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Review of Hope  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (2.5)
its very simple, but not in a too positive way. i feel very detactched to this poem, like if words had mass, these would have fallen harder than lead. i feel it could have great potential though. it just needs some work
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Review by confused
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
aww, this is adorable!!! im soo glad that there are still people who are not afraid to write about jesus.
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Review of Seabreeze  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (4.0)
super cute!!!
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Review of My Angel  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (4.0)
this is truly lovely. i adore it!
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Review of Uncommon choice  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (4.0)
everyone feels like an outsider at some point. you just have to jump in, and become apart of the art.
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Review of Will you help me?  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (3.5)
very...sporadic?? i like it!
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Review of Frustration  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (3.0)
although it is very mysterious, i can see no real plot in it. it has great potential though. i enjoyed reading it.
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Review of RRRIIIPPP!!!  
Review by confused
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i swear on all that is holy and pure i will always listen to my mother from now on!!! oh my gosh! lolZ. great story, i really enjoyed it.
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Review by confused
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is very aggressive. i sense that you didnt have a good relationship with your father? if i am wrong, i apologize, that is just the vibe i get.
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Review of Love Relationship  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (3.0)
i feel it has great potential, but it wavers back in forth from friendship to romance rockily. i feel there should be a smoother transition if this is intended, but otherwise good job!
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Review of lonely roads  
Review by confused
Rated: E | (4.0)
i LOVE the imagery. i felt like i was there, feeling the soft mountain breeze, inhaling the heady scent of autumn. this poem it truly beautiful.
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