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Your title "Tears For Two" really caught my attention.




Your storyline and plot was excuted very well in this piece. Telling everyone just how important these two were in your life. How you became inseparably and enjoyed each other's company. Just wondering about their names?



I'm sure that other's that read your piece has had the same feelings about their loyal and without a doubt TENNIS SHOES. Wait your tennis shoes! Ok you totally had me going about two dear friends of yours that you buried in the back yard no doubt. I was almost on the verge of calling the police.



My favorite line is:

“Farewell, my beloved tennis shoes. May your soles rest in peace.”
Ok, I do have to say, when you find a pair that is so comfortable and last forever it is very hard to say goodbye to them. I had a friend who no doubt felt the same way with his. He even went as far as to wrapping rubber bands around the toes, because they were coming apart at the sole and toe. Then eventually he duct taped them together. No kidding, but he is cheap also...lol Makes things last until there is NO MORE LIFE IN THEM. Yes, I guess I can call him a serial killer also.
I want to thank you for sharing this delightful piece of yours. I really enjoyed reading it and laughing at the marvelous ending. You really had me going. Happy Anniversary my friend 🤗💞🤗

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Your title "Rabbits and Rockets" really caught my attention.




I do have to say that I would've never guessed Rabbits and Rockets was about something totally different. I love stories about children and their outlook on life and yes, even their parents.



Sometimes I think that children wonder what God was thinking when He gave them to us...lol. They are so quick witted and smart to come up with some of the things that come out of their mouths. I can relate to your story so much.



My favorite line is:


"So," he asked indignantly, "Just exactly WHAT COLOR are you trying to turn ME?"
Oh man, I busted out laughing out loud, when I read this part. I could just imagine you trying not to laugh. I love it, this has made my day.

I want to tell you thank you for sharing this precious moment with your son. I really enjoyed reading it tonight.

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Your title "Greed" really caught my attention.




It is a ancient scenario throughout history which always makes a great storyline and plot. Your characters are like so many throughout history. The only thing they think about is what others can do for them and the things that they possess and the things they think they need. Greed a deadly sin for sure.



In my short time, I've seen so many families suffer the greed of others within their family. Waiting for those loved ones to die so they can see what they get. I've seen and heard a families fighting over things. Your story is like so many others, but with the twist.



My favorite line is:

"Ever hear the expression, 'You can't take it with you?' Well, David Rivers did."
I love it, they deserved everything they didn't get. I'm going to assume that David had the bookies and loan sharks after him and death did part him from this world. For the other two, no one came around them anymore and they died a lonely life.

I want to thank you for sharing this piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it today.

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Your title "Loneliness" really caught my attention. So, I had to see what your outlook on it was.




Although I find this more like an entry into a journal or a dairy. The person writing is telling their most inner thoughts about loneliness.




You gave great details of your feeling's at the time. Making your reader's feel that raw emotion that is within oneself. I related to your piece with great emotion.



My favorite line is:

Being alone and feeling loneliness are two different things.
This statement is so true, but I found alot of truth to the whole piece. It was hard to decide my favorite line. This was a wonderful piece that you wrote.

I want to thank you for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Your title "Are Those Stories True? really caught my attention.




I love stories that give us more depth on the people from the Bible. The stories and characters from the Bible are always an excellent choice.



I love that you choose Esther to write about. I sometimes wonder what happens during the days in between the stories detailed in the Bible. This piece of yours give a little glimpse of what just might of happened with her growing up.


My favorite line is:

"I know. But here I am."
You gave such detail that it took me there as if I was sitting in the room watching them. Admiring the love these to had for each other. Beautifully written and I am delighted to have read it.
I want to thank you for sharing such a pleasant piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Your title "As You Are Awake" really caught my attention. Ok, now I definitely have to take a look.




The beginning started out with your character fleeing from a scene, leaving it open ended. For you to wonder if the detective was dead or not. Wise choice I believe. You kept the reader consistently wondering what his next move was going to be. You have strong characters, giving details of each. Great job.



Now, here it goes it was if I was there witnessing every move that the Shadow did. Myself when he went with Franklin I thought he was going to turn his life around. Yeah I'm a girl that thinks there is good in everyone. Except this or any other serial killer. As he stuck the knife in I even cringed and closed my eyes.



My favorite line is:

Dearest Logan...
Simple, this says it all. Detective was still alive! Hmmm... nice touch if I don't say so myself. You had me going right up to the end. The only thing I really hated seeing Franklin die. But he kept bad company, even for a trusting old man.

Thank you for sharing this riveting story about trust, and betrayal. I really enjoyed reading it.

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