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Review of Image In A Mirror  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
   
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Image In A Mirror " really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow move throughout the piece capturing your readers to the end.


Imagery & Emotions:

Speaking in parables, looking in the mirror, seeing that you are a reflection of Jesus. What would Jesus do? All these and other questions pop into mind. When do we stop the chaos and become one society growing in brotherly love towards one another? I love that you reflected on what love should be towards fellow mankind. We have to start somewhere. Washing other's feet is a humbling experience, I am told. Excellent job in showing by pretraining it in a mirror.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

God knows me best in this
Image in the mirror
Born to love like Him
The One whom men
Rejected

God does know us better than we know ourselves. He knows what is in our hearts even if we can't relay it to others in a way they understand. God understands.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you the Winner of June's "Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I do hope that you enjoyed entering and sharing your love with us.


"WINNER"

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Review of Phileo Adelphos  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
   
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Phileo Adelphos" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

I enjoy the way you formed this piece giving it a flare to the flow and rhythm of your piece.

Imagery & Emotions:

I love that you used the greek meaning Phileo Adelphos for Brotherly Love. While using the flip side, different points of view the other side of the coin to say. Sometimes we have to be blunt to get our point across to others or even ourselves sometimes. A reminder a check to make sure that we are showing brotherly love to one another. I love the imagery that you used. A break to help your readers contemplate what you're speaking about it. Excellent job!

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

(we will love the person)

Reminding us that it is the person we are to love and to forgive their transgressions. Forgiveness becomes the greatest love of all in loving the person before you.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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for entry "Brotherly Love
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (3.5)
   
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

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Title:

Your title "Brotherly Love" really caught my attention.

Imagery & Emotions:

You speak of how one should be towards their fellow man and the pitfalls of not having or giving brotherly love to one another. It is especially important at times like these during a pandemic. I wonder what it was like during others? The chaos and pandemonium that can destroy a society, is heartbreaking to one. Although this is free verse, your piece is more like a story poem. Great job in showing mankind that there is still hope as long as you don't lose faith.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Brotherly Love becomes a covering of Day
to those, who are living through the dark night of the soul.

I think that if we show brotherly love towards each other that there would be less darkness in this world. Because Love is light.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (3.5)
    
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST

It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "For the Love of God" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow move throughout your piece with a rhyme making it whimsical. I do have a suggestion to keep from distracting your readers from your pieces, making it flow smoother. Do your footnotes, prompts, and such at the bottom of your page. Gives it a clean, cut finish.

Imagery & Emotions:

I see Jesus walking with us talking and telling us of His love and what His father expects from us to love each other as He loves us, unconditionally. Sharing all things with our sisters and brothers, making sure they have as we have, His love. They say seeing is believing, but what about showing each other. You describe it in your piece, well done.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
Share with him your bread and your home,
Show him that your love is full-blown.

I love brotherly love, sharing is caring, and giving one food warms the heart to no end. My church tries to have potlucks once a month in different age groups. Making it fun for all. Coming together and sharing is a wonderful thing.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
    
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Hello Jim, I thought I'd drop by and give you a Strawberry Shortcake Super Power Review Raid! and Anniversary Review this weekend. I want to say congratulations to another year here at WdC. May you have many joyful and productive years to come.

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Disclaimer:

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Title:

Your title "A Potluck Family Dinner" really caught my attention.
Rhythm & Flow:

You captured your reader with the rhythm and flow moving nicely throughout your piece. I loved that you rhymed it gave it a nice touch.

Imagery & Emotions:

As I read it, I pictured your family and yourself gathering at a family member's home. Everyone bringing a favorite dish of theirs. You were right about it being potluck. Chicken with marshmallow, beer tasting wine, and can't forget the blue gravy? I'd say the bread was probably worth the extra, even if you had to marry the baker. Now, to say the least, when I had gotten to the end to see that it was after a funeral I can say that it was a feast of sorts. We all can be out of sorts when a family member or dear friend passes. We do things and forget things that we normally don't on a typical normal day. We are like a robot on autopilot. I know this for a fact with presently losing my great-nephew a few weeks ago.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
Now we all had quite the feast,
Together our meal had been pieced,
What brought us all together?
In this very foul weather?
Why, a meal to honor the deceased.

