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Review of Erlund's Curse  
Review by panicwritten
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This short shows quite a bit of promise. I do enjoy a strong heroine and Ciara seems like she will fit the bill. There is enough intrigue to make me want more, but in a good way. What is in the brown parcel? What happened in the town? This is a good teaser, prologue, or beginning of first chapter. My only regret was that there was nothing further. :)
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Review by panicwritten
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is how I really like books to start. There is enough action and intrigue to want more, but not too much that you feel over-stimulated with info. Great start! Not sure a rapier would be a match for the "cruel black iron" weaponry of the Braazen, but when it's Elven made....anything goes! :) If you have not written more my thought is you should. Looks to be a promising tale. As a huge fan of Terry Brooks and R.A Salvatore I give this prologue a thumbs up!
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Review of Glass Jars  
Review by panicwritten
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow this was really creepy, and I mean that in the best way possible. There were a few typos, but I'm not worried about it. This little story reminded me of watching Twilight Zone or old Fright Night episodes.
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