Short, but, well done. Never heard of bit of honey before. My fiance does like flowers, but, she also likes being taken out to lunch or dinner, but, flowers are still nice.
Well done. Have heard about that day, and I know the song American Pie was inspired by it, which is how I first heard about it, actually. I was born in a later time after it happened, but, can imagine the tragedy many fans and fellow musicians had in reaction.
You have my attention. Very intresting interactive suggestion. Will add as much as I can to it, when I'm inspired to do so. Excellent set of rules as well, rules I'll keep in mind when making additions.
A very interesting concept you've got here. Will add to as many of the path options as I can, as I'm sure many of the suggestions will be inspired by video games, or other media I'm familiar with.
Great idea, with a nice set of rules, too. If any of my chapters will be one-sentence, it's mainly due to me adding possible path ideas that I think might work. Hope you don't mind that.
An interesting concept. Will see if I can come up with possible additions for it, if at all. Even if I can't, I wish best of luck to those who do add to it.
Not a bad concept, though I've only seen the film that inspired this story a few times, so can't recall it much, and expanding characters isn't for me. Still, I'm sure you'll find people it can appeal to.
I do love age regression stories. I can understand you wanting to stop regressing at 5, as being younger than that isn't for everyone, a rule I'm willing to respect. May have some idaes for additions for this one already, if I can think of how to write them, givng Clair, was it, a boyfriend, maybe, if you wish. Will see if any of your other interactives catch my interest, if I can think of anything for them, that is.
Not a bad concept, though am curious if shrinking counts as a transformation, or growth. If those don't count, I understand, and will try to add what I can to this. Rules make sense here, as there are some things that aren't for you, and I'll respect that.
Interesting concept here, though the show is one I'm not very familiar with. Still, an interesting idea. No set of rules though. Even if I can't think of additions for it, hope it's added onto.
A good concept, despite the fact that said anime is one I'm completely unfamiliar with, and I tend to get extremely stuck when it comes to those sorts of stories. Still, I hope good efforts goes into the paths that are created.
Am sorry to hear you went through something like that. Well done poem, even if I'm not all that familiar with forms of poetry. Regardless, a strong effort to explain your feelings at that time.
A good concept, though I'm not familiar with all the Street Fighter characters, and have tried adding to weight gain stories with little luck. Still, I wish good luck to all who add to it, even if weight gain interactives don't catch my interest.
An interesting concept, if farting fetish, if that's what this is, interested me. Sorry to say that it doesn't. Nothing personal, but fart torture and so on isn't for everyone.
An excellent critic of Trump, and I agree with much of it. It's quite clear to me that he cares only about one person, himself, and no one else. Billionaire he may be, but, questions have been asked on how he got much of that money, I'm sure.
Besides gender changes, what other transformations are allowed, and, any particular shows and such that aren't allowed? Plan to add onto it, but, would like some things cleared up before I do, if you don't mind.
Fan of regression stories, though I'm more familiar with physical regression ideas. Very interesting original characters here. Will add as much as I can to them. If you feel you ahve to edit my chapters, do let me know. A nice set of rules, though not sure if I'd be a fan of unbirthing, whatever that means.
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