Your poem is liken to a building that is built to precision. It was made to fit the rules. It's awesome, I liked it very much. The words seemed to be carefully chosen hence painted a picture of clarity. Thumbs up!
An awesome piece. This is what the gist of good poetry should be. I do agree wholeheartedly with the stanza "
As nature abhors a vacuum.
So the world abhors aloneness." ...Even though there may not be physical presence of people among certain person/persons it's hard for one to be completely lonely in this 8-billion world and a world crammed with social media.
If you don't write anymore you can recite. Much blessings.
Such a wonderful story. Awesome writing; I had to read from start to finish as the intensity captured my interest. I would have preferred that Jacob and the Ice-maid survive so as to give continuity to the story or just merely a Part II.
Thanks for sharing though. I enjoyed it.
This is a wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it so much that I had to share it with my followers on Facebook and twitter. Wow! I would like to rewire a few heads too. Not Trump's nor Jeb's nor Hillary's but a few hard headed people. Thumbs up!
Great poetry, the stanzas are all spicy; I locked onto the stanzas as to say my life depends on them. I couldn't stop reading until the end.
That's excellent material, I can see that a book is in the making ...
Marvelous! Well written...introspect - rather sad. Impression- will lead many readers to reflection. Interpretation/ illustration - Great poem, you distill your vast knowledge into a kind of panoramic view of competitiveness. Thumbs up!!!
Frankly, I was locked on to the stanzas as if my life depended on them. Thanks for sharing.
Awesome! I was captured with suspense . I really liked the story but I would prefer an ending where the Dragon tried to catch the boy and grandpa but couldn't as it was young and couldn't move as fast. Good though.
Excellent! It would seem as if you entered an animal's mind. Yes! I do believe they laugh at us especially when we act stupid...drunk and crash.
Wow! on a more serious note, I think your poem is extraordinary. Happy holidays!
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