A review for the "Invalid Item"
This is a brilliant story. You have so much crammed into a short space.
I would love to read an expanded version of this tale, what happens afterwards? What happened before hand? The characters being contacted about the death of their aunt... and so on. Thing is, it doesn't need it all. It just works the way it is.
The story itself is fantastic. Jewellery, death, murder, possession... you got it all in here.
This was a definate worthy winner of the slice, a thoroughly enjoyable story from start to finish.
Thank you for the pleasure!!
Proud member of "Invalid Item" and "The Central Bank"
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