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Rated: E | (4.0)
  

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I noticed that "Christmas Greetings has been nominated for a "2020 Quill Nominations in the Best Shop category. It is an honor to review and rate it. As a Nominee myself, it is so exciting to be nominated by our fellow peers. Congratulations on your nomination into the "The Quill Awards

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I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

Originality:

I found a shop with amazing original Christmas images that are dated back to when I was a girl. Your opening image of Santa was a trip back into time. Focusing on others to cheer and delight them when things have been less than normal.

Organization:

It is a very organized shop. You have a strong opening explaining your goal in helping the community, a sense of urgency within the community to cheer others up, and end it with a challenge for everyone.

Grammar/Spelling:

I did find a few grammar errors, and some suggested additional wording or different wording. These are indicated in red.

1. People are losing their homes, facing eviction, losing their sources of income.

2. Now they face telling their children not to expect much, if anything, for Christmas.

3. I've added a variety of Christmas-themed c-notes and kept the price low.

4. Many other c-note shops offer a wide variety of Holiday greetings and cheer.

5. which is equivalent to a postcard in the mail… and it can mean SO MUCH

6. It can be a c-note form below, OR you buy it from ANY WDC c-note shop.

7. Just type each of their user names into the blank with a comma between them.

8. Your link to where they are to post their credit is invalid. I will assume that it is closed for the season and will reopen in November/Decemberish.

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This item number is not valid.
#2239363 by Not Available.

Selection:

You have the appropriate and sufficient selection of items for purchase. You do have a wider selection more than most in this collection.

Cost:

Your cost is appropriate and clearly indicated; any differences in cost are indicated and explained.

Contribution:

You have given the WDC community an incentive to purchase by giving them a cut on the price. A small suggestion, maybe you can run a special a least once, maybe twice before Christmas. If they send 50 @ 600gp, 75 @ 550gp, 100 @ 500gp. Along with the MB, of course. I don't know what it is about MBs, but they can sell anything when attached.

Quality of items for sale:

You have a wide variety of images that are very themed orientated for the season.

General effect:

I thoroughly enjoyed window shopping for c-notes in this shop. It has a wide variety for everyone in mind. I will be dropping in to shop for some cNotes this Christmas season. Your prices are reasonable, and the MB is a great incentive to purchase even more. I love the idea that they can shop at any c-note shop to earn one.

It was a delight to review your shop and your items that are up for grabs. I hope that this review is helpful and encouraging for you. I wish you success in the Quill Awards and a generous 2021.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow... That was amazing as it was the first time I read it. The changes made a big impact on it and it read smoothly from start to finish. It was like you were inside my thoughts. I try to do the same routine every day as well. But, once in a while, the world slips through that microcrack and seeps into my thoughts. Not, as much as last year when the unknown was in the air daily.

Thank you for recentering me. I will save this as a favorite so I can go back and reread it for encouragement in this chaotic world we live in now.

Thank you for doing the corrections and making this an exceptional read. I hope to see you in future contest at "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest and "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests as well.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
    

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter this contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. You may also enjoy "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest another religious-based contest of mine. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title ""God So Loves The World" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout the piece. Making it a delightful piece to read.


Imagery & Emotions:

I am glad that you choose to use this verse in your piece. For it tells all the love God has for us. The greatest love ever. Too bad that Jesus had to die for us to be saved. If we could have been good to start with. Makes you wonder what life would be like if Adam and Eve had not eaten that apple to start with. It also makes you think what would life be like if Jesus had not died for us. Sounds like a prompt to me. Would we have had to continue the sacrifices of animals to cleanse our souls? You did an excellent job in writing the love God gives to us unconditionally day in and day out.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

But have everlasting life.
They will walk on streets of gold.
Pain and tears will come to an end,
And they shall never grow old.

The ultimate goal for Christians is to have everlasting life with our Father in Heaven. For no more aging or pain and tears to be shed, only love, peace and joy to be had for eternity. What a glorious goal. To be in His presence forever.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you the 1st Place WINNER in February's "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests

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Rated: E | (4.0)
    

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter this contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. You may also enjoy "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest another religious-based contest of mine. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title ""Stream In The Desert" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow ran throughout this piece. You did have one hiccup that stumped me for a second. He come and grace this field with a stream. Maybe if you say it this way; He comes to grace this field with a stream. How does it sound to you?


