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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Worthy To Be Praised" really caught my attention and I was eager to see how it related to the prompt.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow moved smoothly throughout your piece. Painting your readers a story of a soldier.


Imagery & Emotions:


I pictured a soldier who was lost and had doubts of this world that he protects. When you finally gave Him your praise it changed your life. I know this is heart felt and from the soul. I'm sure that everyone that has been there wether soldier or not knows what you wrote is true. Well done!

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

With heart full of praise I've sung for You,

Everyday I sing praises to our Lord Father, our Papa, for whatever name you give Him. He knows the love you give through your praises.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. I wanted to 🎉 CONGRATULATE 🎉 you for being our March's 2nd place Winner.


"2nd Place 🥇 Winner"


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "The Death of a Mother" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of this piece moves effortlessly throughout your piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow.



Imagery & Emotions:


Your piece brought back so many memories of my mother's death. My heart goes out to you if you have written this about yours. I can see it is written from the heart, the pain of losing her is heartbreaking. I went through everything you wrote. Your details about the pain, questions, doubt I had experienced also. And the end I have experienced as well. I know that she is in Heaven waiting for me. I found this well written, I hated to say anything about the stanza, but I wanted you to know the truth about it. I hope that you forgive me. You spoke a heartfelt message and it was loud and clear to me. Great job.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

The grief, the regret,
Self-pity, depression
Leads one to seek answers
In wisdom and lore
In Jesus, the answers are solid
And sure.


Afterwards, I always asked why for the longest time and thought that I would never get an answer to that heartache that I had from my loss. I totally understand what you have said here. I believe that your readers will also. Keep up the great work, hope to see you again.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Review of I Am the Lord  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "I Am the Lord" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow moves smoothly throughout this piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow.



Imagery & Emotions:


As I read your piece I imagine young David growing into a man who becomes the King of a great nation. Who chooses to go with his earthly desires and now wishes he didn't have to suffer the consequences of his actions. I bring that forth in your piece, making us understand there are consequences for what we choose in our life's. You also showed that God gave him Mercy because David was a man after God's heart. This is written very well, I did find one error Yoi, easy fix a small error. Great job in displaying "I Am the Lord."


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Again, the whisper came. Did you expect to

Choose your grief? You invited these

Consequences—and knew you would

See sorrow. Again you regret your choice.


We never want to pay for our sins, but ultimately we do. Consequences are far worse than the sin itself. That's why it's better to stop and listen to the inner you. God always tells us when it's right or wrong.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Review of By Grace To Faith  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "By Grace To Faith" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow of this piece moves perfectly throughout this piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


This is a very strong piece. I know that you dug deep within yourself. It was as if you bore everything out in this piece. Wow, is what I say about the details that you showed us in this piece. Fantastic job, I found no errors or distractions.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

“All you who hope in the Lord,
“Through you His might is poured,
“His Spirit shall be your sword,
“To make you better than before.”


His spirit shall be your sword, that is a Mighty sword of the Lord. I as a Warrior and child of God, I wheld my sword to defeat the enemy.


I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


"3rd🥉Place Winner"


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Review of Virtue  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It gives me great pleasure to wish you a

🎊 Happy 🥂 Anniversary 🎊

Here at WdC and may you have many more. What better way to celebrate then to give you a anniversary review.


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February ♥️ Reviews


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Title:


Your title "Virtue" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moves smoothly from beginning to end with rhythm. Making this a very delightful piece to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


Upon finding each stanza with a word and a defined meaning was excellently executed. I found each one to give details from within your meaning of each word. You did excellent with your first free form. That is what I am most comfortable with writing. I find this well written and I found no distractions.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Humility
Modesty and humility must be applied
To avoid falling victim to your own pride
Don't let the worst of sins have its druthers
Think of yourself less often than others


You have an excellent point of view, too bad there isn't a lot of people that humble themselves. You did an excellent job in explaining what humility means to you.

Thank you for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed reading it tonight. I want to wish you a very Happy ♥️ Anniversary 🥂 here at WdC may you have many years.

