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Review of Earth  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An awesome piece. I concur with the theme and content. Your writing sets the stage for certain investigative and informative research as to how we could best help to maintain the good we have and improve that which is not going as well as we would like; thus in order to protect and care for mother earth.
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Review of Diamante  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Beautifully put together. Great choice of words with appropriately fitting parts of speech.Awesome!!!
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Review of To: Tolstoy  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Your poem is liken to a building that is built to precision. It was made to fit the rules. It's awesome, I liked it very much. The words seemed to be carefully chosen hence painted a picture of clarity. Thumbs up!
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Review of All the Time  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked the rhythm and the word-power. Poetry is really and truly one of the greatest tools available to create the impression of the expression of speech, the written word and sound.
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Review of Aloneness  
Rated: E | (5.0)
An awesome piece. This is what the gist of good poetry should be. I do agree wholeheartedly with the stanza "
As nature abhors a vacuum.
So the world abhors aloneness." ...Even though there may not be physical presence of people among certain person/persons it's hard for one to be completely lonely in this 8-billion world and a world crammed with social media.
If you don't write anymore you can recite. Much blessings.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing such awesome dimension of the overpowering, continuous and unenduring entity that we call 'TIME'
Awesome 2nd stanza ...I liked the rhythm and intonation...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A well put together article. The article captures the reader's attention and lends itself to further reading. I do like the writing style so I would encourage you to continue writing.
Thumbs up!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great poetry in essence of true reflective objectivity. Lovely, lovely, lovely.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a wonderful story. Awesome writing; I had to read from start to finish as the intensity captured my interest. I would have preferred that Jacob and the Ice-maid survive so as to give continuity to the story or just merely a Part II.
Thanks for sharing though. I enjoyed it.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good topic, the writer did well, well-thinking points, worth reading. Thanks for sharing.
(note: Every prose can be edited; there is no writing that is foolproof.)
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Review of Inside His Mind  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it so much that I had to share it with my followers on Facebook and twitter. Wow! I would like to rewire a few heads too. Not Trump's nor Jeb's nor Hillary's but a few hard headed people. Thumbs up!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Marvelous! This is a wonderful poem. I liked it.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
With this new interface I don't know how to go about to edit an item. Can someone tell me how please?
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Such wonderful message, I find substance in the poem as it leads to reflection and enlightenment.
Good work and thanks a lot for sharing.

PS: I think that if you shorten line #6 a bit then you would create a bit more balance. Good work though!
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Review of The Messiah  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful poem. It has a lovely rhythm and it rhymes well too.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful account of our Lord and Savior.
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Review of That woman.  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is excellent writing. I liked the story form ...may be the untold story of many women.
Great job!!!
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Review of Stay  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem. It has a wonderful rhythm to it. Great!
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Review of Thinking of You  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a wonderful poem, heartfelt and touching. Awesome! Great work!
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Review of Intrepid Roses  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poetry, the stanzas are all spicy; I locked onto the stanzas as to say my life depends on them. I couldn't stop reading until the end.
That's excellent material, I can see that a book is in the making ...
Thumbs up!!!
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Review of WAR  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
There may be good reason(s) for a war but war is against the nature of man. I like the way you use the stakeholders, such an edifying poem. Good job!!!
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Review of A Conversation  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely, excellent writing style. Us readers are like diners we crave for good food; certainly this is good food for our brains. Good job!!!!!



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Review of Slowly  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Marvelous! Well written...introspect - rather sad. Impression- will lead many readers to reflection. Interpretation/ illustration - Great poem, you distill your vast knowledge into a kind of panoramic view of competitiveness. Thumbs up!!!
Frankly, I was locked on to the stanzas as if my life depended on them. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Poems  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely, lovely, lovely ...wonderful poems. Great!!!!
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Review of The Egg  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Awesome! I was captured with suspense . I really liked the story but I would prefer an ending where the Dragon tried to catch the boy and grandpa but couldn't as it was young and couldn't move as fast. Good though.
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Review of The Rose  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderful! I loved it. Good imagery, good work.
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