I like interactives though some can get weird. I guess there's a thing for inflation though I'm not sure that's what's happening here. Being one of the items dealing with plus size women, and so in-depth besides, I think helps you stand out more. I definitely think this has a lot of potential.
I've heard about the butterfly effect before but I've since forgotten it. I'm a sucker for rhyming poems. It's true that we now live in a fearful world. It never used to come to mind I might not survive the school day. That we might have a school shooting and some may not survive. It's a scary time to be alive.
This was fun if not brutal depending how you filled it in. Sometimes what you fill in can still be oddly fitting. I just like madlibs they're fun to fill out and you really don't have to think too hard. Break ups are hard and regardless what stage of life, they can be hard to handle regardless what side of it you're on.
I think this would definitely go in the romance selection somewhere. It's really pretty and I think it might come out as a slow love song if it did become a song. Just the name sounds interesting. I think you might have something here. I think your ''Toressa'' definitely has the potential to go places.
I like the poems that spell something out. It's hard to do but you really mastered this one. You certainly seem to know what goes through the minds of our being sent off to fight for our country. How they leave isn't always how they come back.
I get this a lot. More so when i started college. You get used to a schedule and being aroun people. I'm not around people as much as I was back in high school and sometimes it's lonely. It can be a weird feeling. I wat my space but I also want the chance to interact w/others. Even when I'm not always in a social mood.
Dominos is great for delivery I'll give them that. I'm not sure baout thebeginning and how the rest turned out but I kind of like that they didn't go through with what they were planning. It's probably best for all parties involved. Marissa doesn't realize what she was spared from.
I liked how this turned out. It's a fairly predictable interpretation of the he/she said. Or like telephone in a way and the translation get mixed up. I hope the work goes well and both parties gets what they want. It's only fair since they are both participating and making the house nice.
I like the young people helping out the stranded salmon. They probably don't live very long after mating season. What with bears and other life factors. But they did good here and for the time anyway, the salmon I'm sure appreciated their efforts. Go youth!
I like your penguin costume icon. I do like poems that rhyme. There is something for knowing who you are and standing proud. It's easy to fall in with the majority. If we could instill that kind of confidence in our youth, I think we would see great improvement in the lives of our young people. {Not the entitled bunch but teaching them to at least be confident in who they are and where they fit in the world.}
Welcome to WDC! Kudos for being brave enough to share! I know it can be intimidating at first. Hopefully things will start looking positive for you. Maybe you can find a support group to help you through challenging times.
I would suggest maybe spacing this out. Maybe rethink some of the sentence structure. Watch out for run-on sentences. But keep at it and you will notice the difference.
I really liked this. I got the first one and I may have gotten the others at a later point. I don't quite get the corn flakes website though. I think it's an interesting idea for students. It definitely gets them thinking. A great way to inspire students in a creative way.
It sounds like a really interesting read. I think this shows a lot of promise. I'm not sure what the YA part stands for but otherwise I think you set this up pretty well. Wishing you all the luck!
It also sounds pretty tragic so I'd hope for at least some kind of mild happy feelings/ending before everything bites the dust. Otherwise I like the idea behind the story you're trying to get published.
Whatever the result, may you always be inspired to write and never be afraid to put your work out there!
I understand where the dark tag comes from. I think it's fairly normal to think on death and our mortal frailty. It's part of what makes us human. It reminds us everything and everyone eventually will fade from this life. It's not an easy subject to broach.
Through poems, we can put try to write out what we can't find words to say.
I know anyone on the outside looking in,can't hope to understand what you're going through. There's a lot of media out there that's misleading in regards to mental illness. Having you share your own experiences helps those on the outside better understand what you're going though.
I really haven't seen too much about mental health. I just saw a contest dealing with mental health. There really isn't enough out there dealing with mental health. Anything to encourage awareness/encouraging those who that have one is really inspiring.
I'm getting serious Oliver Twist vibes here. It's never fun having to do something you're forced to. Especially when you're a kid and it's an adult telling you to do it. I took chorus in middle school growing up. I always liked singing. Even then sometimes we'd do a song I wasn't thrilled with, but the rest of the group did. I like singing b/c I want to. It's no fun when you're being forced into it.
Part of it may be more availability to social media and kids and even adults just don't get out as much to try and meet new people. Even when they do, they're still so attached to their phone or what have you. In some ways, social media does allow us to reach those who we might never come across in real life and other instances it can be a hindrance whether we realize it or not.
It's definitely an ongoing problem but not the only one. We'd have to be willing to unplug ourselves to really get at this problem before we see any real results.
Here we have children watching their animals and the awe in which they take in the world. Youth seem to be more open to what the world has to offer opposed to when they're older and more wary, maybe a bit more cynical.
We learn something from kids about enjoying life and, taking in the moment. Try to remember when we were that young and felt the same.
It was a lovely story to read. Very endearing as the child begins to learn more about where she comes from, from her mom. You get different perspectives and see how the ''other half'' may have a different stand on the U.s in this instance. Just really a nice story over all.
This is kind of cute. The moose ends up getting a new name(or he at least thinks he is.) He even rescues a dog from a fire, that would be impressive on it's own. It was nice to see that the moose in a round about way maybe was able to change the town's attitude towards moose.
Hello, I'm not totally familiar with this game but I've heard something about it. Something about mechanical characters jumping out and scaring you. I think it's interesting when something like a video game or whatever is given a more in-depth going over. I like interactive and I think FNAF would make an interesting one.
Thanks for attempting to break it down. Not sure I can really grasp it afterwards, but it helps to see where you're coming from. I for one, am just as happy to appreciate the effect than to dissect it. Doesn't that take part of the fun out of it?
Anyway, thanks for doing this. It helps me to grasp the ''science'' behind it.
Love the purple. I'm not sure if there's a name for the poem you have here but it definitely gets the message across I will say. I think we all get to feeling we're alone I the world. Having someone to help ground you, and make you feel valued is special.
This was really nice. It does seem true that we only appreciate something most after the fact. I was closest to my grandma on my mom's side. It helps to remember the happier time you had with them. Then you have memories, so it's not like they're totally gone. You have those times you shared with them and it's meaningful.
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