The things that bring people together are always for different things, but the common denominator is food. Food for the soul. To gather and swap memories and laughter for the loved one lost. I especially enjoyed the rhyming.

Thank you for sharing this delightful piece about family gatherings. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful Anniversary this month and I hope you have a joyful weekend.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "The Voice: Words and Music" really caught my attention.
Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout the piece. Making it easy to capture your reader's attention.

Imagery & Emotions:

I picture myself listening for God's voice in all things that surround me. Like on a rainy day I love to open my front door and I listen to the rain and the wind lightly going through my small world ringing my chimes, making beautiful music for Him and me to listen to. I sometimes fall asleep being held by His words as we listen to the sounds they make. Your right you never know where you will hear His voice, only if we would stop and listen for it more then we do. Excellent job, thank you for sharing some beautiful ways to listen for it.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

His voice could be the next one
Calling me up out of my
Buttery toast day
My ears ready to bow my knees hearing His heart

I couldn't pick just one line as my favorite, I picked this verse because you are totally right we never know when He will appear and call one home to Him. Not only that now you have me wanting some buttery toast...lol

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It gives me great pleasure to award you 3rd place in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests for April 2020.


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Review of The Voice Of God  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
          
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "The Voice of God" really caught my attention.
Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout the piece. Making it easy to capture your reader's attention.

Imagery & Emotions:

Yes, yes indeed it is His voice that sets us all free from everything that is thrown at us. Challenging us to do good or evil. It is left up to us what we choose. If we listen we will hear it ringing loud and clear in our hearts. Amazing job in telling and showing His voice and capturing your readers.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Today, His voice still speaks -

teaching me His Word.

The Holy Spirit still talks with my spirit,

guiding me, assuring me with His love.

I can never choose just one line, I always end up with a whole verse. This one spoke to me. We will never lose His voice, and He will speak to us as long as we don't push Him away. We need to be able to hear His words to guide us from harm and darkness that falls upon this Earth. He gives us peace, comfort, and love when we listen for Him.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It gives me great pleasure to award you 2nd place in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests for April 2020.


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Review of One Voice, God's  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
       
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "One Voice, God's" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

The flow of your pieces moves smoothly throughout making this a delight to read. Captivating your readers in reading on.

Imagery & Emotions:

Your piece speaks of God's voice in our everyday life, in the smallest of things even rain. How He speaks to us in gentle tones and words of unconditional love. Yet His voice is strong and soothing to those who follow Him. I found your piece beautiful in describing His voice to others. Exceptional job, thank you for sharing God's voice with others.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

When the wind rustles in the evening
When the thunder roars in the storm
When a child laughs in its happiness
When the dove coos in the morn
I hear your voice.


It was hard to choose one line, I chose this verse as my favorite. The sound of God's voice surrounds us daily to give us comfort in our busy chaotic world. If only we would stop and listen to it more often then we do.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It gives me great pleasure to award you 1st place in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests for April 2020.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (5.0)

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter in the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often to enter. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "Unwarranted Forgiveness" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow move freely throughout your piece, making it easy to read and keeping your readers involved to the end.


Imagery & Emotions:


You give your readers a powerful message on the sins we create for ourselves and how forgiving our Lord God forgives us and loves us unconditional for all time. You have inspired your readers with your words of encouragement knowing that no matter what we do He is there to give us forgiveness. Excellent job inspiring others through your words.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

My gratitude cannot begin to encompass
the magnificence of your mercy
and I am left, speechless before You.

He does give us mercy when we feel it is unwarranted. I think that when we do wrong we are harder on ourselves for letting Him down, then He is with us. He never leaves us or forsakes us. We do that to ourselves. Thank you so much for the encouraging words that you have given to your readers.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you 1st Place in March "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests.


