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Rated: E | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:


Your title "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest wc 39" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move easily throughout your piece. Making it easy for your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


It is short, but sweet and packs a punch. You wrapped all of the verses into a short condensed verse. Excellent work, and you rhymed it as well.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

My heart with all my strength

and soul it sings!

I vow to God above to teach

my children all these things!

In laughter, praise, and worship

we shall surely keep

Our lights shining brightly

even when we sleep!

Ok it was very hard to choose a favorite line because it was worded where I had to choose all of it...lol There is one small thing. I wished that you would have given it a title. I'm honored to announce you as "October Honorable Mention" I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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for entry "CHAPTER 28
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Title:


Your title "Differences Part 1" really caught my attention.

Characters, Plot & Flow:


Your characters are becoming more developed throughout your story. Getting into more of the characters as the plot thicks around them. Doing a great job keeping your readers attention to the details of each character.


Imagery & Emotions:


There is one thing missing in this chapter. Maybe more detail of the surroundings that each scene calls for. Just a thought, maybe more detail, for example. When the general slammed his fist on his desk. Have something fly up or off of it. Maybe a little more detail of her room as well. I want to feel that I'm in each room feeling the energy of the anger and the passion that surrounds them. I'm still finding your story intriguing and can't wait to read the next chapter to see what is going to happen.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

"And be careful. I don't want to tell two women I sent you on a dangerous mission by yourself and you got hurt or worse."

I would hate to tell two women that I sent him off as well and he was hurt or worse. It ain't like answering to two women about forgetting something but to get their loved one injured or killed. That's another ball game.


Here are the following recommended changes: They are mostly punctuation errors as you can see.

#1: She looked around his lab with his three lab tables, countless tubes add a comma, and vials with different colored liquid and the countless Bunsen burners scattered around the room.
#2: Adrian nodded. "Yes, and now--" He heard a noise. "Well, you will get your chance as I do believe that is the bell saying the Warriors are home."
#3: The general took a step back. "Yes add a comma , son. Is this about what happened to Derek replace with a ? That wasn't your fault you know. You--"
#4: "Well add a comma , a lot of young human men and creature males are. I wouldn't worry about that."
#5: The general threw his head back and roared with laughter. "Is that all. Most 'Pires go through this in puberty.
#6: He has shown this family more love and devotion than our own family has.
#7: She runs her tongue up and down the length of it replace with period.
#8: Jake frowned. "I'm omit: the what?"
#9: He grinned. "I take that as a yes. Now add a comma , what was it you wanted to tell me?"
#10: She found his lips with hers and kissed him. "That can wait add a comma , my love. Now how about round two..."
#11: The pink curtains swayed in the breeze, his wife's touch. The door opened with a creak and his son entered.
#12: The vampire king's brother came with us."
#13: The general's body shook, and his hands formed fists.
#14: "And be careful. I don't want to tell two women I sent you on a dangerous mission by yourself and you got hurt or worse."


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. I hope that you find the review helpful and useful.

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for entry "CHAPTER 27
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello DMT,

It is my pleasure to review the requested piece "Differences Part 1 Chapter 27" and to give you any helpful information if need.

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Title:

Your title "Differences Part 1 Chapter 27" really caught my attention.


Characters and Plot:


I found that your characters are detailed out as in your previous chapters. Your plot thicks more in this chapter, giving more details about the father's past. I find this to be very interesting, adding more to the story as you go. I look forward to finding out more about the family. I see more stories to more of your characters.

Imagery & Emotions:

I like that you added some humor and emotions in this one. The emotions Jake has for his half brother were unexpected, being that he truly wanted him dead. I found that he just might have some regret down the road for what happened to him at no vault of his own.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

The boy stirred and sat up, he rubbed his jaw, and "What hit me?" he stammered.

The general bent over the boy "That would be me."

I could imagine him doing just this. I laughed out loud. The situation was perfect and the timing. I find laughter to be more real like to any given situation.