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Review of Literacy  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It gives me great pleasure to wish you a

🎊 Happy 🥂 Anniversary 🎊

Here at WdC and may you have many more. What better way to celebrate then to give you a anniversary review.


Disclaimer:

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February ♥️ Reviews


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Title:


Your title "Literacy" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


I find this piece has a perfect flow to it making the rhythm easily read.

Imagery & Emotions:


Your peace has such great detail to it.I find a girl setting in the library reading to her heart's content. The books of knowledge and us as writers have so much knowledge within us. It just burst out, because we want to share it. You hit right on with your piece Excellent writing.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Indulging in a secret world to tell
everyone your fantasy.


This is every writers fantasy, couldn't have said it any better.

Thank you for sharing this delightful piece of yours. I really enjoyed reading it tonight. Happy ♥️ Anniversary 🥂

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "A BROKEN VALENTINE" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves smoothly from beginning to end with each stanza. I love the rhyme you have, to me most Valentine's poems do rhyme.


Imagery & Emotions:


Oh dear me, a "Dear John Valentine." Sometimes I think the break up before Valentine's is on purpose these days. But, who knows. This is very sad for the guy, I do think he is better off without her. We all have been here once or twice, maybe more then some. Very well written, good luck in the contest, I entered last year. Maybe next year, I will again.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

He saw a pretty girl right here today
and “Be my Valentine I heard him say”


I'm so glad that he didn't give up on love. There is always hope and someone for everyone.


I want to say thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading it tonight. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


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Title:


Your title "A BROKEN VALENTINE" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:





Imagery & Emotions:





Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

He saw a pretty girl right here today
and “Be my Valentine I heard him say”





Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading

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Review of For My Valentine  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have just been SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Reviewed today.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "For My Valentine" is perfect for this piece, thank you for suggesting I read it.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece is so smooth and I found no distractions to stop me from reading it.


Imagery & Emotions:


I believe that I've been down this road...lol It is wonderful memories to look back on, a love that you have to ask "What if I had took the other path?" Sometimes we all do. You brought back a picture of a past love that was not forgotten for your readers and that's what makes this a great piece. A beautiful work of art.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Inside us each brewed a loving memory,
Of unbidden passion shared so briefly.


Some mighty strong feelings here, ones that only are shared by the one true love of ours. I wouldn't know what I would do if I ever saw him again. I do know that my heart still aches for his love. Another time perhaps!


I want to thank you for sharing this with me. I really enjoyed reading it today. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day, Jim.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "A smile to remember" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


It makes it so easy to read when the rhythm and flow moves smoothly and it does in this piece. A couple of commas caught my attention but an easy fix.


Imagery & Emotions:


It's amazing how just a smile can open up ones heart. It radiates love from within. What a lovely piece that you have written.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:


It stole my heart ,forever.


Sometimes that's all it takes to open up your heart, a smile, a look of sheer love from within that can steal another's heart.


Thank you for sharing such a precious look at love. I enjoyed reading it today. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day.

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Review of Heart?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "Heart?" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow move throughout your piece making it easy to follow and enjoy to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


A broken heart, that never gives up hope to find true love. Some of us search forever and some are so blessed to find their true love. You showed us both sides to love in this piece, Amazing job!


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

So, I will wear it proudly
Upon my sleeve it rests
A symbol to Eternity
That I will seek and quest!


Never give up on hope for true love. I'm still searching and when God gives us that timing. Look out world because this man will know that I love him and no other...lol


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day, Elby.

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Review of Somewhere He  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title " Somewhere He" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Beautiful rhythm and flow to this piece. Making this a delight to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


Oh, yes, this is every girls dream. I'm guilty of this very same thing. Thank you for putting it into words. I love that you did a his and hers version. Very unique and we'll written.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:


Oh, I am here and waiting
Through sun and wind swept day
Dreaming he will find me
To whisk my heart away

Every girls Shining Knight in Armor, words that whisk our hearts and minds away. A love like no other.


Thank you for sharing these beautiful pieces with us. I really enjoyed reading them today. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day, Elby.

