*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/supreme123/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/1
Review Requests: ON
1,032 Public Reviews Given
1,032 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... -1- 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ... Next
1
1
Review of Bit O Honey  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Short, but, well done. Never heard of bit of honey before. My fiance does like flowers, but, she also likes being taken out to lunch or dinner, but, flowers are still nice.
2
2
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
I haven't had this issue you're describing. You may be typing very hard, perhaps. Not able to see, but, can feel my keys are in perfect condition.
3
3
Review of Odin (All-Father)  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done, though I'm more familiar with Greek mythology. Still, a great effort on your part.
4
4
Review of Too Soon  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well done. Have heard about that day, and I know the song American Pie was inspired by it, which is how I first heard about it, actually. I was born in a later time after it happened, but, can imagine the tragedy many fans and fellow musicians had in reaction.
5
5
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You have my attention. Very intresting interactive suggestion. Will add as much as I can to it, when I'm inspired to do so. Excellent set of rules as well, rules I'll keep in mind when making additions.
6
6
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Enjoy the concept. Will add to as many universes as I can, with the help of other users, I'm sure. Fine set of rules as well.
7
7
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very interesting concept you've got here. Will add to as many of the path options as I can, as I'm sure many of the suggestions will be inspired by video games, or other media I'm familiar with.
8
8
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great idea, with a nice set of rules, too. If any of my chapters will be one-sentence, it's mainly due to me adding possible path ideas that I think might work. Hope you don't mind that.
9
9
Review of The Babysitter  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An interesting concept. Will see if I can come up with possible additions for it, if at all. Even if I can't, I wish best of luck to those who do add to it.
10
10
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Not a bad concept, though I've only seen the film that inspired this story a few times, so can't recall it much, and expanding characters isn't for me. Still, I'm sure you'll find people it can appeal to.
11
11
Review of Young Again  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I do love age regression stories. I can understand you wanting to stop regressing at 5, as being younger than that isn't for everyone, a rule I'm willing to respect. May have some idaes for additions for this one already, if I can think of how to write them, givng Clair, was it, a boyfriend, maybe, if you wish. Will see if any of your other interactives catch my interest, if I can think of anything for them, that is.
12
12
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
An excellent poem, and a fine tribute to your late mother, I'm sure. Well-written, though poetry is something I'm not all familiar with.
13
13
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Not a bad concept, though am curious if shrinking counts as a transformation, or growth. If those don't count, I understand, and will try to add what I can to this. Rules make sense here, as there are some things that aren't for you, and I'll respect that.
14
14
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
An interesting concept. Am growing quite familiar with Total Drama, so, will add to this when path ideas come to me.
15
15
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very cool concept here, with rules that make sense. Will add to as many path suggestions as I can.
16
16
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting concept here, though the show is one I'm not very familiar with. Still, an interesting idea. No set of rules though. Even if I can't think of additions for it, hope it's added onto.
17
17
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good concept, despite the fact that said anime is one I'm completely unfamiliar with, and I tend to get extremely stuck when it comes to those sorts of stories. Still, I hope good efforts goes into the paths that are created.
18
18
Review of Scars OF Soul  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Am sorry to hear you went through something like that. Well done poem, even if I'm not all that familiar with forms of poetry. Regardless, a strong effort to explain your feelings at that time.
19
19
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very welldone story, the writing in particular. Great characters as well.
20
20
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A good concept, though I'm not familiar with all the Street Fighter characters, and have tried adding to weight gain stories with little luck. Still, I wish good luck to all who add to it, even if weight gain interactives don't catch my interest.
21
21
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting concept, if farting fetish, if that's what this is, interested me. Sorry to say that it doesn't. Nothing personal, but fart torture and so on isn't for everyone.
22
22
Review of Forty-Five  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An excellent critic of Trump, and I agree with much of it. It's quite clear to me that he cares only about one person, himself, and no one else. Billionaire he may be, but, questions have been asked on how he got much of that money, I'm sure.
23
23
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great idea combining Rugrats with Toddlerhood, wwhich, I'm sure was inspired by Rugrats in several ways. Will add to this when I can.
24
24
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Besides gender changes, what other transformations are allowed, and, any particular shows and such that aren't allowed? Plan to add onto it, but, would like some things cleared up before I do, if you don't mind.
25
25
Review of Regressive ways  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Fan of regression stories, though I'm more familiar with physical regression ideas. Very interesting original characters here. Will add as much as I can to them. If you feel you ahve to edit my chapters, do let me know. A nice set of rules, though not sure if I'd be a fan of unbirthing, whatever that means.
605 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 25 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/supreme123/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/1