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Review by SG Mark
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
nice one - really like the style and the way you add the real human "befuddlement" of being a girl completely encapsulated by lust! have been there before - so this was an interesting trip down memory lane! :)
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Review by SG Mark
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
good one!
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Review by SG Mark
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hehehe good poem!
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