So I take it that you are upset that GW cannot run for a third term? (joke)
You might want to consider shortening the title of the poem from “2008 Middle East Spelling Bee Final Words QUAGMIRE & IMPEACHMENT” to just “QUAGMIRE & IMPEACHMENT.” The preceding “2008 Middle East Spelling Bee Final Words” can be seen as cheapening the title and your poem.
There are many factual errors within your poem. Plus, there seems to be open contradictions within your poem and makes your message within your poem even more confusing. The substitution of “$” for “s” makes it difficult to read and I feel is better suited for a piece of art based on visual creativity rather than what many believe a poem is supposed to be, a written and spoken piece of creativity. The “artwork” at the end, I feel detracts attention from the poem. Your poem makes numerous implications, but does not follow up on making the connection. It seems that you purposefully worded many lines very difficultly, for the purpose I can only guess; to recreate an illustrated quagmire within your poem in which could be possibly seen as a microcosm for the “great quagmire” that you imply.
The line, “"Waterboarding works. Don't call it torture. You're just chums!"
I would guess that what you wanted to say here was “You’re just chumps!” Chumps another word for loser and not chums, a slang word for friend.