Imagery & Emotions:

What a beautiful piece! I followed you from the exhaustion down the trail to the gleaming in the stream with His Holiness. You did an excellent show of love that He gives us through our trials and showed the rewards that follow. I think if you had the one change I suggested it would've flowed effortlessly throughout, it would have been flawless.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

I drink and fill myself, and bask in His dashing gleam.

Basking in all His Glory what a feeling it is. I can't help but get excited about spending time with Him. His love is so full of grace, hope, knowledge, faith, strength, comfort, and peace, all wrapped into one feeling, His Love!

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible.



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Review of Prayer For Love  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
    

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter this contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. You may also enjoy "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest another religious-based contest of mine. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title ""Prayer For Love" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow runs smoothly throughout this piece. A delight to read.


Imagery & Emotions:

I love the imagery that you designed for this piece. I find that we have to pray for love and guidance for ourselves to love others because sometimes they make it hard to love them. Then other times we get selfish and pray for only ourselves and we can't forget to pray for the strength to stay on the path to Him. Excellent job in showing others His love and guidance to us through prayer. Often people forget to go to Him for just love. It's always give me, or what can you give me?

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

I know being separated from You is being separated from love

It is an awesome feeling to be in His love. There is nothing like it or will ever be. You are totally right, being separated from Him is living without true love.

I want to thank you for sharing, entering, and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you so much for doing the corrections to your previous review. I greatly appreciate it. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter, correct, and sharing your testimony with me. Please, join me in the future contest for "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest and sharing your faith with God and me.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you so much for doing the corrections to your previous review. I greatly appreciate it. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter, correct, and sharing your testimony with me. Please, join me in the future contest for "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest and sharing your faith with God and me.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you so much for doing the corrections to your previous review. I greatly appreciate it. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter, correct, and sharing your testimony with me. Please, join me in the future contest for "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest and sharing your faith with God and me.


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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE SHORT STORY CONTEST

It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I wanted to take "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests to a new level and designed a short story contest to allow us to share testimonies and feelings in our faith. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contests and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

A little background on how I review others work:
I want to let you know that I do not review like most people. I, for one, have a unique contest. It is about God and you, about your feelings for Him and the things He does in your lives. I can’t take that away from you, but I can help you grow in the gift He has given you. I will make the reviews private. I will provide you with input to help your story be a powerful testimony for others to read. I don’t want to cross any lines because this is your testimony, not mine. I use a grammar app that helps me tremendously and would like to share it with others as a gift. I will give you an in-depth review of your story. This is by no means a reflection on your work. It is my opinion only, and you may use it or not. It is totally left up to you if you wish to use the changes. I have learned so much these past two years by using Grammarly. I feel more confident in my writing. I came to WdC four years ago not knowing much about writing, but I have always wanted to write for many years. I needed somewhere to learn, and I stumble upon Writing.com. The best thing I have ever done for myself. I even have recommended it to family and friends who have joined.

When I judge a contest, I have to take many factors into play, how well it is written, grammar, punctuation, passive voice vs. active voice {I had to look those up myself}, if it is too wordy, and a few others. I keep in mind that this is your story, your testimony, and it has to be your words that I use to make it a powerful message. I hope to not offend anyone with the reviews I give.


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Title:

Your title ""My Anchor in Stormy Times" really caught my attention.

Imagery & Emotions:

Wow, I love how you captured me right from the start. You sucked me into your story with the analogy of the boat capsizing on the rocks. You described the storm we all as humans experienced this past 11 months. You gave a great knowledge of what it means to have faith to be saved from the storm. We have to have an anchor, and the best one to have is our Lord God. He is the best Rock we know. He is our strength and our refuge when there is only fear about us.

Reading your testimony then visiting your portfolio gave me more insight into who I was reading about. It has been a challenge for many others. I wondered how it affected the ministry for those in it. To be told that you couldn't have church or gatherings must have been difficult. The church I was attending decided to have church asap, and most of the congregation was affected by covid. Two did not survive out of those who attended those services. I had been shunned because I did not attend by some of those members even though they knew I was in double jeopardy if I did attend. I had been quarantined for months before the pandemic. I miss attending church and fellowshipping with others. The sheer energy during worship and services was so electrifying it feeds me the Holy Spirit for a few days.

