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Review of I Want  
Review by Kings
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
glynndah,
My friend, Your poem is very intriging with its erotica. Your thoughts were well spoken with the words you chose.
Kings (Carl)
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Review of A Rose...  
Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
SensualRoses,
This is a sweet and nicely written poem, my friend.

I liked most,
The nice flow that was put into each stanza.

I did not like,
I would not change anything.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

This poem is well written and has a nice flow in the words.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of First Attack  
Review by Kings
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hope Forus,
I am sorry to read about you pain and suffering by the hands of your father.

I liked most,
I know the story content is terrible, you told it well with your words.

I did not like,
Naturally, I did not like subject of your story.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

Thanks, my friend for sharing this story with me.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)

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Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Rachwrites82,
I enjoyed reading about the dream of your love.

I liked most,
The deep sincerety written in your poem by your words.

I did not like,
I enjoyed reading it and would not change anything.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

This is a real nice write of a beautiful dream, my friend.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Close To Tears  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
Coco,
I enjoyed your poem, my friend.

I liked most,
Your deep feelings employed in the poem.

I did not like,
I enjoyed all of the poem, my friend.

{b{Errors,
I found no misspellings or typos.

Thank you for allowing me to share this poem.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of My Friend, Jack  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (5.0)
iva*mae,
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem about your friend, Jack.

I liked most,
How you related to the fantasy of a child.

I did not like,
I enjoyed all of the poem.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

This is a beautiful poem with your deep make believe feeling.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Life is a Highway  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
iva*mae,
This is a well written poem, my friend.

I liked most,
I liked the poem wording and nice flow.

I did not like,
I would not change anything.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

I thought your poem was expressed with deep feelings from your heart.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
S.O.I,
I liked the way you described the summer months in your poem, my friend.

I liked most,
Your sincerety in the words you wrote.

I did not like,
I enjoyed everything in the poems read.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

Thank you for the walk through the nice summer months.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of when is it time  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (5.0)
hopeless poet,
I found this poem to be written extremely well, with the input of your love and hurt, my friend.

I liked most,
Your love expressed through the poetic words for your pet.

I did not like.
The poem is great the way it is now.

Errors,
I found no misspellings or typos.

My friend, I am sorry for your loss. Sometimes a pet can live as part of a family.

Thank you for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Silent Footsteps  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
Rikka K,
I enjoyed your little love poem, my friend.

I liked most,
The well used poetic words in the stanzas.

I did not like,
I liked all of your poem.

Errors,
I found no mistakes in your poem.

I found your love inspired poem to be sweet, with the use of your true emotions.

Thank you for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Senses  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
Rikka K,
I enjoyed reading your little poem about all that is free in life.

I liked most,
The well expressed feelings you put into the poem.

I did not like,
I would not change anything.

Errors,
I found no mistakes in your poem.

I enjoyed taking a walk through life in the words of your poem.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of lessons learned  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Rianne,
I am sorry to hear you went through this terror at a young age, my friend.

I liked best,
The deep feelings you used to express the hurt in the poem.

I did not like,
I would not change anything.

Errors,
I found no typos or misspellings.

I am glad you were able to share this poem, my friend.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of All Things Evil  
Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Rianne,
I found your poem of evil to be well written, my friend.

I liked most,
The abundance of words that in some way mean evil.

I did not like,
I liked it all a lot.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

I found your poem interesting and well written with the words you chose to write it.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Dying  
Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
partyjunky,
You expressed your dying feelings well in the poem, my friend.

I liked most,
The words with your thoughts employed to assure your destined fate.

I did not like,
I found nothing I would change.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

I enjoyed reading your poem that I think was well expressed with your true emotions.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Duchess,
I enjoyed reading your poem about the Chietess and her daughter, my frind.

I liked most,
The way you expressed the deep feelings for the tribe of Amozons, and the Chieftess.

I did not like,
I found all of the poem nicely written.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

I liked your write a lot, Duchess and learned much about the Amazons, and Chieftess.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Hide 'n' Seek  
Review by Kings
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dark Starr,
Thank you for this well written poem and reminding us about our little ones.

I liked most,
The poem is interesting and offers good advice to the reader.

I did not like,
I would not change anything.

Errors,
I found no mistakes.

This is a well written poem and made good reading for me.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)

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Review of I Believe  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
soccerk2,
The poem flow nice and certainly has a rhyming scheme, my friend.

I liked most,
The flow with each rhyming line accenting the previous line of the poem.

I did not like,
I would not change what you believe in, my friend.

Errors,
I saw no errors in the poem.

Thank you for describing in your poem all the good things you believe in.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of A Phone Call Away  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
soccerk2,
I really liked reading your well written, my friend.

I liked most,
The word flow of your poem was good very smooth.

I did not like,
I thought everthing about the poem was nicely written.

Errors,
I found no misspellings or typos.

This poem of yours flowed like water down hill and well written.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Purple Lady,
I liked reading your short poem, my friend.

I liked most,
The sincerety you put into the poem with your well chosen words.

I did not like,
I like the poem the way you have written it.

Errors,
I found no misspellings or typos.

I enjoyed your nice, but sad poem, my frind.

Thank you for the nice read. Write on.
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Invisible  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Jester,
I am sorry if you feel this way about your friends, my friend.

I liked most,
Your poem has a good flow in rhymic form.

I did not like,
I would not change anything.

Errors,
I found no misspellings or typos.

I enjoyed reading your well written poem, even though it was sad.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
isobelle,
This is a nice little poem you have written, my friend.

I liked most,
The poetic rhythm in each line of your poem, isobelle.

I did not like,
I would not change anything in the poem.

Errors,
I found no typos or misspellings.

I enjoyed reading the poem with your deep feelings of hurt depicted.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Veritas,
This is a beautiful poem you have written, my friend.

I liked most,
The nice poetic words and the rhymic flow.

I did not like,
I would not change anything, my friend.

Errors,
I found no misspellings or typos.

Your poem was excellently written with the well chosen words you employed.

Thank you for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of The Rain  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Suhaani,
I enjoyed your poem about all the things, a woman can be.

I liked most,
The deep feelings you employed to create your poem.

I did not like,
I liked everthing you wrote in the poem, its structure and flow.

Errors,
I found no misspellings or typos, my friend.

i Liked the words you used to write and depict your feelings.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Tuffy  
Review by Kings
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
ArizonaGene,
I found your story to be well written and very interesting, my friend.

I liked most,
The well chosen words you used to depict your story.

I did not like,
I would change nothing if I had written the story.

Errors,
The last word in the description line of the story is misspelled: (childhoon) to (childhood).

I thought your story was interesting, and well presented, my friend.

Thank you, for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Winter's Freeze  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
Richard,
I enjoyed reading your poem about the dislike for winter you feel.

I liked most,
The poems excellent flow with its rhyming scheme.

I did not like,
I found nothing i would change if it was my poem.

Errors,
I found a misspelling in the third stanza, first line: (Wea) (Wear).

I thoroughly enjoyed your poem, and hope you soon go to Florida.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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