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I have to ask how you got this image within your work here? Enjoyable and now I see where your mind is...You love Louisiana obviously. I am glad your spirit is connected to something or some place, otherwise, it would wander. Summer
Must be a town...I am wondering. Valentine, Nebraska? Where? Sad that in love, we have to experience the heartaches. I wonder why we put ourselves through all of this...is this experience for a reason?! So many facets of love. I'll never understand. Perhaps you...?When something can get my brain wandering and questioning....even thought stirring, it is a good piece. This was excellent. Thank you again~ Summer
HAHAHA! Gee, I am laughing because I know exactly where you are talking about. You know, there is a sugar plantation in Arabic, I believe the town is, near New Orleans there, that I almost got arrested on. I was with a friend of mine. She just started driving a truck and asked me if I wanted to go with her on her first trip out. It was a trip to Louisiana, at this sugar plantation. I brought my trusty camera and didn't think anything of taking pictures. They warned me to erase them, although I still had one I had taken on my camera phone that the guard didn't know about. Very good work here! Thank you for sharing it.
Excellent! I was so into reading this, that I completely forgot to look for any spelling errors that may be there. Are you from Louisiana? Thank you for sharing what you have. I will surely have to share some images taken while I was down there. Wishing you peace~filled moments~SummerLyn
This is beautiful!!!! I don't know why on earth I have not run across this before, but I am grateful for being able to have the time to come across it now. Excellent work here. Thank you for sharing it here. I am happy to give it a proper review. Enjoy your moments ~ SummerLyn
Interesting story you have shared here. I personally believe there are spirits all around us. Oftentimes, they are here to help us. Other times they are wandering souls. They weren't ready to leave this plane for one reason or another. Perhaps this little girl had gotten ill and died young.
Regardless this story, fiction or non-fiction leaves the reader wondering. Wishing you peace in your moments. Summer
This is so very touching, a tribute to your brother. At first, I thought it could have been improved by rhyming better, but then I stepped back and my spirit tells me that this is straight from the heart. Why change a thing. I am glad you have that relationship with your brother. It is refreshing. Thank you for allowing me to view it and give it a proper review. Blessings to you. Summer
I don't know why, but I keep relating this to the Eagles. The words are beautiful. I have only found a few spelling errors. Ex. >>Soon it wil all pass away...
For some reason, (and I am not telling you that you should change it), my spirit keeps telling me that you are speaking in a past in the beginning and then you change to the present. Ex.>>Not so long ago you had tears in your eyes.
What were you gonna do?
You know I'll see you through.<<
This is as I am seeing it. Only from my view. Thank you for taking notice of my image of the 'rez road', you have in turn gifted me by leading me to your port. Pilamaya(thank you) SummerLyn
Welcoming and very peaceful! This is what I receive from this image taken. You did well here, in my opinion. I love the coloring and the feeling this image brings to the viewer (in this case, me). I don't know what camera you used, but it did well. I sometimes think it really doesn't matter what sort of camera a person uses, if they have good vision and imagination. Thank you for allowing me to view this and give it a proper review. Summer
Is this a 'mustang 2'? Beautiful picture of it..."Attitude of the week" works. I like it. Thank you for sharing it here, and allowing me to review it. SummerLyn
Beautiful!!! I like the poem you set with the image here. It is very fitting, in my opinion. Thank you for placing it here for my review. I really enjoy photography. BTW...I believe you are from Houston, if I have recalled this right?! Enjoy your moments! SummerLyn
Beautiful image here...The color is beautiful and vibrant! I like that. There are some images, whereby you don't see the true color, but more so a faded look. For me personally, I don't care for that. I love color. You did a great job on this. Thank you for placing it here for my review. SummerLyn
You manage to place yourself in anyone's position. This is great. Question: Are you going to change this? <joking> You do very well with these. I thank you again for your gift. Summer
There is a typo in this....3rd paragraph: you wrote>I hear the painin her voice....
it should read>> I hear the pain in her voice....
A lot you have been through. I pray for easier days for you and your family. Never look back. Only look forward. There is only now. SummerLyn
Profound! If this is about you, then let it serve, not only as a reminder for you, but other women. There is no honor, nor respect when you allow another to harm you in any way. A man is not a true man when they violate a woman in any way. Thank you for allowing me to read this. Beautifully done! Summerlyn
She looks kind hearted! If this image was clearer, it would be excellent. It is her in a natural state. Off guard obviously and isn't that the best?! I like it best when people do not pose but the picture is natural like this one. Beautiful and thank you so very much for allowing me to view it and give you a review. SummerLyn
I must say in reading on "What is a Ghazal", they seem complicated, but with practice I believe I can do this type of work. I had to change my original rating of this, because I do not believe I understood it the first time in reading this Ghazal. I now believe I understand better. Thank you for teaching me something here in your port. I am receiving so much from just being here. I can't thank you enough. Summer
Something did not flow with this as others. However, I now know what a Ghazal is(thanks to you), and I now am interested in trying my hand at writing these. So I {{{{{{{{Thank you}}}}}}}}}}} SummerLyn
I wish they had a 10 for a score, but well, if 5 is all I can give you...This truly deserves more. It was well thought out . I didn't notice any flaws. Spelling seemed good. And now...I hope you are happy because I am at your port every day like a groupie! <laughing> Wishing you a wonderful evening spent. SummerLyn
Very cute!!! You can hardly see this little one. So tiny it is!!!Thank you for sharing it here. I enjoy looking at photographs. Especially original ones. If you don't mind me asking...what camera did you use? Any special lense or was it just a straight shot?SummerLyn
I got what you were trying to get across, but I feel the flow could have been better. This is only my opinion. I believe you have talent and with more practice, like with many of us, it will prove worthwhile. I usually like short stories and such, but find myself always looking at poetry and such. Perhaps it is telling me something here. Wishing you a wonderful journey throug life. SummerLyn
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