Good day, again, Wildflower B. I. C.Random review likes you, and I got to say I'm so enjoying your poetry. Again, this is great! I never really thought about such a topic as foster care, and difficult people, but do have the experiences of the later. Well written, flow a little off but doesn't take away from the imagery. Sad, but also very warming and unusual. Another full five, you deserve it.
Good day, Wildflower B. I. C.Random review and wow what a beautiful, heartfelt poem, I think I teared up a little. so relatable, so much of what so many feel. This is fantastic, I'm glad I happened apron it, thanks for sharing. So often I'm at a lost for words, feel so much but a lost to words, a five for the emotional impact this gave me.
The description is accurate but for a layman reader can be something different, more personal relationship, abusive, things we don't share, but still exist. This is well written, honest feeling, and a reminder of Sunday school lessons. More romantic, more uncertain, more regretful. Thank you for sharing, and have a good one.
This was very interesting for being dialogue only, no character descriptions or environment but held my interest with just what the two were saying and spot on for todays society, well edited and honestly a good contest entry. My only suggestion would be changing the description as if random hasn't chosen, I wouldn't of based on the description, its more than the sum of its parts.
A tribute to WDC. Nice. Well described overview of all the users, and what we do and the reward we all get from being and getting rated here. Older poem but still relevant. No suggestion, and no spelling errors that I see. Thank you Joy for sharing and Happy New Year.
First Random Review of 2026, JACE Yippee
and I enjoyed, brought up some spooky circus themes that I'm sure when not your intent,but clowns, and center rings, the elephants have all been changed to a event of fun memories to things that bring unsettling fear. Great use of the form, and very well done, I see no errors and have no suggestions, only my thoughts which are my own. Thank you for sharing.
What a fun, fast paced, relatable poem. I enjoyed this a lot, and see could see myself in a long time power outage, thinking and experiencing all these things, no internet, no streaming, no radio. Like when I tell my much younger sister, than my boys went outside to play unsupervised. She has cameras and her phone, there's nothing she doesn't see. Lota of memories, well written, just enjoyable poetry. Thanks.
Interesting. I have never used AI to make a video, or write anything. Chat Bot and such only came after I finished school. Well written, and I enjoyed the facts included as I don't have experience with AI creativity. If such a thing exists. Have a good one, and Thank for the share.
I have never heard of this book but from you learned or adopted from it sounds interesting, another tool in our life belts to tackle n time mismanagement, and other issues. Like I said interesting, Thanks!
Merry Christmas, Redtowrite random review time, on this holiday and this is quite moving. Freedom can be many things and this sums up some of those "freedoms", some I would not thought of, some that are sad. Well edited, no suggestions for change. Thanks you for sharing, 2026 is almost here.
Happy Holidays, Adherennium Random review and a older poem but still very well written, a smudge suggestive, not overcrowded in flashy imagery, and easy to understand. Thank you, and write on.
Wow! That is some very "pay attention" pros. I sat up when I knew where you were going, the gothic imagery, the darkness, the light things that are supposed to shine but may not with the noisy thoughts in our heads. This is fantastic, full five, you rocked my boat. Thanks! dark soul.
Happy Holidays, Jay O'Toole older poem, random review, and will say a nice, easy to relate poem. The fear of flying and having such weather, the old act of seeing our life before our eyes, seeking God. I see no errors, well edited, and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing. Kudos, Reading, Spooky, StaiNed
Delightfully cute poem, wherever you got the idea I wonder,but can't help but smile at the silliness of such a sight, as I've never seen a elephant, but could reading this in their tennis shoes and all the glory of a race. Well done, edited, just delightful. Thanks!
Wow, this is impactful. We do see the sadness, the loneliness, and the happiness in others people eyes, if only we spot to look, but we don't for the fear of perhaps understanding. To act instead of relate in some vague action is perhaps lost to our digital age. I really enjoyed this, see no errors, and can't help feel a little sad reading this great easy touching poem. Thank you.
Back in time Random review takes me, and I can say this poem was good to read, Thoughts linger, a time of reflection and faith, and those questions we wonder in the early night hours. Not overly long, with lengthy prose, that raise questions of deep internal psychology. Well edited, Tim Chiu Thanks!
Happy Holidays, random review brought me, and I must say what a delightful sober poem. I could see the stone gargoyle, the seriousness of it, the mystery, the imagery is great and even a little giggle at the end with Walter. Very well done, Beholden Here's a full five for my smile. Thank you so much!
Thoughts of a bad relationship shined at me reading this, like a eighties love song, where enough time has passed that blind love is more sighted. Some interesting imagery, not overly descriptive. Very well written, no suggestions and I see no errors. Again, Thanks!
A very well written poem, full of mystic imagery. I could hear the shallow water and the hum of washed soft peddlers, or rocks. I have no suggestions, Dreamlike in feelings and expressions. Ta Da, Thanks.
Hppy Holidays, Moarzjasac Random review and here I am. This is well written, though perhaps capitalizing each beginning stanza not just the first, too me for a nice ride, and I could see all the thoughts that visited in the stairway. Its funny how we think of things often at the weirdest times. We can be with so many and feel alone, we can be alone and feel crowded. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed the simply imagery of it.
Very well done, not overcrowded in massive, thought changing imagery. I would think starting each stanza with the same though would drag it down but nope, its great. Nice how you dingle the read along with each morning and a new set of questions as you daydream in relaxion. Nice, I enjoyed, spot on.
Smiles and Scares my friend. This the season indeed. This is great some very big, I'd say bombastic. Fun, easy, and another Christmastime activity to do. No suggestions, just a fun word search. Thanks!
Poems written by provided prompts are always different as they use prompt in their way and this is not exception. Somewhat like rap, questioning if things done are right, what is right and wrong, and all the mixed feelings in such questioning. No errors, well done, I enjoyed and honestly quite neat poetry. Thanks sweetie.
Thanks for sharing the very well thought of self reflections you put to some wonderful prose. Powerful and provoking, I can say I enjoyed, though not the band highlighted. Some big words, and some bigger imagery from gunshots to peddle squabbles, to pathways, truly a lot in expressed. Patiently edited, no suggestions. Again, Thanks!
A neat free verse poem, has all the feelings, but described as a bee and a flower so well done. A few space typos. Full of some sad and fuzzy imagery. Slow paced, two stanza makes ya slow down and enjoy the ride of the love, the grief and the dead to be together in another time again. Creative. Thanks!
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Well described overview of all the users, and what we do and the reward we all get from being and getting rated here. Older poem but still relevant. No suggestion, and no spelling errors that I see. Thank you Joy for sharing and Happy New Year. 