Here are the suggestions for change, I only put the corrected version. Oh dear me I have 49 errors. I will send those in a separate email to you, in a few days. I didn't realize it until I formatted it. I hope the changes help you. Once you make the changes let me know and I will change your rating. This is a really great piece. Awesome job. I want to thank you for sharing it with me and asking me to review it. It was an honor to read it. Catch ya next time.


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Review of John  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "John" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move throughout your piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow along.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture, John, surrounded by the crowd speaking about our Savior that is coming. What a glorious thing to be able to witness and hear him speak. To hope for such a person to come and save them, us. If they only knew what we know today. And we can only comprehend bits. Now, if only, man will listen to the word of God, they can be saved? Excellent job, I found one error, you forgot to add the prompt to the bottom of your page. I would like to discuss it more in detail with you separate from the review.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Preaching to man about the King
He is calling out to all.


Talking to others about Our Heavenly Father, Abba, Friend, All Mighty is the greatest joy one can have. Letting them know that He is there for them as well. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "For Such a Time as This" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


I find your rhythm and flow moving throughout your piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow.


Imagery & Emotions:


It takes great strength to stand before someone of authority and to speak to them, sometimes. It's like giving a speech of sorts in a way. And we are to fear our Heavenly Father because He is the greatest Authority. You must have had to give a speech or two at work. I remember once having to, I was scared to death. You did an excellent job, I found 2 errors, easy fixes.

#1: And would betray me, (move your comma back one space)
#2: Your golden scepter bids me come,


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

For in such a time as this:
My heart pounds in my ears,
And would betray me ,
If God did not give me courage.

Sometimes even when we speak to others we need that encouragement that only God can give us. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Review of Dear St Jude  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "Dear St. Jude" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece are throughout your piece. Making this an excellent read for your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


A letter to St. Jude telling of your repentance and searching for forgiveness. This is short and to the point. Are you Catholic, by chance. I was raised, Baptist, Catholic, and Pentecostal. It was deemed whomever we were staying with, that's where we went. Excellent job, I found 1 spelling error, judgment.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

It's for saintliness I struggle.
I fail so painfully that I fear His judgement.
No secrets are kept from God.

People just don't understand that God sees everything and you can't hide it. It reminds me of a child hiding the cookie wrapper under their pillow...lol. It eventually is found out. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Jeremiah"s Complaint" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow moved throughout your piece. Making this an easy read for your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


Sometimes we find it in ourselves to complain, even to God Almighty, just as I did last night. Jeremiah's complaint could be as just during that time. I find that you put it into simpler terms for your readers. Excellent job, I found no errors of any sort.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Your goodness overcomes all doubt
and strengthens our will to serve,
knowing that a smile from You
is worth much more
than our oh-so-human struggles.

I find this a very rewarding statement to be so true. His goodness overcomes all and gives us the strength to carry forward. A smile from All Mighty is worth more than any it's weight in gold and even then some. I would love to use this in one of the posts that I do on my FB page and use it here on the Lighthouse Poetry page. I would design it and be more than happy to send a copy of it to you. I would need your full name for the quote authorization of use.


I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title " The House on the Rock" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout your piece. Letting your reader's imagination weave into it.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a young family growing up in a home that had a strong foundation of religion and love. In many ways, I believe that this is what today is lacking in many homes. I was brought up by my parents and their families, as a community giving us strong values. I like the rhyming that you added to this piece, it makes it unique. Excellent job, I did find 1 grammar error. #1: Mommy and Daddy had a love for each other. Also, you need to space here. Learned that lesson,___ learned it well, He’s in my heart, that’s were he stirs.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Learned that lesson, learned it well, He’s in my heart, that’s were he stirs.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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for entry "CHAPTER 26
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello DMT-PASSED,

It is my pleasure to review the requested piece "Chapter 26 Differences Part 1." and to give to you any helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.



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Title:


Your title " Chapter 26; Differences Part 1" Sounded interesting and caught my attention, you know peaked my interest.



