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Hey,
Thanks for sharing your poem. I appreciate that it's a rhyming poem. Did you mean to put bloopers instead of bloopeers? Unless it was done on purpose for this poem. I was certainly entertained while reading this & will look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
Hi,
I like your cat poem. There's alot of cats that like to roam where I live. I even saw one or two at my community college. I don't hate them since it's people's fault their out roaming around in the first place. I don't bother them & they chill in the yards or outside the house.I don't care about that. They start taking a dump & peeing all over then I start to notice them more. But cats will be cats.
I can kind of see it imagine the experience in my head a bit. Very nice colors, I like the picture for the mind it presents. You can get a couple of the senses involved imagining it.
It's nice to see something from you. Hope you are well & taking care of yourself.
Hey,
Thanks for sharing. It was really beautiful in a kind of that's sad and terrible way. Something about that kind of poetry that draws us in. I hope you are doing on or at least better now. Some things you can do something about, while others you just try and do the best you can. I hope you are able to come out of that darkness and bask in the light like you deserve.
Be kind to yourself & stay safe out there.
Best, BlueMoon
PS. Welcome to the WDC community. Hope you choose to stick around. I'd love to see more of your work.
Hey,this was awesome! I liked being part of the group too. The best part was when we'd virtually tour somewhere. It was great. I think I may have since been taken off the group cause I've been inactive. I'd like to go at it again sometime. School's been my focus alot lately.Just sucks up all my time and energy. Maybe I'll stop by sometime and see you there.
Hi there,
This was really lovely. I liked the comparison of day and night.I liked the imagery of wolves and owls. I think the romance came in near the end. I liked how very into the night this was. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading this and hope you continue to write in future.
Hey Tim,
I have to say, I'vereally enjoyed a lot of your work. I think pets can be a great boon for their families. Maybe they're just animals to some. But to a lot of people I think, they're like family. I feel this especially when losing a pet. I liked the happy feelings this poem inspires. Though the pardners at the end threw me off a little.
Hello,
I love that the poem rhymes. Also,the cover image for this. Why does it look so smug? And it's talking about pain, so... i thought it was an interesting choice. The first line, I'd say you could just say "how so you define pain? There's different levels of pain and people feel pain differently. Overall, I liked this and feel free to share more with the WDC community in future.
Hey there,
I really liked reading this. I wasn't sure whst to expect but I liked it. The title was certainly interesting. The groundhog is right. We need to get out of our holes and work on making right this world we helped screw up. We only got the one so we have to look after it and each other. I think you made my day.
This was really good. I think it's also very sad because it's true. Older people seem to lose value when they can no longer work. Not to mention that their families may have similar mind sets. You work very hard your whole life and That's how you're treated. Definitely something we need to change about society.
Hello,
I really like the idea behind this. I also really liked the image cover for this. I thought this was going to be a poem but it looks like a story. I still enjoyed this. We all are just trying to do the best we can. We never do know what's going on with the person next to us. Let's try to be kind to each other this upcoming holiday season.
This would make an interesting idea if it went to the big svreen or even a book. Honestly the cover image made me think Narnia. This is really good and I liked the blue type, I thibk it matches the feel for this nicely. It would be interesting if he ever did manage to make it back home.You certainly piqued my interest with this. Hope to see more of your work around Wdc.
So like if nudists took up bowling? Idk I think it would freak alot of people out. The idea could be comical I guess. Would the bowling scores be any good if everyone was going nude? You have definitely given me some food for thought I can say I've never given thought to up til now. Thanks for that.
Hi, this was kind of interesting to read. Idk about courting, but dating can be a hassle sometimes. Online dati g seems like hit or miss. Covid happened and that changed things too. I think it's about being open to opening up to someone else. Definitely communication as well. A lot of problems come up because people don't communicate. I think alot of factors play into it.
I think I've seen a good number of these. Not sure why growth is such a big thing but ok.(To each their own.)Browser would make an interesting choice for this.It looks like it's gotten some feedback or at least interest.Good luck with this and your future writing.
This was really insightful. Idk I don't know how much I'd trust humanity again if I saw everything about someone. If it's something that could harm someone you'd want to know but otherwise I think people should be allowed to keep some things to themselves. It would feel kind of violating to be disected like that. But I agree that for the most part Wdc has been pretty welcoming. It has been a very low number of times I've experienced the opposite.
Wow! If I what to say. I thought you were trying to say a name at first. After the volcano devastated Canary island, it hits a bit differently now. I think they debunked being hit by a ginat tsunami. So there's that. This could be an interesting short animation. I certainly wasn't expecting the ending.
Hi,this is very good.Kings certainly had to make some tough choices.This was very vivid in my mind as I read it. You can just imagine being there,witnessing it all go down.
During this week,WDC is celebrating being able to be around for another year.Maybe you'll get a chance to look around and have some fun. I hope you stick around and continue to be inspired in your writing.
Hi,
I'm always intrigued why there seems to be such a fascination with weight gain. Not sure what the draw is but to each their own. I like Pokemon so this could be interesting. I liked the thumbnail for this as well. Hope this goes well for you. I think it has plenty of potential to it.
I like the idea behind this. It sounds like something worthy of being a twilight zone episode. Humans try to automate or turn everything digital. Not sure how well that translates where love is concerned. Unless you count online dating. Seems a mixed bag. But the computer/program or whatever,is only so good as those that made it. Doesn't really leave you with high hopes does it?
I think that's an interesting concept. Some poems can be pretty angsty, so I think they may be great for songs if they got the right fit. I haven't found poetry to be the easiest thing, but sometimes when I'm inspired maybe. Don't know if I've ever written anything worth putting music to. But it's definitely something I'll be thinking of now.
Hello,
Thanks for sharing your work.
I think the first two paragraphs set things off to a good start. It when we get to the third blurb things get a bit tangled. Maybe since it's altogether and I'm more accustomed to things being spaced out, but it looks like it could be cleaned up a bit. But otherwise, I liked this.
We were coming back from an outing, and just the construction in progress. It's all over and some of it can be kind of scary going through it. I think we got lost at one point, since we missed a turn at one point. You can still see the water, and some greenery that's so far held out. I get what you're saying though. All this other stuff going on, can take away from the natural beauty all around us. It never does seem to ever get finished either.
It's funny. I'm currently reading about a girl who goes to a quilting retreat in Scotland. I guess quilting block is similar to writing block. Maybe you could sketch a few ideas down, as you have them & look back on it for inspiration. I know quilts can be pretty elaborate. I hope your muse returns soon so you can return to doing something you enjoy.
I like the brevity of this. Short and sweet. It makes me think of a song. I do wish well for my friends and family. This has some really nice vibes to it. I hope you continue to share in the future. Poetry can be a hard thing to master. I think you're on the right track.
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