This was a really good story! I liked how you used words like "serene" and "leaped". It gives the story a whole new feeling. I liked the plot and idea, especially how it came from your own cat and you! Keep writing and I would love to read more from you.
This is a great poem. It has a great feeling to it and awesome describing words. I don't think there's any advice to give-it's already fantastic! I love the rhyming and words in it. If I had to give advice, I'd say keep up the good work! I like short poems like this. Good job!
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