|It is a beautiful and impressive short story!!The brightness of the boyhood is expressed on the ball and one string guitar. It is one string.It draws my attention and it is attractive. As a picture, it is dazzling！
The sight floats on my mind. I remembered my sense of childhood. I like your sentence ,-"their futures. Maybe one day some would make it big, maybe not. Most of them probably wouldn't. Lucky they don't know that, I guess."
I enjoyed reading your novel!