"1st Place"

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for entry "You're Amazing!
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "You're Amazing!" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your poem move freely throughout your piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I felt so in tune with your words, making them become my own. It felt like your thoughts were my thoughts. That is what every writer aims for in their readers, to touch the inner soul within themselves. You praised God through your whole piece, and I know that He was smiling from ear to ear with the praise you give me. You showed everyone what it was like to be in awe of our Lord Jesus. Fantastic job, I feel like this didn't take you to long to write. If it didn't, it doesn't take long when it is on your heart to write.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

I wonder what your voice must sound like?
Sweet and powerful, but full of kindness and love.

I can imagine it is deep, stern, but so loving, to hear His voice. I think we all wonder and search for the sound of His voice. It sounds like a new title and a piece there. You have inspired me, "The Sound of Your Voice." Amazing is His love. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you 1st Place for March "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests


"1st Place"

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Review of I Write In 2020  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "All Is Well With My Soul" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move freely throughout your poem. Making it easy to follow and appreciate.


Imagery & Emotions:


I like how you showed the drama of our daily lives and how to concur it with peace. It is difficult these days, it seems to get harder and harder every day. Great job, in executing your poem and keeping your readers inspired by how you handle the day to day things.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

In the quiet space between thoughts
I let my mind ease
I let my heart open
And I breathe
A peace comes over me
And I know
All is well with my soul
And nothing can touch me here.

This is precisely what I do to relieve my stress of daily life. In which I'm doing a lot of lately, to keep my sanity and peace. Thank you for inspiring us in your piece.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you 2nd Place for March in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests.


"2nd Place"

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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it in the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "My Soul- My Cross" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm moves smoothly through your piece, making to easy for your readers to relate to your words.


Imagery & Emotions:


What an inspiring piece! You showed strength by picking up your cross and moving forward through this world we temporarily live in. May God protect us from the evil that's spreading across the globe. You showed courage in the battle against sin and prevailed, winning the ultimate prize your days in Heaven. All is well with your soul, my friend. You did a fantastic job of expressing it in your words and encouraging others to Christ.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

I'm content watching the world go by,

Joyful with my battle cry.


All is well with my soul.


In my weakness comes His Almighty power,

Guiding me in Satan's darkest hour.


I can't help it. I love these two verses. Joyful with my battle cry. We praise our Father on a daily basis. I'm listening to worship music now to write these reviews. Something I do every month, it helps me concentrate on Him and the words written by His followers. We need His almighty power to protect us in the darkness of today. We sure need it in the days to come.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you 3rd Place for March "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests.


"3rd Place"

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and entered it in the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "Because of Your Amazing Grace" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm moves smoothly throughout your piece making it easy to read and follow. Keeping the attention of your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


I love how you start your piece out. You are the only one that used both songs and was very delighted in seeing that. You express the love that you have in God and the debt He paid for our sins. You give inspiration for the love and forgiveness He gives to all. Giving yourself to His service and inspiring others to enjoy Him as you do. Excellent job, I wanted to give you more than Honorable Mention, but you missed highlighting the songs you used in your verse in grape, it is one of the rules. I wanted to mention your piece because you are the only one who used both songs.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Because of Your Amazing Grace, It Is Well With My Soul!

I enjoyed that they used both songs, because without His amazing grace, not is all well with our souls. Thank you so much Ruwth for being you and sharing this beautiful poem.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you "Honorable Mention" for March "The Lighthouse Poetry Contests


"Honorable Mention"

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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "All's well with me." really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moves smoothly throughout capturing your readers with ease.


Imagery & Emotions:


You painted a picture that your readers can relate to. The world with all of its chaos and darkness. You have inspired your readers of a new day and encouragement to carry on no matter what. Excellent job in conveying the ultimate sound of God's gift to us, a bird song. To brighten our day and soothe our souls.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Soon the sky rang with bird song
carried to my window on a windy flute.
And, I knew it is well with my soul.

Oh, the sound of birds singing in the morning light is soothing to the soul. It is amazing the smallest of things that He has created bring us such joy. I love how you describe it as a windy flute. Very creative yourself, look at you ...lol

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Review of My Favorite Dream  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You're a Winner


It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package of the "Winter Fun Auction" that you bid on. We appreciate your support and generous donation. This is the short story that I will review and give an awardicon to.


