I liked your poem. I thought it was original, had true depth, and great imagery. The style of language was consistent through out your poem, as was the rhyme scheme. I also appreciate the psalm-like quality of your piece. Nicely done. There were, however,just a few minor things that I thought needed to change.
1. I didn't understand the random capitalization through out your poem. It was a constant distraction from the rhythm of your piece.
2. In the third stanza: third line, I think " cared " should be care.
3. In the same stanza: fourth line, I think you should do away with the first comma.
4. I had a few issues with the punctuation, just because you capitalized the first letter of every sentence. For me, if you are using punctuation, then it means that you are following the general rules it carries. Meaning that just because you have come to the end of a line, doesn't necessarily mean that you have come to the end of a thought or sentence. If that is true then you don't have to capitalize the first letter of the next line. If you aren't using punctuation then capitalizing the first letter of every line is the norm in poetry.
Again, I thought that over all your poem was great, and with a few changes I feel it would be five stars I hope I was able to help. Thanks for sharing and welcome to the WDC.