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Review of Amid the Corn  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this.
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Review of Complex Numbers  
for entry "Relax
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this. As I get closer to retirement, your perspective is encouraging. I can relate to the "outsider" perspective also.
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Review of Patterns  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story.

It felt plot driven (with an internal drama) with pace that gradually picked up at first, but seemed to move faster from the point that Katherine thought she might be in a dream. As the story developed, it felt like the character development piece of this story was mostly in the surprise ending.

I think this story possesses the literary quality that's supposed to be unique to flash fiction--that this story hints at a larger story.


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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really like this poem. Captures our cultural climate to a tee.

As a reader, the last line is the only one that didn't work for me...I found myself mentally playing with ways to turn the line into a statement--such as: "Americans starve for acceptance" or "Why Americans starve for acceptance"

The way you have it may communicate exactly what you want to communicate; just sharing my musings...This is definitely a poem that both entertains and makes the reader ponder...


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Review of The Dove  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice....Thanks for completing the February challenge!
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Review of Jewelry  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks so much for sharing your poems...
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Review of Ampitheater  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Fire-pit  
Review by SusanFarmer
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Ice  
Review by SusanFarmer
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Flight  
Review by SusanFarmer
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Siblings  
Review by SusanFarmer
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nice...
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Review of Thanksgiving  
Review by SusanFarmer
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Autumn  
Review by SusanFarmer
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the first two lines paint a vivid word picture with the last line pulling the poem into focus...
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Review of Wisdom  
Review by SusanFarmer
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Blizzard  
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thanks for writing....
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Review of Growth  
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very nice....
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Arctic reminder  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing...
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for writing....
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for writing...
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Review of Alone -revised  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for writing...
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Review of I'm Lost  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for sharing
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Review of KISSES  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for sharing
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Review of MY GRANDSONS  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for sharing
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