Rhythm, Flow, Plot:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to keep up with. Your plot was different than most Werewolf vs Vampire stories.



Imagery & Emotions:


I find myself with a family preparing for the funeral of their son and brother. These are hard times and emotions run high. The details you have in the forest placed me in the heart of it. I could visualize the 3 preparing to right one another. And you couldn't have ended it better, by having the General pull out his dagger. A parent protecting it's young always. Making him believe that he was the Assassin. I believe any parent would have done the same thing. Great storyline and plot. When I can I will have to return and continue reading the rest of them.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Jake turned his back so, he didn't see his father spit on Ella's body or take his dagger from behind his back and place it back into his shoulder belt sheath before he buried her head under a bush; or notice the small stab wound between her kidneys which penetrated her heart.


Here are the suggestions for change, I only put corrected version, I didn't find very many. Excellent job!

#1: Ella stood still. She felt a tremor go through her body. "Sure, Eva's husband." She turned to flee, but Jake blocked her way. You have Eva and it's Ella, right?

"We've never met, but I knew your brother," Jake's hands shook.

"Look, I avenged my brother. I acted in the law. The law clearly states that if someone kills your kin you have the right to kill theirs," she hissed.

Jake smiled, but his eyes were as cold and as hard as iron. "So that means I can kill you."

#2: Ella started to shake. ( same as #1.)

#3: The first creature to step out of the space or be killed is the loser,"

#4: He stepped away from the pair and shouted, "BEGIN." suggested capitalization because he shouted it.

#5: Jake turned his back and walked away. So, he didn't see his father spit on Ella's body or take his dagger from behind his back and place it back into his shoulder belt sheath before he buried her head under a bush; or notice the small stab wound between her kidneys which penetrated her heart.

I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. This is a really great piece. Awesome job.


I want to apologise for the lateness of your review. I want to thank you for sharing it with me and asking me to review it. It was an honor to read it. Catch ya next time.


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Review of My Future  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "My Future" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm flows smoothly in your piece. Making it very enjoyable to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


You touched upon the thoughts of man. Although this flesh of ours fails us daily, He is always there to pick up and give us hope. Very well said in your first stance. In your following stances they became very powerful words. You used the prompt perfectly in your piece.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

He is my constant forcefulness.

He is the force behind us no matter what we've done or who is against us. His Mighty power enables us to do anything.


I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest" and for Celebrating my 1 year anniversary. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


"🥇First Place"


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "My Portion Forever" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I find your rhythm and flow to move effortlessly along throughout your piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture us sitting having a cup of coffee or perhaps tea, my favorite. I totally understand about home or should I say homes. But, I like you have found that my true home is not here but with our Heavenly Father. Great use of the prompt throughout your piece.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

But when I find satisfaction in The One, Who made me, I rest at Home.

I too, feel at peace when I find satisfaction with Him. I rest in His arms and that's home to me.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest" and for helping me celebrate my 1 year anniversary. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


"🥉 Third place "


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Review of Miracles  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Miracles" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow of your piece moves smoothly throughout your piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I can relate to your piece in so many ways. I just had a heart cath and stent done last week. So having experienced that feeling of being closer to God is eye opening to most. You used the prompt at the end closing your piece off perfectly.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

But His touch is life eternal.

His touch is eternal and what a touch it is. I find so much peace with just one touch from Him.


I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest" and for joining and celebrating my 1 year anniversary. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


" 🥉Third place "


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Title:


Your title "Life is Dukkha" really caught my attention.


Imagery & Emotions:


A cute little story about our accomplishments and our disappointments. Those who we try to prove ourselves to and the ones we truly don't want to disappoint. I'm sure that your readers will find a lot in common with your character. I have a few suggestions nothing serious and easy fixes.

#1: She threw the phone omit: away and heard it crash against something.

