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Review of Prophecy  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your double nonet is very interesting. I don't think I'm familiar with them but I know this was exceptionally well penned. I loved the shape and the content both. I am especially fond of that last three lines. They are truly beautiful my friend. Keep on sharing.

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Review of Piles  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
Scary indeed ! I had no idea until the end that Sarah would become a meal for the dump guy. This could be a movie plot. Nicely penned horror story my friend. You also have plenty of room to expand this creepy little tale. That's what I would do. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

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Review of Memories  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
A nicely crafted Haikuette poem with all the ingredients for the homemade bread on the old cast iron stove. When I was a kid we would visit my great grandfather. He was old school all the way. From hand pumped well water to the kerosene lamps that allowed him to read his bible. Your poem brought back those memories. Thanks for sharing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The Sandman sees all. I loved this and the details were fabulous. It brought out visions of the beach, sand and people. An extremely well written short story of two different scenarios of people right next to each other. The Sandman bears witness to the murder of a young woman in the end. Dark and well penned.

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Review of Autumn Night  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very nice haiku with excellent imagery. A light hearted and gentle vision of the sea. Well done my friend. Penned with a peaceful heart. Keep writing and sharing.

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Review of Sarah Finds Home  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sarah was lucky in a couple ways. She was lucky she didn't get hurt falling out of the truck and lucky her father noticed and stopped to rescue her. A true knight in shining armor to a young damsel in distress. Very nicely penned for the constraints you had to follow. Keep sharing.

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Review of Night haiku  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely crafted haiku poem my friend. Like the deep space Voyager it is on the move passing by new worlds in a Star Trek across the universe. Who knows maybe it will help reveal the true answers to humanity's questions. Your poem appears error free. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Cadence  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved your Buddy Holly elegy. Buddy Holly was the tip of the spear of rock and roll along with all the other great of his time like Ritchie Valens and The Big Bopper. I was eight years old when they were killed in the plane crash in an Iowa corn field. Don Mclean's "American Pie" says it all. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

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Review of Illusion  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is free will that dictates the answer to your dilemma and all you have to do is choose which you wish to display. The real you or the illusion. We all have a darker side and fortunately most of us will never let it out to freely graze amongst the others.

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Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
That is the way of our best friends. They love whatever you're having no matter what time of day or even where you are in the house. They are known to have a secret from of radar that tells them when there's something available if they show some profound patience. Your poem was a delight to read and please share anytime.

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Review of Junk Yard  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice little Haiku poem about memories and cars. When we were in high school cars were a status symbol for all the kids and if you had one you gained your first taste of real freedom. This splendidly penned poem brings those youthful scenes all back to me as if they were yesterday. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of BLINKERED  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
Before he disintegrates into dust. You need to go on with the story as to why he hit the red button when he saw the sign saying not to! Some people just can't follow the rules and you did a good job in exposing one of them. A very nicely penned short story. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of "WHY I CAME"  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
A short but powerful synapsis of the power of our Lord. The souls that are saved by his only son. Thanks for sharing the word of God and keep writing my friend. Jesus Christ is always with us. Amen!

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Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
Not all reviews can be positive but those choosing to write them should first look back from whence they came and practice a bit of civility. After all we are not all masters of the pen and might never be. Still it is ingrained in the human genome keep at a task until we have become better. Trial and error.
Interesting topic with an excellent poetic take. Keep sharing my friend.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very interesting editorial on the first amendment and it's freedom of speech content. The internet does challenge it and our freedom of speech. I do believe that the internet has given us cause to contemplate at this juncture in history to consider the adoption of new articles to be added. I don't see anyway around the issues the internet has caused. It's time to answer these questions. Thanks for sharing a very informative and insightful article of growing concern to all of us.

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Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
Do you believe in unicorns ? I loved it and the eighteen stanzas that tell the tale. Very nicely penned poem you have here. An excellent example of craftsmanship extraordinaire. I enjoyed the whole thing and the theme is good for any audience. Keep sharing these gems of yours.

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Review of The Perfect Car  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
I want one of those flying cars. How much are they and where can I get one. Another short but meaningful poem about cars of the future. A fitting epitaph for the fossil fuel burners of the past and present. Someday maybe we'll see it, if we live long enough.
Keep sharing and writing.
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Review of The Star  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
And when you let that imagination loose that is when the real muse begins. Writing while the rain comes down is gratifying. I have written some of my best to rain showers and spring flowers. It was a pleasure to read your rainy day poem. Thanks for sharing your well crafted work.

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Review of Love  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good aspect of caregiving for everyone to peruse. Avery nicely penned poem and a pleasure to read. My wife retired years early to take care of her mother who was battling Alzheimer's disease. We are familiar with caring for a loved one. Love and understanding are the perfect remedy for someone in need. A great topic and well crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A horse trainer and a life coach is a nice comparison and well worth the time you spent in writing this fine story of trust gained. Both you and the horse are on the road to recovery. An excellent letter to yourself as proof of progress. Thanks for sharing this and keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great Sci-fi story. A wonderful work of fiction from the future in an apocalyptic earth. I liked the way the story progressed and the theme of every father's worry over their child's first steps into adulthood. A well penned saga. Keep writing and sharing.

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Review of This Dream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A euphoric poem about a world called Utopia. I wish I had a map to this place for it isn't here but I give you credit for a poem well crafted and well meaning. It's more than likely however that humanity will leave with a bang and a whimper.
I do pray it will come to pass but I don't expect it. Thanks for sharing this ethereal poem of hope.

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Review of Regrets  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
The older I get the tougher it gets to let go of my youth. Now that I'm well into my seventh decade on this big, blue orb I find myself yearning for a longer life and more time to do the thing I enjoyed so much when I was young.
In just two sentences you described what took me 232 characters to describe. Nicely done Angel. Keep writing and sharing.
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Review of Triskaidekaphobia  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a delightful poem. I never was superstitious myself but I've known a few who were. Why do hotels omit the thirteenth floor. There are all kinds of oddities out there if you look hard enough. Your poem works well at the explanation for this old myth. A nicely penned work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Sunshine Girl  
Review by T.L.Finch
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now that was beautiful, An extremely well penned poem connecting the seasons to the stages of life. It doesn't get any better than this. It is a fine example of poetry from the heart and soul of the writer. Very well done and thanks for sharing the wonderful piece of art.

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