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Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Christina,
This is a great poem you have dedicated to our Savior, my friend.

I liked most, It flow was good with a rhymic scheme.

I did not like, I would not change anything.

Errors, I found no misspellings or typos.

This poem you wrote is a nice tribute to God and His glory.

Thank you for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Feelings  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
Ghezra,
I felt your deep emotions you used to write this poem, my friend.

I liked most, The words you chose to create your poem.

I did not like, I found nothing I would change if the poem was mine.

Errors, No capitalized (I's). No misspellings or typos.

I enjoyed your poem a lot, my friend.

Thank you for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review by Kings
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
N.B.,
I found your write to be unique and interesting, my friend.

I liked most, The unique way you described the problems of a writer.

Errors, I found no misspellings or typos.

I enjoyed your read on the insight of a writer's block.

Thank you for the read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Imagine  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
redneckgrl,
I enjoyed reading your interesting poem, my friend.

I liked most, I liked the way you described a dream.

I did not like, You sort of left the reader to decide its ending.

Errors, In the last line of the first stanza: (NO TO CARE), would it not read better as, (NOTHING TO CARE)? I found no misspellings or typos.

Thank you, for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of For my Daughters  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (5.0)
jennifer,
I thank you and your husband for his service in our armed forces, my friend.

I liked most, I liked all of your beautiful poem. It flow was excellent, very smooth. I felt your love for your family, that you expressed in the poem.

I did not like, I would change nothing, if endeed I had written it.

Errors, I found no mispellings or typos.

This is a beautiful poem in every way, my friend.

Thank you for the beautiful near perfect poem. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Butterfly  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (3.5)
princess,
I enjoyed your poems quality of sentiment, my friend.

I liked most, I enjoyed the praise you gave to the beautiful Butterfly.

I did not like, The poems flow was a bit choppy, with forced rhyming.

Errors, Capitalizing each line not needed. I found no mispellings or typos.

I liked the way you poem speaks of the pretty butterflies.

Thank you, for the read, my friend. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of Child Awake  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
Toto,
I found your poem to be written and expressed well, my friend.

I liked mosr, Your expressed deep feelings.

I did not like, The verses should be separated by lines.

Errors, I found no mispellings or typos.

I enjoyed reading this destinctive and interesting poem.

Thank you, for the nice read, my friend. Write on

Kings (Carl)
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Review of Lost at Sea  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Melissa,
As I read your poem I could feel your deep feelings you put into it.

I liked most, The setting you depicted in the poem was excellent.

I did not like, The poem was near perfect, I would not change anything.

Errors, I found no mispellings or typos.

I felt as though, I was there with you when you wrote the poem, my friend.

Thank you, for the nice read. Write on
Kings (Carl)
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Review of No more goodbyes  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Locksley,
My friend, I liked your poem a lot. It flowed beautifully to the words you employed to write it.

I liked most, The rhymic flow of your well chosen words.

I did not like If the poem was mine I would not change anything.

Errors I found no mispellings or typos.

Even though your poem was sad, it was written from your heart in a rhymic manner.

Thank you for the nice poem read. write on
Kings (Carl)
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Ocean of Life  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
suggeeth,
I liked this well written and interesting poem about Ocean of life.

I liked best, Your comparison of life to the mystery of the ocean.

I did not like, I would not change it if the poem was mine.

Errors, I seen no mispellings or typos, my friend.

As I read your poem I found its depiction well presented.

Thank you, for the nice read. Write on

Kings (Carl)
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Dreams  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Geo,
I liked your poem about the comparison of dreams to fog, my friend.

I liked most, The gentle words you used to explain your thoughts.

I did not like, I found nothing I would change.

Errors, I seen no mispellings or typos, my friend.

I will be thinking of your poem in my next dream.

Thank you for the read. write on

Kings (Carl)
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Proud To Be Me  
Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.0)
J. Johnson,
I enjoyed your poem about the great help of your friend. Yes, they must be truly a great friend.

Sometimes it takes a lot of guts to search your inner self to find the truth.

I found deep feelings of praise for your friends help in the poem. No grammer mistakes or typos did I find.

Thank you for the read, my friend. Write on
Kings (Carl) my review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of The Kiss  
Review by Kings
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Purplefocus;
Written with deep emotions
Expressed with true feelings
Excellent choice of adjectives
Flowed great
Thanks for sharing Kings
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Review by Kings
Rated: E | (4.5)
KingsKid;
This is a beautiful message for God's people.
It flowed like a gentle mountain stream.
The stanzas were great perfection in reading.
You continue to write like this you will have a great future.
Thanks for sharing it with me. Kings
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