#2: You forgot your asterisk's before and after. "Wishes breed suffering, my dear. We suffer because we do not get what we want.This line is repeated. We suffer because we get what we do not want. And also, we fear to lose what we have, as I dreaded the day I would lose you to the big city."


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

"Mommy, I wish you were here—"


At one time or another after we are grown we still wish our moms are with us to smooth out our disappointments in life. No matter what!

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Review of To Plough The Sea  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Title:


Your title "To Plough the Sea" really caught my attention.


Storyline, Characters and Plot:



Imagery & Emotions:


I see a country at war with itself, brother's fighting against and together to make it a better life for their families. Like so many before them wanting to change their circumstances and finding the courage to do so. Then reaping the rewards afterwards. A bitter, but sweet story for these two brothers.

Here are the recommended changes, you will find them in red or blue. Please read carefully and make changes as you see fit. This is your work, not mine. Just making suggestions that may sound better and capture your readers and not lose them somewhere along the way. Oh, and you want to capitalize a name or place.

#1: "So that lazy bones is already up. I must really be late."

#2: "This time I'm going to get you, Mi Vida," said, removing a leftover of bread from his front teeth.

#3: "That's an instrument of freedom, brother and you can never be over freedom."

#4: But it's we, the peons, the poor who have to dirty their hands.

#5: Or what the I would not use this word at all, it has too many meanings and is out of context here. omit ploughing priests tell you.

#6: This asshole of a shack and your loser's pride!"

#7: And you, and all those who lick his boots like they're coated in honey and not in donkey s***, are going to thank us for that!"

#8: Alejandro lowered his eyes and met the gaze, the dark gaze of a muzzle.

#9: Don't you get it? I'm dead to you, Don Batista, God or whatever else greedy leeches are sucking the soul out of the people in the name of the authority.

#10: He made out the shape of the master house, still surrounded by rows of corn like a General surveying a battlefield.

#11: Simon stuck his face into the other mans, looking directly into his eyes.

#12: the man's features melted like wax. "Wait, General? General La Higuera?"

#13: The guard's lips sprouted in a smile "It's me, General.

#14: "I could ask you the same, General."

#15: The guard scratched his chin. "I work for Don Alejandro, General.

#16: "Here we are, General.

#17: Alejandro smirked, pouring Simon a shot of Whiskey, followed by another for himself.

#18: A sad expression surfaced on his brother's face as he shook the bottle, "By then all the food had been eaten, all the wine was drunk.

#19: Many left in search of other places to graze.

#20: You were at least right about one thing: we didn't need him as a master.

#21: Just omit: like as there are new masters occupying the ministries in the capital.

#22: Only you still don't get it and that's why you ended up in jail."

#23: Simon bite his hand, trying to stop it from reaching his weapon.

#24: But you can't even imagine how many omit: ploughing lawyers I can afford to hire!"

#25: Simon clenched his fists on his thighs.

#26: He felt a silhouette under the fabric, his old knife.

#27: He just needed one second, a quick slit and his brother's derision would drown in a gurgle of blood.


I know that there are a lot of changes here. You can use them or not, it is just my opinion. This is your work and you know the meaning and use of your words. Not everyone thinks the same. I think in #5 and #15 you are looking for f**king instead of ploughing that is the correct word that is used in English. Sorry, I don't like using such words myself. So, if you need the full word than I will send it in an email to you. So, it is private. I have always been told if you use such words you get one's attention and in this case of your story that is the word that you are looking to use. In the English language ploughing: means plowing up the earth I also think it means the same in Italian. You have written a great story here. The life and times of those who have endured a revolution.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

"Who are you? Raise just a single finger on her, and I'll gut you like a pig!"

A mother's love, you can't beat the protectiveness over her children. I'm glad to see that you added this into your story.



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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Title:


Your title "Shadows of Tomorrow" really caught my attention.


Storyline, Characters and Plot:


Through the years there has always been speculation of what will and or can happen after we humans destroy the world. Your characters were described explicitly so your readers could visualize them, making them very strong characters. Your plot was very strong, giving them an opportunity to disguise that they were ghost at first. Well done.


