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Review of Poetry  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your port on the whole is quite organized. I have been reading through your various poems and have been enjoying them. Thank you for sharing what you do here. SummerLyn
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Review of ENGLISH GHAZALS  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have just finished reading all this for the fourth time and perhaps will read again. It is very informative and clear to the student on instruction. Thank you for sharing your knowledge with those who are wishing to learn. SummerLyn
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Review of Awakening  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Quite a lovely poem, as it flowed very well.

Though we
-Lady-
Have not met
I imagine…


This excerpt, as well as the ending leaves the reader to wonder if this could be his biological mother and opens other questions and imaginings.

Thank you for placing it out here for all to view. I enjoyed it very much. SummerLyn
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Review of Love  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Charlie~
I thought to stop in and have a look at your portfolio. My eye caught this story here that you share and found it filled with much 'truth'.
I particularly like what you say in the end, because it holds the entire message here.

I hope we dedicate ourselves to realizing that loving each other means more than making excuses for each other. It means humbling ourselves to God’s will and forgiving each other. It means most of all that we should treat others, as we want to be treated.


If I can suggest double spacing between the title and the content itself, as well as perhaps placing the title in bold, that would be an added touch.

Carry on in your writings. I feel you have something here. SummerLyn
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Review of BITS AND PIECES  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good morning! I just want to say that your port is very well placed together. I am enjoying the images that you have here. Some very beautiful! Enjoy your moments given~ SummerLyn
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
"For, the enemy is not idle, and though stripped
Of his greatest power, he is not powerless."

Beautifully written. Holds truths within. Thank you for allowing me to view it. I enjoy your work here at your port. SummerLyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am so glad you did a write up on this because I always wondered if it were appropriate. I do, because I feel everyone makes mistakes and there isn't anyone's writing that is perfect. Thank you for placing it here and allowing me to take this poll. Very interesting. SummerLyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
'Spirit'~ I come back time and time again to learn this method. It is very informative and with practice, perhaps I have a chance at becoming "fair" enough to enter one of your contests. <smile>

Respectfully this night, I wish to bring to your attention an 'error'(if I may) in the following paragraph:

"5-- TEN TIPS ON HOW TO WRITE A GHAZAL—

Various practical tips are explained with reference to "MEMORIES--a ghazal", "MEMORIES--a ghazal" , which is a typical ghazal having a rhyme and a refrain, with nine couplets (an unusually large number. The minimum number is five and that is often deemed sufficient. What is more importantin a ghazal is quality, not quantity.
This ghazal is reproduced below:"

You will notice that *important and *in need to be separated.

Wishing you peace in your moments given. ~Summer
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"Lord, grant me this, I pray at Your altar:
For knowledge, I may not wisdom barter. "


Beautifully relayed. Thank you again 'Spirit'. Summerlyn
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Review of MEDITATION  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful work here!
<<Empty vastness, just nothing,
A big vacuum all around;
Silence total, yet, serene,
But for occasional sound>>

<<Empty mind, fully alert,
Free of all the surrounding;
Oblivious of the world,
Full of spirit unbounding;>>

My one question/or thought(forgive my ignorance)...the word 'unbounding'...is it a word?!
Thank you for sharing your gift. SummerLyn
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Review of MY WINNING ITEMS  
Rated: E | (5.0)
So well organized! Wonderful and thank you again! SummerLyn
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Review of TIANANMEN  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am so happy to see a tribute to these brave ones who stepped forth to stand before the giant on that day.Great job on this!

My thought~ Don't be afraid to stand up for what you believe in, even if you are the only one standing. Take that stand. Blessings "Spirit"~ SummerLyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. It brought a sad feeling in the ending, because it speaks a truth. Sometimes it is best to step forward and take that chance. Join in the dance of life!
"Come to the edge, I said. I'm afraid, you said. Come to the edge, do you trust me? I said. You took my hand. I pushed you; and you flew!"<smile>

Wishing you peace in your moments given 'Spirit'. SummerLyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This port, I keep coming back to time after time to either see what else I can read, as well as reread some that I have already read.
This port deserves in my view, nothing less than a 5 and if they had more you would rate higher.
Thank you for the gifts you have placed within. Blessings to you my friend. SummerLyn
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Review of Old tin bucket  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Excellent job on this. I hope you do not mind I drop by your port here...I have been reading a few works of yours and they are quite good. I will have to mark this as a favorite and stop back again.
Thank you so much for placing this out here for all to view. SummerLyn
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Review of I MISS YOU MOM  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good day for you, I hope. I happened to run across your blog and thought to visit your port. I have to say that this one brought tears to my eyes.
It is so beautifully written and such a tribute to your mother. I am sorry for your loss. Wishing you peace in your moments. SummerLyn
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Review of When I Seek  
Rated: E | (5.0)
"When I Seek"~ for me, this relays the mirror of your soul. It was beautifully done and so delicate. "Nowhere"~ Beautiful but bittersweet. Wording done very well.
"In Search of the Music"~ We all have a song to sing...Our spirits hold that song. I believe you relayed this well in that, sometimes that song in another is very faint, but it is there.

Thank you for allowing me to view your port. I would love to stop back when I receive more time and view more. Very beautiful work. SummerLyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully done in my opinion. It brings the reader something to ponder. Very descriptive in your words. All in all it is a great piece of work done. I only wish I was good at poetry. I think you have the gift. Thank you for placing it here for all to view. I hope you don't mind, I gave it my review. SummerLyn
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Review of Ferris Wheel Ride  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sweet! You know my ferris wheel image would go nicely here. You are welcome to it, if you'd like it. SummerLyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to this particular one! HA! I do believe it is finally summer! Great job as usual! Ummm...do you write any bad ones?SummerLyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This one sends a melancholy feeling. Although it relays a 'fish' story! <G> 103...that's a lot of fish my friend! Great job...very descriptive to the point that it brings the reader there, almost like in their own memory. This is my thought anyway. SummerLyn
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Review of HAPPY HARVEST  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It hits the heart in the end. I have sat at a mission we have in Rapid City and helped to feed those homeless. There are some who come in and they actually do have a home, a family and a job but they want that free meal.
Great job as usual!
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Review of Gracie  
Rated: E | (5.0)
She is so adorable! And the poem...so sweet! I bet she grew fast!
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Review of SHI BLOGS TOO  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Shishad~ I have so enjoyed visiting your blog...very nice and I love your sigs. Great job! The pictures of where you live came out beautiful. I know you find peace there.
Wishing you to enjoy your moments. Thank you for allowing me to enter. SummerLyn
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Review of Grief's Song!  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Reminds me of a song...beautiful and thank you for placing it out here for all to view. I have enjoyed it. SummerLyn
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