Now, I listen to worship music on y-tube, especially when I read and review. He gives me so much inspiration when I write to others about Him. It's like He radiates the words I write/speak to others. A mighty feeling to have in one's soul.

You speak of things that most people would darn not to, for people would look at you strangely and walk away. Testimonies to me show others how He moves in our lives. No one has the power of God. Lucifer moves among us too, but we have the Holy Spirit protecting us in times of turmoil and deceit.

Your testimony spoke to me and placed me in a boat on the ocean headed to shore. I immediately start to pray as I have so many times in dangerous situations. Like the time my dog was in the car with me. She panicked for some strange reason. She wrapped her leash around my throat, and the handle of it had fallen onto the floorboard under the stirring wheel. I could not reach it from trying to hold the leash with both hands so it would not choke me. I'm still not sure to this day how she got wrapped around me, but she had. It all happened in a split second, and I was fighting for my life. I couldn't breathe or speak, but I uttered 4 words. "PLEASE, HELP ME, GOD!" That instant, I was set free. Her leash and harness were in my hands, and I was looking at them in disbelief. I screamed, "THANK YOU, LORD GOD!"

I'm not sure if you are a sailor or, at one time, was. You described a terrifying moment in a sailor's life. It is well used in this story.

You followed the prompt, rules, and I felt that you engaged me in your conversation as well. I found inspiration in your words, and I truly believe that your readers will too. Thank you for sharing your testimony with me today. We will need to show you how to do dropnotes. They make your notes, prompts, etc, less detracting to readers. I'm trying to help others learn this technique and grow in their passion for writing.
In Conclusion:

Distractions and/or Errors: The corrections are just corrections, not meaning that your story is not excellent. The revisions are intended to make it stronger. The corrections in the whole sentences were passive, and I was instructed to rewrite them by Grammarly to make it in an active voice. I found 13 errors in your short story. The following are suggestions for making your piece stronger and less distracting with grammar and punctuation errors. They are more than one correction in some sentences. I add the whole sentence to help you find it easier when/if you make changes.

NOTE: If you read the changes, it makes your testimony very strong and vocal to others. I read it after the errors were corrected. It captured every word that you wanted to convey to me. That was my ultimate decision-maker. I'm trying to help others learn this technique and grow in their passion for writing.

1. The waves below, whipped up to a white frenzy, by the tempest behind them, smashing against the rocks of a Cornish coastline. Suggestion to rephrase it to sound stronger.
The waves whipped into a white frenzy below, smashing against the rocks of the Cornish coastline below.

2. Divide this sentence into three different sentences. I always thought God was in such a storm, and there is a sense of awe at the powers revealed there, a feel for what it might be like to stand in the presence of the Almighty Himself.
a. I always thought God was in such a storm.
b. There is a sense of awe at the powers revealed there.
c. A feel for what it might be like to stand in the presence of the Almighty Himself.

3. There is something terrifying about a storm on the ocean, especially when you are the sailor caught in one, in a tiny boat, being driven towards the rocks.

4. Make this one into three sentences as well.
a. It is truly frightening when you have to make that extra tack back out to sea, just one more time, to avoid being smashed against the shore’s rocks.
b. As you do so, you are rolled by the waves, coming from the boat’s side, literally jumping the waves.
c. Drenched to the skin by the cold salty spray and praying for the moment when you can turn and run towards the shore.

5. Storms are no joke for sailors, and so the prayer of a sailor is more often for safe harbor and for a good anchorage to ride out the storm.

6. Rephrase this sentence to make it clearer sounding. Many people have described this year in terms of a storm that claimed lives, that ruined people, leaving people asking God questions.

7. It is a storm that claimed a president who had looked a dead certainty for victory, now not.

8. Divide this sentence into three also. I also added and took out a few words as well. In another trial, that my life passed through, I had a picture of being surrounded by an army of demons, feeling like bait for the forces of darkness.
a. Another trial that my life passed through this past year.
b. I had pictured being surrounded by an army of demons.
c. I felt like I was bait for the forces of darkness.

9. However, I saw an angel standing between me and those who would destroy me, his sword whirling, as he decimated the onward assault of the enemy, in my defense and in accordance with God's plan for their destruction.

