This was great! I really loved the dystopian feel and the whole time the main character is trying to convince himself that Regime is good, even while seeing things to the contrary. It hints at some kind of brainwashing or propaganda having infiltrated parts of society. Really loved this piece. Only critique would be maybe space out your writing a little. Instead of one lump of text, perhaps you could divide it into several paragraphs. Keep writing!
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