Good evening! I thought I would just come on by for a short little visit and as I came on in I found your clever, unique, and creative poem that you call "My Heart Sinks When I Behold" Your title and your description both drew me in. You do have a way with words as you weave your web of words so clearly that your readers not only feel but also see what you are saying. And I also like the information that you put at the bottom for all your readers to see as well. I do have to say that you caught my attention right from the start. Nice job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
Good evening! I just thought I would come by for a short little visit and as I did I came across your clever and creative poem that you call "Mount Vesuvius". I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end and I like the feel of the poem as well. You really sure do have a way with words as you paint a picture as you spin your web of words for me to really clearly see and also feel. In your third paragraph at the end where it says "all that I could only see in my dreams" may look better if you put that down to finish off that third paragraph, I know it would look better too.
Good evening! I thought I would just come on by for a little short visit and as I did I came across your creative, unique, and clever poem you call "Our Journey's End." And I also like your description and they both drew me in. I loved the way it made me feel as you paint a very clear picture for me to see as you spin your web of words ever drawing me in. I absolutely love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and I love how it all fits together as well. I would have to say that the last two paragraphs of your poem are my most favorite not to take away any other part of your poem and how fitting for you to end with "His Amazing Grace!"
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
Good evening! I thought I would come by for a short little visit and as I did I found your unique, clever, and creative poem that you call "Judgemental Eyes." And my first impression was WOW! I can feel your pain and people are so cruel! I love the way the poem does flow and oh how it makes me feel. You really do have a way with words as you spin your words so real painting a picture that I can clearly see and feel. I really like this poem from the very beginning to the very end. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!
Good evening! I thought I would come by for a short little visit as and as I did I found your unique, creative, and clever poem you call "Blind date" As I came on in I found that you really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words even painting a picture that I could clearly see and I have to have I really enjoyed your poem from beginning to the very in and it all fits as it is and I could not possibly pick one line for my favorite. I am assuming this was written for a contest per your note at the end. God is good! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
Good evening! I thought I would go on by for a little short visit and as I di I found this creative, unique, and a one of a kind poem that you call "Time For Change - In changing Time..." My first impression is yes! I really enjoyed this poem from the very beginning to the very end. You sure do have a way with words as you weave your web so well as you even draw me in and you have left me wanting me wanting more! I can feel this poem as if you have you pour out your heart and soul into it! Great job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star rating for sure!
Good afternoon! I thoght I would come on by for a short little visit as I did I came about this piece that you call "It's Classified".
I will have to say that I was drawn in by your title and also your description ~ "Hand It Over". And as I begin to read your short story you had me from the start as you weave your webs ever so cleverly, uniquely and so creatively by your words. You completely lured me in as I continued to read. I fully enjoyed this little story and the line I love the most is:
What is your name? I'm sorry sir that is classified information! And also when George went around the desk and pulled a plug to which the robot fell over on the desk and the next word George says is: now give me that file! I love it!
You are full of talent and you know how to lure your readers in and you let me wanting more please tell me there is more! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!
Good afternoon! I thought I would just stop on by for a short little visit with you today and as I did I found this piece that you call:
"Poor Tom" as I began to read I like the feel and the tone of this poem and I love the rhythm and rhyme that unfolds as a story unfolds in this cleverly, unique, creative poem. I really enjoyed this poem from the very beginning to the very end and most of all you left me wanting more! I did not see any errors at all. And I love that you posted a note for more information for your readers to know.
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!
Good afternoon! I thought I would come by for a little while and visit with you and as I came on in I found this that you call "Forever Falling" I was into this dark emotional heartfelt part that really had me feeling some kind of way while emotions soared as you really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words so cleverly and most creatively as you leave me wanting more and more! There must be more to this poem and I can clearly see it as you do paint this very clear picture for me to see. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!
Good evening! I thought I would come on in for a little short visit and I am so glad that I did for I came upon your poem you call "Coffee Spuddle"
My first impression was flat out laughing out loud this was so funny I could not stop! I love love love this poem you have so cleverly and uniquely spun your web of words to make a poem like a story that unfolds and you really do have a way with words as you know just how to draw your readers in and best of all you left laughing and wanting even more!
Good evening! I thought I would come by for a little short visit and as I did I came across your poem "19 Hearts" This title along with your description is what drew me to your poem.
My first in impression was wow! this poem is from the heart of one who feels so deeply I really love your poem as you created it out of your heart. I really enjoyed your poem and you made some good points in your poem as well. 19 hearts will beat no more this line really stuck out to me.
Good evening! I thought I would come by for just a short little visit and as I did I found your poem you call: "Break". I really enjoyed the poem that you have cleverly created as you spin your web of words as you drew me in and you also left me wanting more! You make a good point on what makes summer broken. I really enjoyed your whole poem and I would have to say that the very first line is what stood out to me the most. "You can't call a break something that is not broken." There is just something about that line. I like it!
I also like that you posted at the bottom of your page the prompt information. Good job. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
Good evening! I thought I would come in for a little short visit and as I did I found this cute little poem that you wrote for one of your friends. I love the title and the description as they both drew me in. I love the style of this poem and the way it rhymes in rhythm and I must admit it made you did make me chuckle a time or time. Yes, I can hear the little boy bang on his drum making a lot of noise and I can see his mom and dad with plugs in their ears as well as you have cleverly weaved your web of words painting a picture for me to clearly see. I also like that you put a little note at the bottom of your poem giving more information on your friend and now two boys.
