Your title "The Night the Bears Roamed" really caught my attention.

Your title "One Simple Interesting Fact" now as you well know I'd finally find it and it would get my attention.




I love research articles and you picked up where I left off.



Oh, those Moon Pies, such delicious, delectictable delights. The chocolate, banana ones are my favorite. I had know idea about strawberry and lemon, let alone vanilla and orange. Now, I can see me taking a bite of orange then vanilla, I would have a Dreamcycle Moon Pie ...OMGOODNESS. I grew up on them, easy for my momma to supply 5 kids for snacks.

I have found your research to be very thorough and I am very impressed with it. It is well written and informative. I had no idea all the history of a Moon Pie. Great job in telling all the facts.



My favorite line is:

One of the miners held out his hands framing the moon above, and said that they wanted it about that big.

Interesting how it became a creation from just a hand movement.

I want to thank you for sharing the facts about Moon Pies with me. I enjoyed reading about them. Now, I'm craving one ...😀

The flow of this piece is very easy to keep up with. I found no distractions to keep me from reading your piece.

Oh dear me, this reminds my when I came home from school one day, I was in my 2nd grade at the time. My mom was furious, no other way to put it. She sat me down when I began to cry. Our teacher had taught us to do just that abbreviate Christmas. I received my lesson at a very early age. I is very important not to take out Christ in Christmas. I am so grateful to her for explaining it to me.

It's important to write out the entire word, and avoid making this big mistake in life during this special time of the year.


I want to thank you for sharing this very important meaning behind why it is very important to keep Christ in Christmas. I enjoyed reading it today. Merry Christmas my dear friend and a very Happy New Year to you.

Keep Writing on!



"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 

Your title " Travel-Uppity" really caught my attention.




Surprise, surprise. It makes you really wonder just what is going on in Arthur's mind right now. A great storyline and plot to a possible solution to his future. Love the charcaters.



You sucked me right in to your story. I actually wanted to slap her senseless at midway. I just can't imagine people staying married to negative people. But, they do. Great story, awesome details. I reacted to every word you said. Your piece was written very well.



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I want to add here that I like how you emphasized on each movie title. That is my favorite pieces to your piece.



Keep Writing on!



"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 

Your title "The Candy, Man" really caught my attention.

Your title "Snakes Alive, Son!" really caught my attention.

Your title "Two Adams" really caught my attention, wondering just where you were going to lead me.

Your title "Pride" really caught my attention and showed a great example of ones pride getting in the way.

Your title "The End of Magic (Old 1999 Draft) " really caught my attention.












My favorite line is:

To have the Space Shuttle come zipping by faster than sound and knock me out of the sky.

Your title "Doves On Distant Oaks" really caught my attention, I love oak trees and doves.

Your title "One-On-One " really caught my attention.












My favorite line is:

"Next game... you're mine,... old man," his own reflection wheezed defiantly.

Your title "The Legend of Jack-O-Lantern" really caught my attention.












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He'd never be part of that pack.

Your title " " really caught my attention.












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Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading

Your title "He is Driven from Light to Darkness" this is a good strong title for your piece.

Your title "Driven" really caught my attention.