I remember this story now. Back when I was into the whole weight gain fetish thing, I used to read this whenever I could. Wasn't into male gaining since fattening up women was far better was more up my alley at the time. Though I will probably not read this as much as I did, I hope you continue on your work.
Here's a poem I can get into. A simple love poem. A drunken night does seemingly turn things around. I suppose that's what you meant by love is like a hurricane when one goes from hating to thinking that the love of their life is now an angel. Very well done, Hank.
I just wounded up here by random, so I feel like I'm missing a good chunk of information here. Though I will say that I do like your writing, and your style. I'll have to go back through your previous work before getting to know this setting better. I like Constance by the way.
A fascinating story right here, but I would like to know more. When I read "bitter winter wind" my mind drifted to the soviet gulags. Is this Nash breaking out of a similar prison? Was he wrongly jailed by tyrants? I must know more my friend. And I loved how Nash's old friend helped.
It's short but I can dig it, spidey. Tell me what kind of music would be the best to listen to while reading this in your opinion. It seems like old school punk to me. The line of "Rhythmic blasts invade the atmosphere," is my favorite line kudos to you.
Never thought I'd see something dismissing islamic terrorism on this website. This was a rather pleasant surprise if you ask me. Very well done, my friend. In the arab world they don't generally have a lot of prospects in their perspective because so they try to emulate the first muslims.
This right here. This right here is perfect. Thank you for writing this. I imagine that there is a good portion of adults that don't think negatively about young people, and that might just be a stereotypical assumption about adults.
This catches my interest significantly. A good fantasy story is always a welcomed thing to me. Keep up the great work. I give four stars due to me wanting to see the complete product before I say my final opinion, but I think I will like this.
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