WOW!!! I wonder who inspired this romantic story idea in you? Could it be some sweet guy you met on Writing.com who shared a real-life dancing studio experience with you? (Ha! Ha!) No matter! I am happy to inspire and stimulate your creative imagination, Tess! This is a GREAT LOVE STORY, and it blessed my heart to read it! You know, it would make a beautiful addition to all those Hallmark Channel love stories, if it was developed into a movie script and offered to them for consideration as a new, unique love story to film. Hallmark Channel fans, such as you and I, LOVE watching romantic love stories like this one is!!!
As always, of course, you'll need to do editing and punctuating work on it, but, WOW!!!, Tess, this love story is so sweet and captivating all the way through! I absolutely LOVED reading it!!! If you would like me to help you edit it and spruce it up for you, let me know. My one niece, Sarah, is also a writer, and has asked me to help her with editing and giving her feedback and help with a story that she's writing, and, of course, I said I would. Sarah loves writing fan fiction stories too, and has written several of them featuring the characters of one of her favorite series: DR. QUINN - MEDICINE WOMAN, which she has available to read on the Tumblr website under "SarahCHeard".
Well, I'll close this review with a GREAT BIG "GREAT JOB, TESS!" Loved, loved, LOVED this short story!!!