Disclaimer:


I will give to you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "My Favorite Dream" really caught my attention.


Characters, Plot & Flow:


You gave a detailed account of the dream bringing your readers into it making it an easy flow throughout your piece.

Imagery & Emotions:


Wow, you gave awesome details making me feel as if I'm there. Your ending was amazing. I have a few favorite dreams as well. But, yours was beautiful with the feeling of being close to God while flying high among the clouds. When I fly back and forth to California I love being at a window seat looking outside feeling so close to Him. To me, there is no other feeling like that.


Grammar Corrections and Errors if any are needed!
Here are the suggestions for change, I only put the corrected version in red. It will make the piece move even smoother.


1. As my first foot fell lightly on the old crested rooftop, my balance faltered.
2. I commanded my universe, so nothing could do me no harm.
3. Bring your next paragraph up one space under the ****** you want it to look uniform.

Other than my suggestions and they are only suggestions you spun an excellent dream. I felt as if I was there next to you enjoying the fresh air in the basket ride.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

I had never felt so close to God during my waking hours, so I never wanted to leave.

I understand never wanting to leave the presence of God especially when it's reality calling you back. One day we will have that opportunity to stay in His presence and feel the love and comfort within.

I want to thank you for supporting "Winter Fun Auction." and winning my package so I had the opportunity to visit your portfolio and read about your favorite dream. It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another. I've been here at WdC for going on 3 years now and it's the best choice I've ever made. I'm glad that you joined our little but ever-growing family here.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package A3 of the "Angel's Adventure Raffle and Auction" that you bid on. We appreciate your support and generous donation. This is #3 of 3 that I will review and give one awardicon to the best of the 3.

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Title:


Your title "The Santa Claus Poem" as per requested yesterday, I will gladly review and rate it for you.

Rhythm & Flow:


This piece moves freely throughout each stanza making it enjoyable for all ages to read.

Imagery & Emotions:


While I was reading it I could picture each Santa doing as described. To be honest I really didn't think of the many different Santa's there could be. Excellent in giving us the differences that each of them has. Now, when I see a Santa it will remind me of your poem ...*Bigsmile*

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Some Santas are bald


I guess this is my favorite line because I don't think I've ever come across a bald Santa before. Now, I'll be looking every Christmas for a bald one from now on. *Laugh* I found no grammar or punction errors in it. I think that children of all ages will enjoy reading it.

I want to thank you for supporting "The Angel's Adventure Raffle and Auction." It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package A3 of the "Angel's Adventure Raffle and Auction" that you bid on. We appreciate your support and generous donation. This is #2 of 3 that I will review and give one awardicon to the best of the 3.

Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "The Winchester House" really caught my attention.

Imagery & Emotions:


I love how you started out comparing construction techniques in building a home. It brought back so many memories. Including this particular home. Located in San Jose south of San Francisco, it is a very popular historical attraction. It's been many many years since I've been there. It is a site to experience in person. What Sarah Winchester built was in so many ways a legacy of the Winchester name. Although the gun itself is legendary. I can see where she believed the medium in order to survive all the deaths that she felt the invention of this gun caused. A great weight was put on her and she felt she needed some kind of solace in order to pay for what was done to those souls that perished.


Grammer Corrections and Errors if any are needed.


They are just small errors and some grammar corrections. You will find the corrections in red.

