| What great detail! This is good and yet it left me wanting. Not in the way of more to read,but just a feeling of well,wanting.
I do not know what is missing, I reread it twice to try and figure WHAT?
Do not take this in the wrong way because what I am trying to find, whatever is lacking, not there, missing,...Is not a bad thing it is a GOOD thing, It sings to me and yet I do not recognize the song. I could eat it and my mind would be saying what is missing from this meal? All in All a very good short read.
I Enjoyed it and as always Write On and Blessed Be.