|Hi...I finally got around to reading your piece, so of course I have to review and share with you my thoughts. Since getting to know you and your situation, I already know the truth that your poem speaks of; and I feel that this poem more than adequately relay's what you have shared with me. It is heart breakingly sad. It aches with hurt and pain, and it is obvious that you want and NEED to be loved. Don't we all? Your poem is easily relate-able, I myself have felt the way you feel. And as I have already told you...it will get better. I promise. It will take time, and I'm not saying that all wounds will be healed but it will get better.
Love when you have it, can be all consuming...your entire world. And when it ends it is completely devastating. There are a precious few that find true..real love that lasts a lifetime, and the rest of us spend our life time looking for it. I know that it may not seem like it right now, but maybe the love you had was not the love you were supposed to have, but a stepping stone to the one who truly belongs to you. A true love that belongs to you will love you back and for who you are. Unfortunately we cannot make someone love us back and in the way we love them. In that situation we are forced to move and and start over. But until you are able to ...you have all these feelings that don't go away because they are not returned. In your current state of mind, you are not open to that person who is meant for you. So now you are working on bettering yourself so that your heart, mind, and spirit will be open to receive the love you deserve. I tknow it's hard, but keep plugging at it. It will get better.
I like your poem. The devastating heart break that you feel is haunting in this piece and speaks volumes to me. Keep writing your feelings down. They will help you put things in perspective. I want you to remember two things for me. One...ready yourself to meet the one that is meant for you, and two..remember it will get better. Say this out loud : I AM A GOOD PERSON AND I DESERVE TO BE LOVED.
As always, I am here for you when you need me. Keep writing and remember what I said!
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