1. Typically the completion time for an average single-family house is somewhere around 7 months. Houses that are built on an owner's land can take a little bit longer.
2. If a contractor builds the house on the owner's land it might be completed in about eight months.
3. If omit an owners decide to build the house themselves on their land it may take up to 11 months or longer to finish the job.
4. However add , a comma the story that I'm about to tell you is anything, but average.
5. What began as a simple eight-room farmhouse turned into a colossal structure with 160 rooms.
6. Starting back in the year 1884 and lasting for almost 38 straight years, the construction never stopped once on this massive house in Northern California.
7. This Queen Anne Style Victorian mansion includes forty bedrooms, two ballrooms, forty-seven fireplaces, 10,000 windows, seventeen chimneys, two basements, three elevators, but only one single functioning bathroom.
8. In the Guinness book of world records add , comma the households the record for the "Longest continuous house construction".
9. The construction of this house only stopped because of Sarah Winchester's death in 1922.
10. It was said that a medium told Sarah that she needed to build a house and keep building it, so to confuse and keep the ghost calm that was killed by Winchester rifles away from her.
11. There are windows on the floor, doors that open into walls, stairs that lead absolutely nowhere, and the number 13 is used consistently throughout the construction of the house.
12. Even though the Winchester house is very famous for its massive size, it really didn't have a formal building plan of any kind.
13. However {add , comma because of it's floating foundation it was saved from two separate earthquakes in 1906 & 1989.
14: From the smell of hot chicken soup in the hallways, footsteps from unknown sources omit , comma to different types of construction sounds of hammering and screws falling onto the floor.
15. It's a real shame that if all of the work that Sarah Winchester went through to avoid ghosts actually kept her from crossing on over to the other side.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Sarah Winchester was the wife of the great rifle manufacturer William W. Winchester.


The history behind this story is so amazing. I hope that in your travels that you have visited this little gem that is a big part of American history. It reminds me of the movie that James Stewart played in 1950 "Winchester 73." Great movie if you have never seen it. One of my favorite all-time movies. You did an outstanding job in writing about this historical site and letting your readers know that it is a must-see while visiting the area.


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Review of The Day Before  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Merrijane, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPowerful Heart Raid this weekend. We here at WdC SuperPower Reviewers are giving out some *Heart* LOVE *Heart* this weekend. While I was in your port I thought I would review one, showing the love.


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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "The Day Before" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moves smoothly throughout making this very delightful to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


I can see you kneeling down on your knees hemming a tall young man's pants leg. Him conversing with his friends or perhaps dad. You gaze up at him, your smiling thinking of a childhood moment, just as you move the needle through the fabric, pricking your thumb. He looks down as he hears your cry. He stops and asks if your ok touching your right cheek and you shake your head yes. You go back to tending to the hem. Oh, a son and mother's love for one another. I remember my son's weddings and this piece reminded me all over again.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

and you will carry me with you—
not a hidden blot or dark
nagging memory,

but something woven deep,
sewn within,
always there.


No matter where or what they always know that we love them. It is the love between a mother and child that makes the person they grow to be. Excellent job in the free verse. Not many people can write free verse. I prefer free verse myself and have several pieces.

I want to thank you for sharing this moment with us. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful *Heart* heartfelt *Heart* weekend.


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Review of A Lesson in Love  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Dennis, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPowerful Heart Raid this weekend. We here at WdC SuperPower Reviewers are giving out some *Heart* LOVE *Heart* this weekend. While I was in your port reviewing another piece I thought I would review an extra one, showing the love.

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Title:

Your title "A Lesson in Love" really caught my attention. Just exactly what lesson is to be learned here?


Character, Plot & Flow:


Your characters are two best friends who undoubtedly have been with the same girl. Your piece flows smoothly throughout giving this a very nice read. Just what you are looking for in keeping your readers involved and wanting to know more.


Imagery & Emotions:


Ok, I can honestly say that I didn't see this coming. No, for real! I had to read it a second time around to make sure I read it correctly. I'd say that Jim played it off pretty good right up to the end. I'm like Jim if you don't know what your girlfriend likes, wants or anything else about her you will eventually lose her to the next guy in line. Which in most cases ends up being the best friend.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

"Bill, I don't know. Let me ask her about that. Hey, Emily, what should Bill get you for Valentine's Day?

Here are the suggested changes: I didn't find anything in the way of changes. No grammar, punction and or any detail changes. You did an excellent job of conveying your story.


I want to thank you for sharing this little gem. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful *Heart* heartfelt *Heart* weekend.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package A3 of the "Angel's Adventure Raffle and Auction" that you bid on. We appreciate your support and generous donation. This is #1 of 3 that I will review and give one awardicon to the best of the 3.

