I am amazed that you have basically turned your life into a poem. This particular one did not flow like others. Yet it was good. Sleep well when sleep finally finds you. Summer
Delicately done. Beautifully relayed. As a thought to aging....I don't think about it much. If I think on it, then I will realize where I am in this life. Nearing the end, or a new beginning. Which? I can not look back, and I do not look forward. I only live in NOW. My age is a physical, my spirit is timeless. Thank you for allowing me to view this and add some thoughts that have been brought to the forefront of my mind through your writings. Summer
Wow!!! More than a 'morsel' to chew on here. You have indeed brought to light some things that need be brought forward, as many are brainwashed and turn a blind eye to the role America plays in the world.
You stated: "it is the avowed aim of both Islam and Christianity to convert the non-believers to believers. Thus, there is basic enmity between Islam and Christianity, each trying to spread itself all over the world."
I couldn't have worded this better. Right on! With this, and all that you place before the viewer, in my opinion.
What I don't agree with, if I may say so respectfully is below:
You stated: "The responsibility for this is more upon the West, especially the US, for the following reasons: ONE, the West, including US, is more advanced and modern and ought to take the lead; "
I don't believe this is true of the so called "United" States. It would like for the rest of the world, as well as its own people to believe this, but I don't believe it is so. They are not more advanced, in fact, I believe they are behind in many things, and they are not as modern as a lot of other countries in this world. This is just my opinion through my observation here. I remember watching a documentary of Pearl Harbor a long while back now. President Roosevelt knew that we were not in any way financially able to support a war, nor did we have the capabilities that other countries 'thought' we were. It was just a smoke screen, as it is now. But again, this is just my opinion. Thank you for allowing me to share some thoughts here to yours. Enjoy your moments in peace. Summer
You have magically carried out what many people can not. You have relayed this through the opposite genders eyes. Bravo!!! Is it through pure imagination that you have created this, or was it through the experience of another as told through you? Thank you for sharing what you have before me. I am grateful to you. SummerLyn
I found this to make me laugh and smile. It is interesting how you categorize email. Almost like 'friendship'. That can be categorized as well. In my mind, it is. Very well thought out. I like these thoughts shared. You have a clear mind. Thank you for allowing me into your world here. Summer
Question: What is a 'fact'? How do we know it's a fact? Because a book shows it is so? A book that is written by man? Is it true? Is it false? Perhaps neither or both? As a thought, there have been facts presented through time that have come to change because someone has found otherwise. A bit of 'food for thought.'
I did not find any visible flaws...no misspellings. The flow was good. SummerLyn
Amusing, yet thought provoking. Two questions you raised, I have often asked myself...
"Why show light to those who so love the dark?
Why spread knowledge where ignorance is bliss?"
Why? Thank you for allowing me to view these. I am so enjoying my moments reading them and pondering. For me, this is a gift. Summer
Excellent! And I am sure you are 'a friend to all'. I see compassion in you. I see this through your writings. Thank you again for allowing me to view them. Wishing you to enjoy your moments. SummerLyn
Beautifully written. It is difficult for me to help with grammar only because I have been away from the English language for quite a few years and speak a second language, Lakota Sioux. Yet, my first thought, as I was reading the first line:
When I go for morning walk<<You wrote
should there be added...
When I go for <my> morning walk
or
When I go for <a> morning walk
? You tell me...
Enjoy your moments given~ Summer
This one is outstanding work!!! It flowed so well and such power in the words relayed to tell a 'truth'. You have made your mark with regard to your message. What more can be said! You are a 'Master' in my eyes. I appreciate you. Thank you for allowing me to view it and give it the proper rating. I can't see how this can be anything but the highest rating. SummerLyn
Lovely and although with such few words, you have managed to express yourself so well. Thank you for sharing what you do. I am enjoying my moments. SummerLyn
I couldn't have relayed this better! Excellent job here and well spoken from the heart. Thank you for allowing me to view this and give it a proper review. SummerLyn
I knew this one would be excellent. The title speaks volumes!!!! Again, you have tremendous talent. I hope you will publish these, if you have not already. Summer
Again, I don't believe this flowed as well as the others. It spoke volumes with its content, however. I do believe I would like to try my hand at sonnet someday. You will have to be my mentor, for I see tremendous talent there.
First, I must conquer writing short stories and such. Thank you for allowing me to review these. Enjoy your moments. Summer
Brilliant!!! I love your writings!!! I appreciate how you have also including an explanation of who Bertrand was. As a thought to what you have written here...all countries are guilty, yet they point a finger out. Each one need look and see that when you point that finger out, there are three fingers pointing back at 'self'. In this case, their own country. This is only my thought. America is guilty as well. I don't believe any would be exempt. Thank you for placing this out here for my view. I am enjoying these immensely. SummerLyn
Excellent work here, in my opinion. This most certainly is 'food for thought.' I love to read philosophical thought. Again, you have a gift. I can see you becoming better than Deepak Chopra. I say that with respect, as he is a man of wisdom, in my opinion. Enjoy your moments in peace. SummerLyn
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