to have your life run on likes,or how active you are on social media. There's much more to life than that. I think your poem sums that up well.
This was very nice Prosperous Snow. I like to think I feel God in nature sometimes. There's just kind of a peaceful feeling about it. I try and remember there's a world out there and to try and be an active part of it.It's easy to get caught up in the world. I think wgen we slow down and be calm, it gives him the chance to speak to us.If we're willing to listen.
I love this. I thought he was looking for the family dog or something to take with him. Emotional support animal or something of the like. This was funny. I love their relationship. I wish real relationships could be more like this. I think more people would be happier if they were.
I like the premise of this. I struggle at times to make poetry work out at times. Sometimes I can be inspired and make something good. And then to take that furtherand make a song out of it. Takes a bit of talent to carry it off properly. I give props to all who can make this work.
Love this, really nostalgic. How we look back on childhood can be a bit biased. Because how you remember it and how it actually was can be different. I like the imagery here. It's very nice and gives good vibes. Nature is fun to use in poetry and I think that you really incorporate the use of nature well.
I liked this. Gave me "Frozen" vibes but also a little of the elemnts, especially fire. Logically,you think,you can't really freeze flames can you? I like that it makes you think a little bit. I like the without you I was inconplete narrative gping on here. I like those and I think you pulled it off well here. Also, rhymes done well. Thank you for sharing.
Parts of this sound like you could make into a song. Well done getting the rhyme down. Not so easy to pull off all the time. I think you carried this off nicely. I also like the title for the poem. I feels like the speaker is free now and can move forward.
This was a lil bit hard to follow. Idk if it was someone had dementia and forgot or just had been sometime since they had seen each other. It was an intriguing way to lead things. Sounds like it could really pick up from here. If this is a short snippet, I think there's room to expand. If not, it certainly got my attention.
I really loved this. Such nice romantic sentiment here. I really like idea of a happily ever after that may actually last. Reality can be a real bummer so I think that may be part of the reason I like a good happy ending. It's noce to see some optimism where love is concerned every once in a while. You carried this off really well.
Hi,liked the rhyming in this poem. I like moon's shadows refernce. I think tthe face imagery was well done too. It's not alsways easy to make a decent rhyming poem. I think short and sweet is the right idea. I think you carried this off fairly well.
This was really interesting and pretty straight forward as far as the do's and don'ts go. If you didn't know where to start, I think this would be a good resource to at least get a feel for things. It does seem to be a well- thought out and precise way to writing a query letter. Certainly food for thought.
You know I pricked my finger on a rose before. Not a good time. That's how I learned roses do have thorns. I think it's sad alot of us feel we have to go through life playing make-believe. It's sad when you feel like there's no one you can just be you with. I'd hope most people would have someone to turn to if needed.
Wow,I'm not sure what to say after that.Sometimes people can be really awful. Hopefully, you were able to get some good memories with it.I'm glad you weren't hurt worse from that incident. Sometimes the actions of people can't be fathomed.
Welcome to WDC,hope you feel like part of the community before long.
I like the phoenix mention. It seems very old timey. Could it together folks or you'll be sorry. With poetry, I think it's not always what ypu say but saying it well.Sometimes I think people throw in words to sound more sophisticated but end up not using it properly. I really liked this poem. Going to be thinking of phoenixes for a while yet.
Hi, I think there's somerhing to say for being short and sweet and to the point.Trying to read some poems is a challenge.Shakespeare can be hard till you can get a handle on what he's saying.I don't consider myself a poet.I have to be rather inspired for that.
Thanks for sharing. I'll be sure any future poetry gets to the point.
Food allergies are definitely something you have to be careful with.I think people with nut allergies have something similar. It's amazing how many things you have to watch out for when you can only take in certain foods. It's usually not something you actively think about until you have to.
I wish you well and that you stay healthy during this time.
Interesting, a little unsure if this is.I guess it's meant to be a translation of a rhyming poem. It sounds really sad and still very lovely. Any particular reason this stood out to you? Sometimes it can be for even English natives to try and tackle grammar and the like.Trying to explain all that isn't any easier.
Anything involving quests can be awesome. You certainly got my attention. I felt bad for Albert when he said ''By myself?'' It's harder to be brave on your own when you don't have the support. Certainly a good group of characters to keep the story going and worth while for the reader.
I like the idea of a hermit convention. But the hermit at the end is probably right. People who want to be by themselves will likely stay that way. Every once in a while people should be able to interact with others when they have a chance. Some may be more in need of it than others. Overall,an interesting idea and a good read.
So I love poems that rhyme. There's just something about about having a good rhyme going. It is a pretty big debate. Myself,I prefer to see at night and we can do more but that's just me. I know some people like getting an extra hour of sleep in and I get that.
This was really lovely and so profound in a way. It really gets behind the idea of inner beauty. The soul of a person, their core inner being. Idk if I ever heard it mentioned in such a way before. It's all so peaceful and airy and I just like the tone, it comes off so light.
I can relate to this alot. I also have two good friends. One of them moved to another state.It's harder to keep in touch when great distance is a factor. I'm happy for them but still.I hope you were able to have many happy memories and still have more to come in future.
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