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Title:


Your title "20 Great buys at a dollar store" really caught my attention, because I was a manager over 3 Dollar Tress at the same time and know their concept of marketing strategies.


Imagery & Emotions:


I really enjoyed reading this and it brought some very fond memories and some that weren't. I worked for Dollar Tree in Dayton, NV. from 2009 to 2011. Where I eventually took over the Carson and Minden store as well at that time. It was during my divorce and if it wasn't for this job keeping me busy and out of trouble. I was amazed at the items that were brought in that were actually high priced items everywhere else. I bought a small doggie bed for $1, among dishes and glassware and many many more things. You are right about the pregnancy test being the same as those you bought anywhere. There were some items that we would advise against even daring to try. But, a great place for party supplies and children's toys along with some bestseller books. Now, if you really want a huge bargain on Christmas wrapping to buy, you need to stock up after Christmas. It's usually 50 to 75% off. Some of the things are like 80 to 95% mark up, unbelievable right? Great job on hitting some of the great buys at a dollar store. In California, they have .99 cent stores. They carry everything from fresh fruits to phone accessories. It just makes you wonder why Walmart and other grocery stores can't do the same.

Grammer Corrections and Errors if any are needed.


They are just small errors and some grammar corrections. You will find the corrections in red.

1: Whichever one it is that you choose to shop at,
2: the bottom line here is how to stretch your hard-earned dollar as far as it will go.
3: At your local dollar store you can often find discounted good products at a real bargain, and you definitely want to consider buying some of these 20 things at your dollar store you need a period . here and take away the dash -
4: Also it's a great place to buy artificial flowers for your loved one's headstones in cemeteries.
5: You can find bargain-priced Christmas, Halloween, Valentine's Day, and Easter decorations for your house at great prices.
6: Party Supplies - You can save up to five times omit of what you would spend elsewhere by simply buying your party supplies at a dollar store.
7: Dish towels - Both washcloths and dish towels are great buys at your dollar store.
8: Greeting Cards - You can always find that special heartfelt message that you are looking for in your greeting card for considerably less at your local dollar store.
9: Something to remember about wrapping paper and its accessories is why would you want to pay more somewhere else for something that's simply just going to end up in the trash anyway?
10: Pregnancy test kits - Dollar store pregnancy kits are just as accurate as those at your local drug stores, and they will save you a boatload of money as well.
11: You can enhance the walls of your home for just a fraction of the price that you would have ended up spending in other high-end stores.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

18. Pregnancy test kits - Dollar store pregnancy kits are just as accurate as those at your local drug stores, and they will save you a boatload of money as well.

I had forgotten about the pregnancy tests, they also carried condoms wish was stocked next to the pregnancy test. Which is the one I would not dare to try. They eventually took them out due to teens stealing them and some parents complaining that it was just asking for problems. With the threat of being sued, they pulled them. Ah, fond memories.

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Review of Christmas  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

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Title:

Your title "Christmas" really caught my attention:

Imagery & Emotions:

I love the words that you choose to use in your piece. The story of Jesus is a very strong one for me, as I'm sure that it is for all. Your words speak volumes with meanings of their own accord. Awesome job.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Amazing
Savior

My favorite words in the whole wide world are of our Lord and Savior. Need I say anymore?

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. Everyone is a winner for the December 2019 contest. It's my honor to announce that you have won 2nd place a tie.

"2nd PLACE"

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Review of Frosty's Revenge?  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Angus, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid this weekend.

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Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "Frosty's Revenge?" really caught my attention.


Character, Plot & Flow:


This character sounds familiar but has an evil side. With a little mystery mixed in.


Imagery & Emotions:


I always wondered what became of dear Frosty. Now, I know he became a ruthless killer out for revenge. I can't really blame him much. No errors to really speak of...lol Beautifully written and packs a powerful message in a small package.



Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

What’s that axiom? ‘Hell hath no fury like a snowman scorned’? Something like that, anyway.

Greart analogy, makes one think about making a snowman. Especially if he has a broom in hand. Not, to mention Hocus Pocus either, sly rabbit, hiding under Frosty's hat. He is an evil rabbit.


