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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Sorry for the late review.
In this story, the game world and the real world come together.
This story explores whether polyamory is actually possible.
Interesting story!!
When the times change, the way of thinking changes.
Is there love that doesn't change?
I think the answer is what we will find.
Thank you!!!
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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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You write "It is, and that's the beauty of it. There's no one right answer, so each team forges their own path."
I am very impressed with this sentence.
People pray for good luck at such times.
This novel is very interesting to me.
Thank you!! And I hope a happy ending!!!
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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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The story is getting more interesting!!
Joan's mother is a Christian.
However,
Joan became a prostitute because of the failure of Joan's first love.
I feel a little bit about the true meaning of this story.
Can they all live happily together?
I think about a new form of human love.
Thank you for the wonderful story.
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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello!!
Sorry for the late writing of the review.
This novel is about a computer game developer.
The game looks interesting.
I am the generation who played Invaders.
The stage of the story seems to move to Japan.
There seems to be a new development there.
Somehow, this story doesn't feel like a happy ending. I hope it will be a happy ending!
It was interesting to read.
Thank you!!
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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It's a thrilling story!!
Do Silicon Valley business people spend such thrilling days?
An unknown world for me!
The novel is getting closer and more interesting.
Brain and courage become money.
I also have to keep up with the times
I could n’t see the theme in the first half, but I understand the theme of this story.
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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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The story is thrilling!! Seeing a suggestion It's a bit difficult to read.
Why did this Joan associate with the Seto and Kitama brothers?
Joan says "brother".
All the characters are connected. Do you like such a situation?
Very strange relationship!
Under such circumstances, Mokuba feels like being innocent,
The story is interesting.
But finally, the story is complicated.
Is this polyamory?

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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I think people in Silicon Valley are so active in sex and work!!!
I first learned the word "polyamory".
I am surprised at the human relationship of the characters in this story.
You certainly present both polyamory and sex work in a positive light, I think.
I hope I can go to Silicon Valley someday!!!!!!
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Review of The hard journey  
Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The origin of civilization may be to work and gain wealth, I thought to read your novel! !By drawing on the future and the past, you are demonstrating the significance of the pyramid.
It is interesting !! I imagine the future!!!
"work hard in order to be strong and reach the treasure (the knowledge) and to be finally wealthy", you wrote. This message may be inscribed to all humanity.I thought about a lot of things!!
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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I read a comedy for the first time.Your comedy is laughable,and ridicurous,and humorous!!!!I like it!!
Comedy is interesting!! It was especially interesting,the word"pulled and pulled and pulled"!!!!!!
I laughed!!!The sight comes to mind!!!I enjoyed reading this comedy!!
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Review of Keep knocking  
Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello!! I think so!!! I was encouraged!!!Recently, I knocked on the door of "Writing.com". I am Japanese and a beginner of English.I dont know what will happen!!New world for me!! I like your sentence,"We shouldn't miss chances at those. As each day passes, some number of opportunities pass us by" .I like it!!
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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a beautiful and impressive short story!!The brightness of the boyhood is expressed on the ball and one string guitar. It is one string.It draws my attention and it is attractive. As a picture, it is dazzling!
The sight floats on my mind. I remembered my sense of childhood. I like your sentence ,-"their futures. Maybe one day some would make it big, maybe not. Most of them probably wouldn't. Lucky they don't know that, I guess."
I enjoyed reading your novel!

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Review by TATSUYAKEMI
Rated: E | (5.0)
Cold!!! Cold story!!! Severe that it is cold!!!! The season will be warm from now on. In Japan, there is a long rainy season in June!1 Thank you for review of my novel "Playing Guitar on the benchi"
I also wrote a new novel "I used to sing a song". I'm glad if you read it!!
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Review of Gone Fishing  
Review by TATSUYAKEMI
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Exciting!!! Did Fred killed two humman beeing? I am beginner of English,live in Japan.At the end, Did Fred kill "me"? Interesting!!!!!
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Review of Keep Breathing  
Review by TATSUYAKEMI
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I feel your passion!!Straight feeling!!!
I like it!!!
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