Imagery & Emotions:


I love the angle that you brought to the story, ghost. Describing your characters brings the reader into your story making them feel like they are amongst the story as it unfolds. The more "Show vs Tell" is in your story the more the reader feels as if it was real. You described a very real feeling story. I felt as if I was sitting at the theater watching a play about them. A teenager who was lost in her youth, because of stupid acts of another. She is right we are at the mercy of another one's whim or hands. That is what is sad about the whole thing. Excellent job! I do have a few errors not many, easy fixes, mostly grammar, and commas. I have an app on my laptop that helps me with grammar errors and such. Comes in handy, except when it does allow for exceptions to the rule, so I ignore them. As you will see in my suggestions. There are 7, but only 4 to be exact. I will put them in order as they appear in your story and my suggestions.

#1: West,- no comma needed
#2: same- the add it to make - the same
#3: air,- no comma needed
#4: like like- the exception to the rule, leave as is
#5: a searing- no a is needed
#6: tribe- exception to the rule, leave as is
#7: You see?- the exception to the rule, My app tells me to add Do to it. Having it read in proper English Do you see? I myself prefer You see?

My app is going crazy trying to correct my error's now.... lol I'm glad I have an ignore button. I hope this helps you out, it always helps to have a second pair of eyes or more. Everyone has their own opinion. So that in mind it is your story and you should do as you feel fit to do. Excellent story and I love the characters.




My Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

The pilot clapped frantically "Ah, ah, well done Professor! You see? You can crack a joke if you want!"

I love that you and some humor into your story, makes the reader compassionate for the lost.

I want to thank you for giving me the opportunity to read and review your stories, it was and is a delight to read them. I'm glad they were gifted to you. It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:


Your title "The Reason we Praise" really caught my attention and I'm eager to see how it is related to the prompt.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moves smoothly throughout your piece giving it perfect rhythm and flow.


Imagery & Emotions:


You painted a picture for your readers to see what it's all about. Praising Him for what He went through for us. It is strange, you just don't realize it until one day your soul fills up with that love He has for you. And it overflows, bursting the dam from within. You said it well my friend. Great job.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

He bore our shame to give us grace
And I can’t help but stand amazed
He’s filled my heart, full of His praise


What an awesome feeling when your heart and soul burst with His full praise.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. I wanted to 🎉 CONGRATULATE 🎉 you for being our March's "3rd Place Winner."


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:


Your title "Worthy To Be Praised" really caught my attention and I was eager to see how it related to the prompt.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow moved smoothly throughout your piece. Painting your readers a story of a soldier.


Imagery & Emotions:


I pictured a soldier who was lost and had doubts of this world that he protects. When you finally gave Him your praise it changed your life. I know this is heart felt and from the soul. I'm sure that everyone that has been there wether soldier or not knows what you wrote is true. Well done!

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

With heart full of praise I've sung for You,

Everyday I sing praises to our Lord Father, our Papa, for whatever name you give Him. He knows the love you give through your praises.

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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "The Death of a Mother" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of this piece moves effortlessly throughout your piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow.



Imagery & Emotions:


Your piece brought back so many memories of my mother's death. My heart goes out to you if you have written this about yours. I can see it is written from the heart, the pain of losing her is heartbreaking. I went through everything you wrote. Your details about the pain, questions, doubt I had experienced also. And the end I have experienced as well. I know that she is in Heaven waiting for me. I found this well written, I hated to say anything about the stanza, but I wanted you to know the truth about it. I hope that you forgive me. You spoke a heartfelt message and it was loud and clear to me. Great job.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

The grief, the regret,
Self-pity, depression
Leads one to seek answers
In wisdom and lore
In Jesus, the answers are solid
And sure.


Afterwards, I always asked why for the longest time and thought that I would never get an answer to that heartache that I had from my loss. I totally understand what you have said here. I believe that your readers will also. Keep up the great work, hope to see you again.