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
Good evening I thought I would stop by for a little short visit and as I did I came across your poem your call: "I Love To Walk With Grandpa" Your title along with your description "A child's memory of days with grandpa" is what drew me in.
And with your first paragraph, I was completely in. You sure do have a way with words as you paint a clear picture for me to see and not just hear as you spin your web of words so cleverly and creatively.
I really enjoyed your poem and I liked the way it made me feel.
Good morning! I just thought I would come on by for a short little visit and I came across your blog folder and had to look inside and I chose to come on in your "The Daily Journey In The Life Of A Writer" Love the title! I looked over your entries and I love how you put videos and all of that in them which makes me feel like I am welcome. I also see you write or have written here for blog city and that is a wonderful group to be in. I especially love this entry: "Novel Factory's Ultimate Character Questionaire" and could really use a copy of it! You are very creative and very organized. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
Good morning! I thought I would swing by for a short little visit and as I did I came across your poem that you call: "And Nobody Objected" My first impression: Yes! So true! Bush did a disservice to America and um he was again a republican! They seem to always do what is wrong instead of what is right! Falsehood indeed. You really do have a way with words as your spin your web most cleverly as you weave in the truth so creatively! You even left me wanting more and I certainly do love that! Great Job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing! A five-star for sure!
Good morning! I thought I would come by for a little while and as I did I found your story you call: "A Rainy Night" And I found a story that unfolded really clever, creative, adventure, and my favorite rain! You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words so precisely that you left me wanting more and I was so drawn into your story and I could see a picture so clearly in my head as your painted this story so well! Keep right on sharing and most of all keep writing!
Good afternoon! I thought I would come by for a little bit and I found your poem "Offspring"
My first impression: WOW!
As I came on in I have to have it had me right from the start! As you certainly do have a way with words as you really do paint a very clear picture for me to see and I like how this poem really makes me feel I would have to say that this part is what really stood out the most: the woman veiled in black. How she resembles me, floating beneath the weight of water. But I really do love the full poem in full as it perfectly fits together! Keep sharing and keep writing! A five-star rating for sure!
Good afternoon! I thought I would come on by for a little short visit and I found your poem: "Toys For Poor Kids" as I come on in I found an interesting, clever, unique, creative, and truthful poem as it is like a little story that also unfolds as you have clever spun your web of words drawing this reading in as you paint a very clear picture that I can see for sure as you really do have a way with words! I do have to say that I enjoyed each and every line and I could not possibly pick just one line as a favorite for all fits perfectly together. Keep sharing and most of all Keep writing!
Hello there! I thought I would come to visit for a while and I found your wonderful poem "The Almighty Jesus: The Blessed Truth." My first impression:
Amen! What a wonderful honest creative, rhyming, unique special poem you have here indeed I have really enjoyed this wonderful poem from the very beginning to the very end, I could not pick just one part as my favorite for it all fits very well all together! You do have a way with words and I love how this poem makes me feel. Keep sharing and keep writing! A five-star for sure!
Good afternoon! I thought I would come by for a little short visit and I came across your poem: "A Grand Master - A Special Guy
And as I came on in I found a very creative poem, I also like the feel of this poem and the way it makes me feel and I love the way it rhymes as it dances across the page and paints a picture for me to clearly see. I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end and I do not see any errors. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
Good afternoon I thought I would come in for a little visit and I choose to read this fine title you call: "God's Children: Hope and Strength and my first reaction:
Wow! This is a really good rhythm and a rhyming poem that you have here I love the way that it flows and the way it makes me feel! You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words drawing your readers in and I have to say that you left me wanting even more.
I honestly enjoyed this poem from the beginning to the very end! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
Good morning! I thought I would come by for a short little visit and as I did I decided to come into your poem titled: "Writing In The Rains." Which did draw me in and I have to say that you really do have a way with words as you have drawn me in so cleverly with your creative and clever poem.
I really enjoyed your whole poem but I would have to that this line stuck out to me the most:
As the rains pour, my heart and soul dance
Because in the rains comes yet another chance.
There is something about this line that moves me and I love it when something like this poem can make me feel and even better when a line in a poem stands out to me and makes me feel some kind of way!
I do have to say that I also really like the very last line of this poem too:
The memories of romance that enpower the dove. What a great line but I wonder should the word enpower be the word empower? It does not take away from your poem but I was just wondering is all.
Good morning! I thought I would come by for a little short visit and I found your "Sanguine Tenacious Tidings" A Journal to impart knowledge and facts and I like to have knowledge and facts.
I love the image that you use for your Journal and I also like the images, signatures, and badges that you have placed throughout your entries as well as someone good information for everyone to enjoy! By the way, I really do love that owl signature you have.
You really do have a way with words as you spin your web of webs and pull your readers in as you do have a way with words. I also like the look and feel of your page as it makes me feel invited and welcomed and who doesn't like to feel that way?
Looks like this journal has been going on for some time which is really good and I love that because I can keep coming back and reading more and more new and old.
I have an "Sunny's Corner" and I would love to place your journal in my journal/blogs section if that is alright with you.
Good morning! I thought that I would come by for a little short visit and as I came on in I found your cute little sweet, short but to the point poem "June." I think you summed up the month of June quite nicely. You really do have a way with words as you spin your web of words painting a picture for your readers. Clear and percised. Nice job! Keep sharing and most of all Keep writing!
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