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Rated: GC | (4.0)
I think you improved this piece greatly. For one thing, the color scheme is Oktoberfest now (not Beach Bingo), and the images combine with colors to identify the topic quickly. It also now feels like a party, and I love that they encouraged people to dress thematically (although I suspect it's a ploy to get more ladies in peasant tops). It also sounds like they turned it into a beer tasting, not your typical beer- and German food-fest, but offering something unique. I like it.
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