10. Divide this sentence into two parts. So what does it mean to trust God when the world is shaking all around you, when all you thought solid is broken and falling away and where a world of falsity is swept away in a flood of tears and a hurricane of events.
a. So, what does it mean to trust God when the world is shaking all around you.
b. When all you thought solid is broken and falling away, where a world of falsity is swept away in a flood of tears and a hurricane of events.

11. It means to shine your light as far and wide as you can so that others also might find the safety of the shore, and it means to be at peace.

12. No storm can throw you off God's foundation, and there is no demon that can get past the angels that guard you, not this time, not this place.

13. as the bible says.
a.(Matt. 7:24-27): I would move this down above the verse.

I hope this helps you. As I said before, I am not a professional reviewer. I am here to help you sharpen your skills. I by no means am a perfect author myself. I have the Grammarly app, and it has helped me out tremendously this past year. It has sharpened my skills, and I want to freely and lovingly share it with others. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing your testimony, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to congratulate you on winning 1st Place in the January "The Lighthouse Short Story Contest. You will notice that there are two 1st Place Winners for January.
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Review of Love Me Tender  
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I don't know how I missed this puzzle. I loved it and the verses you have attached in the introduction. Great word choices as well.

For He so loved the world! He is our biggest fan and our greatest love of all!
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Review of Psalm 40:8  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
    

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Psalm 40:8 really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow is perfect in this piece. What a delight to read.


Imagery & Emotions:

You have penned some mighty powerful words, 40 words to be exact. I read it several times to let it sink into my soul. You touched my heart with these few words. Excellent job in conveying them.


In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

The whole piece is my favorite, I could not choose just one line. I have to take all of them. For each spoke to me, individually, loud and clear.


I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to announce that you are the 1st Place Winner for January's entry in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests Congratulations.


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Review of Knowing the Way  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
    

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:

Your title "Knowing the Way really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow moves smoothly throughout your piece.


Imagery & Emotions:

I see a woman who knows that God is there no matter what is happening in her life. Knowing when to reach out to Him is the key to a great relationship with His All-Mighty. I see how your faith gets you through this hard world we live in this day and time. The quarantine tested our faith and our abilities to reach out to Him more than ever. Excellent job in reflecting your faith with your words. There was one item, you put the prompt at the top. I know others want it there, but I find it distracting. Please, keep that in mind for the next contest. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

How precious is time spent in your Word.

I find it so rewarding when spending time with Him. I think it's because we make Him feel special so in turn, we feel His love even stronger than we would if we didn't take time with Him.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to present you with 3rd Place for January's entry in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests Congratulations.


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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "God’s will is good to me really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm flows evenly throughout your piece. Making this a delightful read.


Imagery & Emotions:

I see in your words that no, matter the storm when you have doubt, lean on His truth and understanding. I see these words in your piece. An excellent show of your faith in our Heavenly Father. Your words will speak to your readers of your faith and love for God. This was such a delight to read. I look forward to your next entry.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Your words light my path so from your ways I won’t depart.

Reading and studying the Bible daily guides us on our journey. To maintain the path is to continue to be closer to Him.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible.



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Cool crossword, I do remember most of these songs... lol I did a great job on solving it I only missed two, but I got them. To think of all the songs that he performed is a great legacy. I googled afterward to see how many pieces he had, wow over 1200 songs recorded. But, you probably already know that. Do you play some of his work?
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OMG... I thought I was going to have to write it out, but I finally figured it out. This is my first electronic word search I've done. Man, that was fun. This is so cute and in theme with Valentine's. I'm already addicted to word search especially when I travel by plane. Oh, I have a feeling that I will be doing more of these. Thank you for introducing me to word search online, Lills. *Heart* I'm in love! *Heart*
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What a cute word search. I love doing word searches, especially when I fly from one side of the country to the other. I love that you choose MONKEYS. It's easy to print out and do it. Well, in my case at the moment handwrite it out and have fun finding the words. Ok, I had to so I could do your word search. I think that you shall have lots of activity for this one.
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Review of JESUS MY FRIEND  
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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Jesus My Friend" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

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Imagery & Emotions:

I enjoyed the rhyming to your piece. You speak of His journey with us being a friend to us. He asks us to follow Him through that door and trust in Him for guidance. A job well done.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

He had no place to lay his head
No home, no inn, a stable had his bed

A child was born in a manger. No one would think of a King being born in a stable with straw and animals in it. It shows you the King of man is willing to be as one with us. Words that speak volumes about His character. A Loving, Kind God.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my greatest pleasure to award you "3rd Place Winner" in October/November contest.