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Review of Contentment  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "Contentment" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece has perfect combination of rhythm and flow. With no distractions to take away from this beautiful piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a man holding his love of his life. Admiring her as she sleeps, never to love another so dear. You have given me inspiration to write another. That is why we do what we do to inspire others to show others love and the meaning from within ones soul. Amazing piece that you have written here.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

In my arms she lies so quiet
With a warmth for only me!


What sweet memories and words this shows me. Contentment is such a lovely word. Perfect title for this piece. This is one of my favs now.


Thank you for sharing this beautiful memory with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "Eighteen Yellow Roses" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm of your piece flows smoothly with ease from start to finish.


Imagery & Emotions:


A very sad story you have showed us here. I realize that she is died and he is telling her how much that he loved her. A bitter sweet love. Well written and your show vs tell is excellent.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Darling, I miss you. My love is always with you.
Just like our love, these will always last.


What a beautiful moment and what a way he showed her his love. Making my cry just thinking of it. That's what you're supposed to do, bring your character to life for your readers. Excellent job.


I want to thank you for sharing your piece with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day.

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Review of Broken Pieces  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️ Valentine's♥️ Review today.


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Title:


Your title "Broken Pieces" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece flows smoothly and the rhythm is perfectly written.


Imagery & Emotions:


The love of God shines through in your piece. What a beautiful picture you have painted of His unconditional love and compassion.This is well written and I feel the love from within your soul. Amazing job.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

I’ll carry you when you can’t stand.
I’ll be your guiding, loving hand.
I’ll be your rock in the sinking sand.
Goodness and prosperity for you I have planned.

I had to choose this whole stanza, so beautiful.


I want to thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


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Title:


Your title "Every Day is Valentine's" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves smoothly from beginning to end.


Imagery & Emotions:


I missed this the first time I looked at your portfolio, but I'm so glad that I caught it on my way out. This a such a delightful piece. You made me laugh and wish that I was the lucky girl that caught your heart. There is lots of humor in this piece. I love that. Wonderful job.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Yes, even when you're "Bratty"


I couldn't help but laugh. I love it! ♥️


I want to say thank you for sharing your beautiful insight to love, the way it should be. I enjoyed reading it tonight. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


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Title:


Your title "Tulips Today" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves smoothly without any distractions to it. Making it a delight to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a banquet of red tulips, maybe even yellow ones. I love tulips, but I love any kind of flower. Tulips are one of the first flowers to bloom making it a favorite. I can see a man handing them out making some little old lady happy and young ones wondering what does he want? What a delightful piece. Well written, giving me a beautiful piece to read.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

I simply said “It is Valentines”
Teardrops streaming from my eye

What a nice touch to your piece.


I want to thank you for sharing your wonderful piece with us. I enjoyed reading it tonight. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day.

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Review of My Love My All  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


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Title:


Your title "My Love My All" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves freely from one stanza to the next.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a man so full of love that he can't think of nothing else, but the love that is inside himself. What a beautiful way to tell someone just how much you love them. Beautiful piece!


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

I pledge to you my everything today
I love you with all of my heart and soul
From my side may you not step dear away
If you did I may lose all my control.

There is so much emotion in these words. A very powerful love, lucky person she is.


I want to thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us. I enjoyed reading it tonight. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day Chris.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower ♥️Valentine's♥️ Review today.


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Title:


Your title "Sharing Is Caring" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece flows smoothly with perfect rhythm. Making this a delight to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


I see a man struggling with life in your piece. As you know most of us struggle with being one. Well, most people do! I see someone who wants love, companionship and all that goes with it. God put us on this planet to be together in pairs. That's why there is a mate to each living breathing creature. You did an excellent job showing it in this piece.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

It's better if there's two to share the load
or life becomes a long and lonely road.

As in together makes it all better.


I want to thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us. I enjoyed reading it tonight. Happy ♥️ Valentine's day.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It is my great pleasure to wish you a

🎆 Happy 🥂Anniversary 🎆

Here at WdC and may you have many many more. I thought while I was here I would give you an anniversary review and a SuperPower Review for Valentine's day to help you celebrate, both.


