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Review of Yellow Umbrella  
Review by SurfingHalfOrc
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice little tale! Is this based on an actual event?

Web posts tend to be hard to read. Try breaking up the "wall o' text" by putting a gap between paragraphs.
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