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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "The Lamb, Who Roars" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

center}The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout your piece. Making this an easy read for your readers.

Imagery & Emotions:

You tell of the birth of Christ what is to be His life, making this a story poem. Telling the story of the child who is KING of all. His mighty roar shall be heard by all who seek Him and His ways. Excellent job in telling those of the humble birth of Jesus and the strength of His power.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

HIStory, I love how you use the word history in the telling of HIStory!

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my greatest pleasure to award you "2nd Place Winner" in October/November contest.


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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "The Gospel of Luke" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout your piece giving your readers a delightful read.

Imagery & Emotions:

I believe that you said it best through these words. To love radically, to give generously, to sacrifice wholly. You can't go wrong doing these things on a daily basis. People forget that He was born for us and that He died for us. You penned a verse that others will find solace within your words. Excellent job, there is strength in your words letting others know how important it was for God to sacrifice His only son for us.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

He lived for us
so we could live for Him

I find these words the strongest in your piece. They speak the words of love that He gives to us so we may serve Him with the same devotion that He gives to us.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my greatest pleasure to award you "1st Place Winner" in October/November contest.


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It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package of the "CLOSED Auction & Unique Raffle that you bid on. We appreciate your support and generous donation. This is the 2nd of three reviews in which one will be awarded an Awardicon for the best of the best.

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Title:


Your title "A Thieve's Christmas really caught my attention, especially during this time of year.

Imagery & Emotions:

I love your characters in this piece. You painted a thieve to have morals when it came to certain marks and times of the year. A detective to consider that there could be an honest thieve in the world and a beautiful one at that. I shed tears when the old guy reached into his pocket to find the package. I have had that happen to me; that is a blessing of sorts. I have been helped me out in the past when I needed it. The extra miracles at Christmas are overwhelming to watch, to read about, and to participate in. This is a wonderful story of love, and you did an excellent job painting it for your readers. I see that this is not the only adventure that you plan on Denny and Hunter to have. I look forward to reading more about them in the future.

Grammar Corrections and Errors if any are needed!

Here are the suggestions for change. I only put the corrected version in red. It will make the piece move even smoother. I will send you an email with the corrections and suggestions I saw. I hope you find them helpful. It always helps to have a second pair of eyes.

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Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Hunter appeared in front of him in a flash, her eyes twinkling with anger. β€œDid you hurt my old guy? Did you take his tickets and money?”

I love that she was protective of her marks. A thieve that has morals is a good thing, I guess... lol. But, it didn't phase her to step out and expose herself to Denny to protect her mark or marks. Gotta love an honest thieve. I want to thank you for supporting "CLOSED Auction & Unique Raffle It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another.


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Review of It's Just A Room  
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It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package of the "CLOSED Auction & Unique Raffle that you bid on. We appreciate your support and generous donation. This is the 1st of 3 reviews that I will be doing. The best of the three will receive an Awardicon for the best of the best.


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Title:

Your title "It's Just A Room." it really caught my attention and I had to stop and read it. They say that curiosity killed the cat, I was hoping not in my case. *Smile*

Imagery & Emotions:

This is unfortunately true across our country today. Such a heartfelt story about a classroom. Not, knowing about our education system right now is very daunting to families and teachers. I have family and friends who are teachers. Now, I really have family members that are teachers. My Goddaughters son only has an hour of school with the teachers and the rest of it she has to teach. It's very sad. Our children are going to fail if something isn't done very soon. My sons tell me they have trouble with the new Math and English that is being taught. I can see where this would be very hard on teachers as well, the dedicated ones. My ex-brother in law was a Custoidain until March when schools closed down. He is now retired at the age of 62. It actually is sad because it isn't just a room! There are memories stored in those walls, stories to be told, music to here, and lessons to be taught and learned.

Grammar Corrections and Errors if any are needed!

Here are the suggestions for change, I only put the corrected version in red. It will make the piece move even smoother. They are a few grammar corrections and rephrasing of a couple.