Thank you for sharing this twist to an old childhood favorite. I will never see Frosty as a sweet gentle soul anymore. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful rest of the weekend.


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Review of A Christmas Wish  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Krysha, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid and Anniversary Review this weekend. I want to say congratulations to another year here at WdC. May you have many joyful and productive years to come.

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Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "A Christmas Wish" really caught my attention.


Character, Plot & Flow:


A family during a family crisis joining together to celebrate Christmas and life as they know it. Your characters are strong along with the plot. You gave great detail enough to keep the reader involved. That is what makes a great story.


Imagery & Emotions:


The opening paragraph made me think she was really in a snow-filled scene. I felt like I was in the room with them as the story unfolded. You introduced each character on cue. I was just a little confused about Kaylie and Mike's relationship at first and had to reread the sentence a couple of times. Man, I've been out of the dating scene way to long. (We’d been official only two weeks before he had to drive me up to Las Vegas as fast as he possibly could so as I could say goodbye to my grandmother.) Officially dating, engaged or married? Just curiosity on my part I'm sure. It was nice that he jumped right in and did that especially if they were just dating, he's a keeper for sure. I felt for the family as the candle went from one to the other. I knew what each wish was because that's what I would be wishing for. This is beautifully written and a delight to read.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

And in the blink of an eye, my brother had a firmly packed snowball planted right into his forehead.


I've been reminiscing all day about SNOW ...lol. Reading story after story about snowflakes to snowball fights. What a wonderful way to celebrate life. Enjoying each other's company. You spun a delightful tale of a family who was bound together with love and devotion. The miracle of Christmas wishes has been told throughout history.


Here are the suggested changes: I hope that they are helpful and useful.

#1: Sighing, I set the card down with the others on the table and looked out the rear kitchen window.
#2: “Yes, Daddy.” He laughed, as he always did when I said it that way omit comma, and walked over to shake Mike’s hand.
#3: I knew there was something being silently said between them as they looked at each other in the eye and nodded.
#4: I gazed up at the fourteen-foot tall fir tree sitting in the corner, all decorated in gold and burgundy.
#5: It was a tradition that we all make a Christmas wish on Christmas Eve,
#6: She was crying omit comma, or trying not to at least, and the candle trembled in her hands.
#7: With wonder and amazement add a comma he took another step,
#8: Looking from my brother omit comma, to me, to my sister, to Mike he slowly stood up.


Thank you for sharing this tale of love, dedication to family and the faith of prayer. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful Anniversary this month and a joyful weekend.


Keep Writing on!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Dave, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid and Anniversary Review this weekend. I want to say congratulations to another year here at WdC. May you have many joyful and productive years to come.

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Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "The Curse of February" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move effortlessly throughout this piece. Making it such a delight to read.



Imagery & Emotions:


You created the vision of being surrounded by snow that a winters storm left upon us last night. Adding the picture was a perfect plus to dramatize your piece. Beautifully done.



Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

cars trapped in ice
by winter's vise,

This actually happened to my car the first winter that we moved to Mississippi in the winter ice storm of 1994. It was devastating to the south that year.


Thank you for sharing this unique version of a winter storm and the hopes for spring. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful Anniversary this month and a joyful weekend.


Keep Writing on!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Review of Winter's Dance  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Rhoswen, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid and Anniversary Review this weekend. I want to say congratulations to another year here at WdC. May you have many joyful and productive years to come.

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Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "Winter's Dance" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move effortlessly throughout this piece. Making it such a delight to read.




Imagery & Emotions:


I love every stanza, they bring new light to the picture you have painted for your readers. It brings back very fond memories of winters past. One's I truly cherish. A marvelous job of telling us this story.



Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Flakes of silver drift downward,
glittering in the light of a harvest moon
as they filter through the darkened forest.


I can picture your opening lines just as if I was lying there watching it through my window. I love watching it snow it is a blissful feeling and wonderous to think such a beautiful thing was created for our delight.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful way of looking at snowflakes. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful Anniversary this month and a joyful weekend.


Keep Writing on!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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