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Review of Crux of Madness  
Review by J.P. Fischer
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to inspire writers for 50 years. Great story, loved the ending.
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Review of The Young Prince  
Review by J.P. Fischer
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very good story, I love a bit of traditional fantasy! MY only complaint is that people seem to think that speaking without contractions and 's equals fantasy, or medieval. While it does to an extent, I think it can make characters come across as boring or uncaring. Other than that, it was a great story. No errors from what I can tell (though the section about the Seven Deadly Sins seemed awkwardly written) and kept me hooked from start to finish! Great job!
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