To be or not to be a poet. I think I would much rather be a poet and a digital artist. It what I was born for. One should not deny the soul it's gratification in the arts. Once you find your niche you should follow your dream to the beyond. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. It was a pleasure to peruse.
An excellent poem of changes and how they affect all of us. Anna's view of her grandmother is a priceless addition to the tale of changing seasons and changing people. A very nicely penned poem of nature and people. I detected no errors and keep sharing.
What a beautifully worded poem ! I loved the way you placed the reader right beside you with such wonderful visuals. I could smell the salt air and feel a ship swaying in the high seas. Very nicely penned work my friend. Sa usual the quality is top notch. No errors and keep sharing.
Yes, I remember the fifties real well as I was born in fifty one. I remember the day the music died. I still like some of the old Buddy Holly songs like Peggy Sue and etc. Your wonderful words brought all those songs back and the TV shows. I saw no errors and please keep sharing.
A very nice trip through the wild flowers in this wonderfully written acrostic nature poem. It is a pleasure to read this culinary delight for the eyes. Everything from clover to foxgloves decorate every corner of this delightful poem. I have detected zero errors. Keep sharing my friend.
Don't even try the last line. I've been at it for forty years and haven't figured her out yet. I would be the world's champion at puzzles if I could. The cube is good practice though. A very well penned humorous poem about Rubik's Cube my friend. I detected no errors. Keep sharing.
An excellent word to base a poetic fantasy on starting in both the beginning and the ending with oneirataxia. A perfect opening and closing and an explanation in line sixteen. I think there are plenty of people in the world suffering from this very strange affliction. Thanks for sharing.
A well written wedding day poem of love. This would make excellent vows in a marriage ceremony. I think Kelly and Mike are very lucky to have someone like you writing this poem for them. Well anyway they have a great start. Keep on writing and sharing these wonderful works.
Yes, I agree and the answer is still the same all these years later. Turn the channel or click yourself out of there. It is everyone's choice to not listen to lies and bullies or any other nonproductive garbage. The world can be a better place if we all make an effort to improve. Your poem was a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.
The turtle may be slow but they always seem to get where they're going and so will you. This is a brilliantly penned poem. You keep walking as long as you can and good luck fending off the wheelchair blues. Well done my friend, keep writing and sharing.
It could be the best poem every written. Who would be the judge of that and what are their qualifications? As long as the earth still orbits the sun and you keep penning wonderful poems the world will be alright and so will we. Thanks for sharing the best and the worst.
I loved your poem and your billing it as your second home is perfect. I told them when I found this place thirteen years ago that I had found, "A place to hang my hat." I meant it then and I still do. It is my place to create and like you, I have much to create. Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem.
Not bad at all when you get the chorus down and the bridges in it will make a good song. I have written a few myself and have two recorded with a collaborator friend out of Boston. Very nicely put together my friend. Good luck and keep sharing your work.
I have been there and done that many times when vacationing in South Florida. When the sun sets over the gulf and the tropics caress you with their breezes. Your icy cold glass sweats as you have another sip on the veranda. Your Haiku was a tantalizing treat to read. Nicely penned my friend.
The first two lines of this fabulous monologue reach right out there and snare you in with their powerful presence. A seasoned survivor of the many obstacles that life has to throw at you but also with some living yet to accomplish. The two final closing lines makes for a wonderful ending. Keep writing and sharing.
Interesting twilight walk down a dark country road with night closing in very shortly. It was a different kind of rhyme and meter scheme that I don't see that often. What is it called? You woke my curiosity with this one my friend. Thanks for writing and posting.
I especially liked your religious assignment Megan Rose. A very nice dissertation on the life of Jesus Christ. Excellent details were presented without error from his birth in the manger to his death on the cross. It was a true heartfelt works written in true religious fashion. Thanks for sharing.
A very nicely worded Limerick and the story of Carly's search within her own mind for those elusive words we all occasionally seek out. It was a pleasure to peruse this very well written poem. It flowed as smooth as butter left in the sun to soften. Keep sharing my friend.
It all depends on who's writing the editorial and their opinion. I was once told opinions are like a_ _ H _ _ _ S everyone has one. I found out my very own opinion my not be the same as a friends or anyone else' for that matter. Once I figured out that fact of life I became much more reserved when it came to an opinion and I now wait until the facts are all in. I do however feel personally that I prefer rhyming poetry for it is the beginning process in writing lyrics and a close cousin to song writing. Thanks my friend for sharing this thought provoking monologue.
If you strictly follow this part of the Bible in this day and age you will most definitely be headed for family court and divorce. The literal translation can't be taken word for word in this day and age. Wow! the scribe of God must have been tired when he wrote that one. Keep writing and sharing.
Sometimes seeing humanity through a different set of eyes is how one comes to realize how really screwed up the human race is. I liked your poem and your glowing viewpoint in the end. A positive attitude is about ninety percent of mental stability. Thanks for sharing this poem
with us.
Thank God, young master McFloyd didn't break his neck!! You were very lucky to say the least. Death by bicycle can't be a very good way to say goodbye to this world and hello to the almighty. Your story is very nicely conveyed and error free. Keep on writing and sharing.
Wow! a very nicely penned poem of love and spirit in the form of an Etheree and superb one at that. The last line got me the most. Mother and spirit is a divine gift and yours is interwoven in your poetry. Extremely well written poem my friend. Keep sharing these wonderful poems.
Great poem about the evils prevalent in the automotive industry and all the other stuff that's interconnected with it. I think it's time for everyone to stop and take a look at the destruction we have caused on this beautiful blue orb we call home. Someone has to stop the insanity. It was an awesome poem my friend and keep sharing.
Yes, those are good lyrics for a country western tune. Any takers for the music yet? I've had a couple songs recorded and played on the radio. Let me know if yours get recorded my friend. It has possibilities. It's a pleasure to peruse your work. Keep sharing.
T.L.Finch
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