February ♥️ Reviews


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Disclaimer:


These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "A Box Full of Kisses" really caught my attention.



Storyline, plot and characters:


I love the storyline, anything with children is precious. Your characters are beautiful, a love between father and daughter is a very unique bond.

Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a little blonde blue eyed little girl wrapping this big box. With anticipation that her father opens her gift. The love that went into it so amazing. I just hated to hear that she died. But, what he did with it, was what any parent would do. You hit spot on with this loving tribute to her. What an amazing story.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:


In a very real sense, each one of us, as humans beings, have been given a gold container filled with unconditional love and kisses... from our children, family members, friends, and God. There is simply no other possession, anyone could hold, more precious than this.

I couldn't have said it any better. Beautifully said.

I want to thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. I really enjoyed reading it tonight and to start the SuperPower Review February ♥️ Raid off with yours. Happy 🥂 Anniversary Sinbad!

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Review of I had a dream.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It gives me great pleasure to wish you a a

🎊 Happy 🥂 Anniversary 🎊

Here at WdC and may you have many more. What better way to celebrate then to give you a anniversary review.


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♥️February Reviews♥️


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Title:


Your title "I had a dream" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


The flow of your piece moved with ease.

Imagery & Emotions:


I can picture laying under the stars, holding hands , listening to you breath next to me. What a beautiful night it is. The warmth of your hand, a reflection of your heart. What a beautiful picture you have given me. Excellent writing and showing others the love you have inside.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:



For that, I gave you the world.

What a beautiful statement to give someone special to you.

I want to thank you for sharing a part of you with us. I really enjoyed reading it today. Happy 🥂 Anniversary Anthony.

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Review of Ecclesia  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:


Your title "Ecclesia" really caught my attention and was prompt to look up the meaning. Which my dictionary meaning defines it as a political assembly of citizens in the definition of ancient Greece, or the church members (the collective congregation is an example of an ecclesia). Is your meaning different?


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves smoothly making it a pleasure to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


I like how you explained as one tends to part from God and eventually returns to Him finding wisdom in doing so. There are several parts that I found captivating and they stood out and captured my train of thought which kept me reading more. This piece is wonderfully written and will capture your readers from beginning to end.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

A revealing light is His glory, and uncertainty will end
As the Man sees the light, his conceit falls apart
And his knees bends low, his tongue shall declare
His praise endureth for ever.

It is amazing when the light is revealed to you, making His Glory all the sweeter.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.

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I want to say Congratulations for being our,

"🥈 2nd Place WINNER "


May you be blessed always,
Keep Writing on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It gives me great pleasure to wish you a

🎊 Happy 🥂 Anniversary and a SuperPower Review🎊

Here at WdC and may you have many more. What better way to celebrate then to give you a anniversary review.


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Title:


Your title "Lock Out the Night" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece flows smoothly with rhythm from one stanza to the next. Making this a delightful read.

Imagery & Emotions:


Your piece speaks straight from within your soul. I feel the pain from inside. Sometimes it's so hard to explain the battle within ones soul. You captured it in this piece. Beautiful job in conveying it to us.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Lock out the night from my soul, O Lord,
And let me see only Thy face.


I often speak these very words.


I want to thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it tonight.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It gives me great pleasure to wish you a

🎊 Happy 🥂 Anniversary 🎊

Here at WdC and may you have many more. What better way to celebrate then to give you a anniversary review.


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Title:


Your title "Lord, Please Guide Me" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece flows smoothly with a nice rhythm and flow.

Imagery & Emotions:


I love this it makes a short and meaningful prayer to our God Almighty. Your piece speaks volumes in a tiny frame. Sometimes, He speaks few words to us which make strong impacts on our lives. Well written and a great job.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:


God
We praise You
Please guide and bless us
So we might serve You better
Lord

I choose the whole piece, because without it all, it wouldn't be. Does that make sense to you?

I want to thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it today.

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