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Review of I Am the Lord  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "I Am the Lord" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow moves smoothly throughout this piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow.



Imagery & Emotions:


As I read your piece I imagine young David growing into a man who becomes the King of a great nation. Who chooses to go with his earthly desires and now wishes he didn't have to suffer the consequences of his actions. I bring that forth in your piece, making us understand there are consequences for what we choose in our life's. You also showed that God gave him Mercy because David was a man after God's heart. This is written very well, I did find one error Yoi, easy fix a small error. Great job in displaying "I Am the Lord."


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Again, the whisper came. Did you expect to

Choose your grief? You invited these

Consequences—and knew you would

See sorrow. Again you regret your choice.


We never want to pay for our sins, but ultimately we do. Consequences are far worse than the sin itself. That's why it's better to stop and listen to the inner you. God always tells us when it's right or wrong.

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for entry "I Hope
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "I Hope" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves smoothly throughout your piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a girl in pain from the damage of someone in her life. The heartbreak of a relationship or maybe a stranger that stole something precious from her. Her forgiving and moving forward with her life is a very courageous thing for her to do. We as women need to find that Warrior within ourselves to battle those who are stronger than we. But, you have to remember we are strong because He gives us that strength within us. I have battled a many a fight from those who have hurt me. I'm a Warrior a child of God. I found this coming from within your soul. We have a tendency to write from there when it comes to matters of our Heavenly Father. I believe that He wants us to humble and give our testimony to others. To let them know you aren't alone. Outstanding job on showing the details of your piece. I do have one suggestion in this sentence, "I put my miseries in His hands and forgave he that hurt me and tried to steal my life. Try it with those see if that sounds better to you. It might make it flow smoother. And maybe change, "explain why he hurt people" to hurts people.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

He was with me during my time of need.


There is one thing that I find that He will never leave you. We are the idiots that walk away. Sorry, but we are. I'm glad that He stays true to us no matter what we do. Stay true to Him because He will never walk away from us. He is our safety net in life.

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Review of By Grace To Faith  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "By Grace To Faith" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow of this piece moves perfectly throughout this piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


This is a very strong piece. I know that you dug deep within yourself. It was as if you bore everything out in this piece. Wow, is what I say about the details that you showed us in this piece. Fantastic job, I found no errors or distractions.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

“All you who hope in the Lord,
“Through you His might is poured,
“His Spirit shall be your sword,
“To make you better than before.”


His spirit shall be your sword, that is a Mighty sword of the Lord. I as a Warrior and child of God, I wheld my sword to defeat the enemy.


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Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Be of good courage" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moved freely throughout this piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I see a man full of burden, sorrow, pain, and torture. You brought this out in this piece. Giving hope to those who have been in seasons of despair. Your details were described in each stanza throughout, excellent job. There are a couple of changes I might suggest. The wonderful psalm flashed on my mind. Change to in. It should make it flow even better.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

I know He ever walks by my side,
His eyes full of mercy and sympathy,


And what a great feeling it is to have Him walk with us. Even no matter what we do or say. His love is the Greatest love of all.


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Review of Virtue  
Review by LegendaryMasK❤
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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🎊 Happy 🥂 Anniversary 🎊

Here at WdC and may you have many more. What better way to celebrate then to give you a anniversary review.


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Title:


Your title "Virtue" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moves smoothly from beginning to end with rhythm. Making this a very delightful piece to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


Upon finding each stanza with a word and a defined meaning was excellently executed. I found each one to give details from within your meaning of each word. You did excellent with your first free form. That is what I am most comfortable with writing. I find this well written and I found no distractions.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Humility
Modesty and humility must be applied
To avoid falling victim to your own pride
Don't let the worst of sins have its druthers
Think of yourself less often than others


You have an excellent point of view, too bad there isn't a lot of people that humble themselves. You did an excellent job in explaining what humility means to you.

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