Well done! Random review brought me,
Dark, somewhat, very small, but lingers invites the reader to perhaps more, but not to be. I enjoy misleading poems, how my mind things of imagery not to happen, and I'm left in wonder at my mistake, and the writer's intent.
Creative, even with its tiny size. No errors. As I've said well done.
Warm Regards, Little StaiNed
Glitter adds so much bling and postivity. "sorry for spelling" Google eyes do the same, I have them on a cactus. I see no errors, very well done, and not something I usually. Thanks for a little sparkle in my darkness.
Cute, well written, simple in its imagery, not overlaying and over intense in feelings. An easy read. Winter isn't for everyone, Summer isn't either. If I had a choice I'd pick Winter and no fireplace for me. Thanks for sharing, hope Random Review picks it up for me people.
Random Review/Thoughts time, and I'm struggling with the site changes so bear with me.
Good day, Tim ChiuI remember being here before.
Very heartwarming poem, well edited I see no puncutation errors, although I'll leave many spelling errors, To find someone to love that deeply is a blessing itself. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks here is my five.
Random review/Thoughts, I'm back again, Emberly Gray I remember my last visit.
Wow! So relatable, as I imagine many many people as this prose describes. Somewhat say, feeling defeated. Sharing is powerful and I hope it helped shedding some of those icky voices that tell us lies, shows us lies, we are all loved. Powerful, and moving such a sad path. Thanks honestly, to you and Random Review link, I am out of my comfort.
Good day, David the Dark one! Random review/Thoughts time and Little me does not fear the dark. Nice story, not overall creepy but interesting in its delivery. We don't know what came in from the snow. I assume the person is a older child, from some dialogue choices. Great inner turmoil. Almost like a dream. Or a memory. Reminds me of a recent movie. Weapons. Thank you for sharing and the chance to read it. I enjoyed.
Grief does not go away indeed. You never get used to it, and as time passes those memories will cling. I too lost someone very special to me, and can relate to what you shared in this essay. I believe some people try to help but often does not work out. Just one day at a time, and remember the moments.
Thank you sharing, I hope it helped. Little StaiNed
Goodness! How sad this is. I would hope its not an experience, but if so oh my how heartbreaking, clinical depression. I mean its rewarding to share, to know others feel and hear those mean voices that hurt our hearts. Things can be bad, and this well written poem hits that smack on.
Well done! So relatable as we all have experienced similar in some way. Great small humor despite the settling angry of the bird. Honestly I liked this, so good. Thanks, no suggestions so here a five. Have a great day.
Morning, Random review time, I remember you as I visit quite often. Emberly Gray
Well done, a bit melodramatic, misunderstood, hurt, lack of caring, a lot is said in this simple yet effective. I imagine being in a abusive relationship and just closing up and accepting it. Well done. Thanks!
Gosh! This is totally awesome, so much out of my dark comfort zone but so wonderfully do and paced. Who indeed, this makes so much sense is its silly and melodramatic tone, or least what the voice was in my head, I'm smiling from ear to ear this is just so good. Full five, my dark friends agree.
Random Review time, Little me is visiting, Anna Marie Carlson Entry for contest, I imagine a prompt provided. A self reflection, perhaps excuses, we mentally make to avoid expectations. No offence meant. Well written, no imagery, just cold hard realism about our minds today. No errors, thanks.
Ta La La Vampire, and I re watched Nosferatu again a few day ago. As soon as you started I knew it just had that kind of feel. A great random review for me as I don't think I would of found this on my own. Simple vivid imagery, yet quiet in it feelings, but spot on. Thank you. I only suggest each stanza start with a capital, easy peasy.
Good day, ridinghhood-p.boutilier after some fighting with random review I found your poem. Dreaming and changing what a unique thought, creative indeed. East to follow, to understand and made me kind of hopeful as to what I would dream if I actually did. Thanks, for the chance to read it.
Good day, Random Review time, Emberly Gray I'm back again.
Sneaky behavior indeed. A well told poem, not full of passion and imagery, more a Itch you can reach. Aware, annoyed, disappointed, all those voices that tell you something is off. No suggestions, again I enjoyed, of perhaps a little sad, mystic, poem, Still good and well written. Thanks.
I gotta say how creative. The life of grandparents. This is full of reminders of our childhoods, how we would see out grandparents, those older souls memories. Honestly I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks kindly for sharing, and Little me has no suggestions, Super Duper.
I very so enjoy poetry and this is very good. Longer length but creative in its ability to take me on a small journey of hardness and regrets to a place where happiness thrives, well explained and edited, I see no punctuation errors. Perhaps some structure changes, to emphasize that journey and draw the reader further in. Like this, As I loaf myself on this padded chair
I think about all the unpleasant things in my life,
I think of those evil days, how my own very existence was endangered.
I think of that past and now I heave a sigh of relief.
‘Happiness is acceptance’-has anyone said to you?
‘Happiness is the only well-being nurturing among all the living beings’
‘Happiness is the only key to a sacred and halcyon life.’
The past robbed me completely but I have in store
No barns of qualms or residues of misdeeds.
That will bring tons of misgivings of a sorry life in future
And will wrack and torment me totally and completely.
That's your first stanza, broken into three. Just a thought. Thank your for the well done poem, I'll be back.
A delightful entry into Say It in Eight. Not a easy feat, to have a well understood idea and translate into a understandable poem. You have done this, and I enjoyed. I could see the dilemma, feel the tension of indecision. See the glitter, and hear the camera, blinding and clicking, well done.
Good day, Emberly Gray Random review again, I believe I have been out and about in your port before.
Well written, no errors that I see, I enjoyed the telling of events and imagery over certain months, like the unwanted change of time and the seasons. The chances of a relationship as time passes. Thank kindly.
Great use of the prompt. A warm look at beauty in the inside. The qualities that often get missed. What we do, the small things, besides looks that make us beautiful. Well edited, I see no errors. Thank kindly.
Good day, Random review time for Little me and BOO! your it, Tim Chiu
Very enjoyable, and neat how you entangled faith and nature together. Seems like a poetry form, or not. Creative, sparkling, like I said, enjoyable. I won't ramble, here, don't fear my cold hand, I gift a five. Its desereved.
Delightful slice of life poem. Random review brought me, and honestly I see no errors, simple, well written, not oversaturated in crazy thought provoking prose. Just a easy nice poem about being stuck in traffic. Thank here my five, well done.
Morning, Wildflower B. I. C. I'm back, coffee in hand for another Random Review/Thoughts for you.
A well edited poem about the choices we make when we love another, the secrets we still keep, and the side that we all hide some unknowing till its too late to know what we hid. Slow paced, open ended, with a little darkness to keep the reader looking and wondering. Thanks,
Dark, brooding mood. Slow paced, some musical elements. I think some spelling mishaps, or I misunderstood. Enjoyed, a nice poem, a touch of creature feature, and well edited. Thanks, I always enjoy the darkest places.
Morning, Melody Random review time, and I found you.
Money is just money, its capitalism, and if you have it you can save it, no need to spend senselessly. Easy subject matter, small poem. Thanks. The only suggestion I have is editing for punctuation and lines interacting. Again thank you.
staiNed
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Vampire, and I re watched Nosferatu again a few day ago. As soon as you started I knew it just had that kind of feel. A great random review for me as I don't think I would of found this on my own. Simple vivid imagery, yet quiet in it feelings, but spot on. Thank you. I only suggest each stanza start with a capital, easy peasy.