#1: While the files copied, he let his eyes wander around the room.
#2: It wasn't large; having once been used as a filing area, the filing cabinets had moved long ago, giving way to healthy growth and progress.
#3: Its walls were an industrial light cream in color, not the worst of the five possible choices they could’ve painted.
#4: The furnishings were sparse, a desk that looked to be a relic from some army surplus store, two bookcases loaded with books on composers, music history and theory, instrumental method books, and piles of scores.
#5: He packed the horn, a concert tenor with an F attachment, the "workmen" in his collection, in its gig bag, now headed for home.
#6: "I don't know, man."
#7: Pulling his mask back into place.

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Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

The stillness was starkly depressing in a room that had never been quiet. Opening the door onto silence brought flashes of memories in a kaleidoscope of images.

It was hard to choose just one, so I choose these two. What a way to start a story off. I imagined the hustle and bustle of students rushing in with their instruments and taking their assigned places. I really enjoyed your short story and will recommend it to others. I want to thank you for supporting "CLOSED Auction & Unique Raffle It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another.


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Review of Company B  
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Hello Master Om,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today, along with welcoming you to WdC. If you need anything you will find a friend around every corner willing to lend you a hand or two, even an ear. Welcome to the one of a kind place that you will call home and it can become addicting...*Bigsmile*
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Title:


Your title "Company B" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging. Making your piece a delightful read for your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


What a beautiful dedication to Sergeant Fredrick W. Mausert III. You painted his story brilliantly for your readers. I pictured a soldier giving himself away again and again selfishly to those with him, his brothers. I know that you become close and rely on each other. I know that I said it was a delightful read, but it hit very close to home and I cried because every soldier out there is my family. SGT. Mausert was a remarkable man by your dedication to him. Just as you are, I want to say thank you for the service and sacrifices that you made for your country. I come from a military family with a very long line of soldiers. Who are my Heros!

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

At the base of that time machine they left a tarnished star,
for at this place of remembering, it is who and what they are.

The dedication that one gives his life for his brother, family, and country. It's who they are, heart and soul to protect those they love. My youngest son served 20 years and is now retired. Your piece was very heartfelt for me.

I want to thank you for sharing it with me and others here at WdC. It was an honor and pleasure to read it. See you around the halls of WdC and I'm glad that you are here to follow your dream, passion, and to let your words soar to new heights.


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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:

Your title "Dissipating Depression" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout your piece making it a delight to read.

Imagery & Emotions:

I can relate to your piece wholeheartedly. You captured this reader to the end. You painted a picture where your readers can relate to the feelings inside each heart. Especially right now with such uncertainty in the world today. Excellent job in showing your readers where it comes from and where to find the help to overcome that fear and uncertainty.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

As the sunsets,
behind autumns dark mountains,
a weariness embraces my mind
and anxiety rises
out of my soul.

Isn't it amazing how quickly it can take over one's mind. I find it is so much better staying in His word. Peace flows through me during the fearful times and there has been a lot this year for all of us. Keeping hope, faith, and love in our hearts is our armor that we have to put on daily to combat evil.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my honor to award you 1st Place Winner" in the September Celebration Contest.


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Review of Lost then Healed  
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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:

Your title "Lost then Healed" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow move throughout the piece. Capturing your readers to the end.

Imagery & Emotions:

I can so relate to your piece, I believe others will as well. You described how one is lost looking for salvation and finding it in our Lord Jesus. Excellent job in penning this piece.

In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

My heart empties and refills
Joy of life HIS word reveals.

There is no other feeling than having your soul filled with His word. It swells to compacity with a feeling of joy and His love.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my honor to award you, "3rd Place Winner" in September's Celebration contest.


"3rd Place Winner"

May you be blessed always,
Let your creativity flow!
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Review of Silver Linings  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
    

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:

Your title "Silver Linings" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your piece moves smoothly throughout making this a delightful read for your readers.

Imagery & Emotions:

You painted a picture for your readers, showing them the advantage through this time in our life when everything is chaotic. Spending time with loved ones. Enjoying their company instead of the rat race that most of us are stuck in. Excellent job in capturing the heart of this reader.
In Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
But
also,
six months
of my heart swelling,
half a year
of being home for family dinners.

This needs to be everyone's outtake on this whole craziness going on. I never thought it would ever be this insane. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to announce that you have "Honorable Mention" for September's Celebration Contest.

"Honorable Mention"

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Let your creativity flow!
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